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Reviews for Summer After Year Six.

By : madlodger

From OhZombiee on September 30, 2008
Ah, I love it. Great idea and plot, and beautifully written. (:

As in reply to your review on my idea, I would like to thank you very much, as it was very helpful.
After Reading your work, I was wondering if you'd be interested in helping beta the story, because I'm sure that at some point or another I'd accidentally ooc someone.
If you're not too busy and interested in doing so, please email me at my_ill_intentions@yahoo.com
I'll be asking a few other authors that have written stories that I love and inspired me, as well as the writing style I like.
If you're not interested, it's okay, and thank you for your help already.
Oh! And just to clarifly, it won't be one of those 'oh he's so hot, I've loved him for so long we have sex once and stay together forever' stories, I've read too many lately, and it just happens too fast for me. There will be a little struggle and turmoil, you know?

Top!Draco is my fave, haha.
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From ANON - rainbow00 on May 25, 2008
I really like this story and I can't wait till draco and harry start interacting :)
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From amazingZ on May 24, 2008
maybe instead of editing it to move your chapter to the first page, you should actually update to give your readers something to read.
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From ANON - sweettee on April 21, 2008
I hope are will be okay and I hope he get's well
soon. I hope those nurses get busted and loose
their job's. please up date soon.
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From Aeris on May 01, 2007
awww, poor harry. lemme know when you update ^^
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From madlodger on March 04, 2007
Sarah - Thank you! I did aim for a good plot, but wasn't sure if I could actually pull it off. Writing a fic is so different from reading a fic, it's bizzare and is taking over my life, LOL.

I do have a permanent Beta, Slashy Snitch, who is a popular fic writer on AFF. But I am always willing to discuss fics with people and use extra help:)
Do you know what would be totally cool? If a person with British English as a first language would read through and point out some blaring mistakes. I am writing this fic in poor American English and really wonder what people think about it. Having a British Editor to take a look would be like having a God decending from the sky and talking to you. (How likely is that to happen, hehe?)

I am going to drop you an e-mail and tell more about that Hex Files deal.
School comes first, no doubt; need to ace those evil tests!

madlodger
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From ANON - Sarah on March 03, 2007
since my e-mail is hidden it's fallenangel9969@aim.com
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From ANON - Sarah on March 03, 2007
Your story is interesting and so far I love it! I've read a few other stories that are similar, but their plots are not that strong. Keep up the good work and it you ever need a beta i would glady offer some help, pardoning my classes at my university. Can't wait for the next update!
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From madlodger on February 26, 2007
MORE ANSWERS:
Kitsuneluvr - Thank you so much. I really appreciate that comment about 'well written fanfiction':) I didn't beleive that it was that well written, because it had too many mistakes to be accepted at Hex Files:( At least I can post it here!
Next chapter is about Draco, it's coming along slowly but surely, hang on, we'll get there.

Zuka - Well, this story is pretty sad, it's a dark love story, at least in my mind. Things will get worse before becoming better, hehe.

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From ANON - Kitsuneluvr on February 25, 2007
This story is soooo good! It's hard to find well written fanfiction with good attention to detail these days and you have pulled it off. I can't wait to find out more about Draco and I hope that something interesting happens to Harry. I can tell this is going to be a very interesting story and it already seems incredibly original. I can't wait until the next chapter! Please update soon!!!
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From madlodger on February 18, 2007
MORE ANSWERS TO CHAPTER 3 REVIEWERS:
dark_samira - Wow, thank you so much! It will come to the 'good part' (or disturbing part) for sure. I can't write 'good parts' only, have to have a plot development first. I think that smut is hotter with the plot, LOL. We'll get there:)

It's funny that you mention 'doing a fanfic about fanfic' thing; I do it all the time. In fact, this entire story is just that, It takes off right where the book six had ended. I want the book seven so badly:)

You are welcome to write any story based on mine, why not. It might be even better than mine, since I have no writing experience whatsoever.

I won't update soon, but chapter four has been started already and parts of five and almost all of six had been written.

teeta - It's perfectly fine, discussions are welcome on this board:) I don't obsess about reviews and post answers to them on the same board as well.

I've seen some MVs amd small clips of Gundam Wing on yuotube, but didn't make it to the fandom itself, it was always HP and, later, Original work. I've read Snarry a lot around two years ago and did more of Drarry since then.

