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Reviews for Just a Naughty Little Ficlet (No Update, edit)

By : Ms_Figg

From ANON - Queen Celestia on November 05, 2006
Oh noes Hermione is now a nasty witch!
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From ANON - Queen Celestia on November 05, 2006
Yum Dark Severus.

Lol fantasizing about Ron, kinda heart breaking to find out you were just another pussy.
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From ANON - Empress on November 05, 2006
I skipped school to read your stories (I e-mailed you about that). I check constantly to see if you have added a new story or added to updated a fave. So I get mad when I see others ragging on your stories. She is entitled to her opinion. But she needs to remember that it's just her opinion.

This is not to belabour what has been said before. This is just encouragement. I prefer to review a complete story because I need to read the whole thing to tell you if I like it. But if it's a one-shot or 110 chapters I'm there with you for them all. I don't love all your stories but I respect you as an author and I respect your incredible talent. You write a little faster than I read so I'm never without something to read.

I like that you didn't brush aside what was said. As a reader, she had valid grouses. But never forget that there are other readers for whom a story that does not strictly follow canon is not spoilt and who like apperation points and "lab-rat" nifflers. This is all I have to offer you. My support and reviews. Thank God for you and your twisted mind. My mind twists in exactly the same direction.
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From ANON - Empress on November 04, 2006
Thank God for naughty little ficlets. I like seeing them in relationships but the sex by itself is nothing to sneeze at. Oh, to find a man like Sevie.
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From slygriff21 on November 04, 2006
WOW! Hot! Hot! Hot! Another awesome story! Can't wait to read the next one.

Your biggest fan,
Tiffany
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From ANON - Ms_Figg on November 04, 2006
Bella: Ah, a kindred spirit. So you are an obsessive writer too who updates daily...very cool. Now I don't feel so alone. :) When I finish Hallow's Eve, I'm going to go check out your work. Yep...it's how I hold it together girl. Writing these stories keep me entertained and focused on something other than probs. Others enjoying them is just a plus. But you know, there are going to be "elitists" everywhere, trying to make everyone follow their literary standards. Man, in the poetry circles...forget it. I've seen fistfights break out over poems. I used to sit in critique sessions and listen to about 10 other poets critique my work and the work of others. And they are HARSH. It's like the sole purpose is to completly stop the person from writing at all, people crying, running out the room, ripping up their work...etc...etc. You have to fight for every freaking stanza. lol. So I'm used to hearing crap and critiques about what works and what doesn't according to the gospel of whoever is speaking, particularly since I like to go out of the box when I write. I can't go out the box with HG/SS writing canon, so I stick with Alternate Universe/Alternate Reality and do what I like. For me was light action, believe me. If she/he had stuck to attacking the work and not me it would have been a better commentary. :::shrugs::: It was peppered with assumptions. Never good when trying to make a serious point.

The only issue I really had was the accusations of stealing ideas and such. That's plain crazy. I won't even write storylines or plot bunnies given to me by others simply because they aren't my ideas. I can't get into them, interesting as they are. I've tried but feel like the story isn't mine. Can't do it. Now I have written stories on a simple idea someone may have given me, such as Daddy Dearest, when a reader said she'd like to see a story where Snape wasn't responsible. That was all she requested. It captured my imagination and interest. But if she had gone into more depth, like the situation and so forth, I wouldn't have written it.

People who steal others' work deserve to be stripped, whipped and hit with a few Cruciatus curses. Very low down. If you have to do that, you shouldn't write. I don't have to do it. My mind is chock full of enough twistedness trying to get out that I'm constantly writing, having no idea what's going to happen in the story. Like I said, I'm obsessed...obsessed people focus only on what obsesses them.

As far as Raucous goes, he's just not for everyone. None of my OC's are really. But thanks so much for the encouraging words and the support hon. I really appreciate it. *** And thanks for getting me blabbing. I guess I just needed to vent a bit.

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