"Green eyes sublime" has been rec'd quite a lot, I always liked that title. A thing that put me off a bit was the fact that Harry was a cutter. This just doesn't click for me for some reason. Being covered in battle scars is fine, but selfinflicted... No. The fic is really good otherwize. "The Pandora Complex" by Nimori is a blast, I might of read "Severus' very bad day", title sounds familiar, but can't quite put my finger on it. Havn't read others:(

I like darker Snape, 'Coils of Gold' is a good example. "The Death of a Soul", (AFF) is like that, hurt/no comfort accepted concept is so in character for Harry. I even left a review about that.

There ARE Snarry fans out there. On JG's journal all people who left reviews are for sure, hehe. They do like Cambiare:D

I would like to talk about "Maturare", yep. As for being 'beyond your reach', well, you can't throw things at me, but my e-mail is in my profile, you are welcome to use it:) Don't have anything mysterious to report, just an ordinary person in the ordinary town, clicking away on an ordinary keyboard... As for gender thingy, well, beings on my planet reproduce by selfpollination, so it's not really an issue... I'm kidding, hehe! It's really cloning:)

Why don't I iust e-mail that 'Coils of Gold' link to you? See how that goes.

madlodger
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From ANON - teeta on February 16, 2007
Hello again,

I know I have reviewed the third chapter but I am using your review board as the discussion one now. Well, you said I was welcome to it so ...

I know what you mean, saying Harry Potter fandom is your first love. For me it was in fact Gundam Wing - and the funny thing is I have never seen the series, but I loved fanfiction nonetheless. As to HP ... well, I couldn't make myself read it at first. But there was this story, Snarry in fact that I loved from the very beginning, though I started to read it to see how sick it was. And it wasn't! It was simply great. So I got terribly hooked on Snarry from that story on. The title was "A stitch in time" I believe ... Have you ever read it?

Unfortunately, I didn't read "Coils of Gold" ... do you happen to know where I can find it? I would like to give it a try. And what about you reading the story "Light on the dark side of me"? It happens to be my second favorite Snarry. And it was posted here, on AFF so if you didn't read it, you can find it here. Um, what else do I remember? Let me check my HP Snarry Archive of DOOM ...

So ... you do like angst ... hm ... there is this brilliant story, "I'm already gone" by redfox131, with two endings, one happy and one heartbreaking, then "In this world for you" by SnapesFavorite, ongoing still, and "Green eyes sublime" by Spirit. If you haven't read that last one, I highly recommend it. It's so dark and has the best scene of defeating Voldemort I have ever read. Oh, and "Side effects" by catsncritters, on hold though and for quite some time ...

But if you would like to read something lighter ... and naughtier ... have you read "Popkins" by Becca and Tinkering? It made me laugh so hard, you shpould try if you haven't. And "The Pandora Complex" by Nimori. Or "Veritas vos liberabit" by StarryGazer. Or "Severus' very bad day" by juxtaposed. Oh, this one is pure crack!

Um, so that would be it for now. Probably you have read most of those stories, they are by the best HP writers out there so ... BUT I'm so excited that I have found someone to talk to about my HP fixation! Starnge but with so may Snarry fans out there I haven't come across even one. You're the first person who said they like Snarry ... And "Cambiare".

Speaking about "Maturare" - yes, I also think it will be posted one chapter at a time. All the good things come in small packages, unfortunately. I would be very happy if we could talk about it when it is posted but ... you are beyond my reach. You know, you're the most mysterious person I "know" - I don't even know if you're a man or a woman. If YOU want ... could you contact me? My address is in my writer's panel, so if you happen to have some spare time (I know, RL is very busy for you, as it is for me) ...

Ok, I'm off, I have rambled on and shamelessly demanded you to contact me ... *blushes with shame* but don't feel obliged to do so, I wouldn't like to put you into uncomfortable position ... See you soon, either in another review or maybe in my response. Oh, I will be checking this board and your not so little "Golden Nuggets" project. Um, so ... see you!

teeta
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From cerichan on February 16, 2007
this is becoming one of my favourite fics already.
I confess I'd like for it to come quickly to the good part since so far is a bit depressing on Harry's side and nothing much happended, but I know that it's important to put down some ground explanations of the situation they're in, so don't take my comment as a rebuke, it is not.
It's just my non-existent patience that is speaking ^^
Yesterday night I went to bed thinking about how it could keep going, it was like doing a fanfic about your fanfic, LOL.
(I won't do it, don't worry, even because I doubt it'll be half as good as yours).
I hope you'll update soon
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From madlodger on February 16, 2007
ANSWERS TO CHAPTER 3 REVIEWERS:
It would be nice if AFF allowed authors to reply to individual reviews, like Forever Fandom., where this story is posted also. All of those reviews are getting answered in less than two days because of it.

kanaro - Yep, it had to happen. Sorry. As for making Draco to give him a hug... well... beware of what you wish for, hehe.

Slashy Snitch - Thank you! And I'll do it again, still can't beleive that people would do something like that. You handled it so well, loved those e-mails you sent me.
It's going to be a while before the next chapter, but it's coming for sure:)

smellysocks - Cherry pie I've got, haha! I want 'infinite internets' very badly, though. Just imagine, I would become a part of the 'inin' crowd.

I just finished reading that Parody you've posted and can't stop from laughing. You are a sarcastic beast, smellysocks, I loved it! You've got to post more, crackfic or regular, anything:)

stasha - Well, Harry always had been unlucky, from the beginning. He can't defeat Voldy now, of course, that's why his illness is being kept a secret. More staff is coming.

Vibora - I feel sad for him also, even though I am responsible for writing that, hehe.

mphoenix - Wish I could be quick, but I am a very slow writer. Chapter 3 was rewritten a few times and shortened 1/4 before being posted. Some people can post every week, sadly I am not that good:(

teeta - Harry changed for sure. He is becoming an adult, for one thing. He sustained permanent damage to his magic, for another. 2/3 of magic gone. It could be compared to getting paralized from a waist down for muggles. A person can still be independent, sort of, but things will never be the same. Couldn't strip him of all magic, because magic=life, take all of it away and a person will drop dead. Even muggles have some magic inside:) That hospital scene was written as a 'dark humor' bit. Dark, because, heck, a helpless man is being taking advantage of. He was glad to get out of there.

I still stand on my opinion about your story. You saying about 'keeping failing' got me thinking. You might have the same affliction, like I do, I call it a 'writers blindness'; It prevents writers from evaluating their own works in detached fashion. That's why my Beta is so important to me, not only those numerous mistakes are being corrected, but I feel more confident before posting a new chapter:)

'Cambiare Podentes' is the best Snarry for sure; I am so glad that you like it! *hugs* I read it on Jordan Grant's journal and, after it was finished, had an 'Ivocare' weekend, that's when I get to read the entire thing at the leisurly pace with no interruptions. The second one is being called 'Maturare' (a bit strange) and I can't wait. The whole story is being completed right now, but, I bet, it'll be posted one chapter at a time. Don't be sorry about salivating, hehe. I view this board as Review and Discussion board, so all interesting discussions are welcome! Talking about Snarry bond fics, have you read 'Coils of Gold'? Pretty dark, huh?

AFF Original section is my home, but Harry Potter fandom is a first love, hehe. 'Golden Nuggets' project had taken over my free time and no new story can be started before finishing that first:) I am behind on reviewing also, :( You welcome, I wish that ALL stories on the list were as good as yours.)

'Gift of the insight', huh? *blushes and passes out*. That's what I get for posting drunken reviews... That was a joke, haha! I don't drink. Hope that you remember this when reading a real drunken review, it's likely to happen at some point:)

Kolgrim - Sorry for taking so long. Surprizing that people didn't forget about this story alltogether. Harry, Ron and Hermione are a way too high profile to go around as themselves anymore. It's not safe or private. So, they polyjuice into random Goblins:)

'Poor Harry' is right, it will only get worse. The only way he can fly now is as a companion of a real flyer. As for Draco making him feel better...... Who knows? He might not feel anything... Or too much.... We'll see. *evil laughter*

The nurses were wicked, I am trying to warm people up to a real dark staff, so it wouldn't be a shock when it happens. Comatose people have no control over people around them, it's pretty sad.

You welcome, will write more for sure, but not very fast.

I like my list also, your stories ALL had made the list, that is rare. Thank you for writing them. Not all of the stories on there are the same caliber, some of them could use a Beta, but they all have something special, good ideas or dialogue or a fresh approach. You might find some interesting staff for sure:D *hugs*

Anon - I am working on it, but it won't be soon. The chapters are long, though, they can count as two, if it makes you feel better:)

madlodger
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From ANON - Anon on February 14, 2007
OMG! update soon!!....please :)
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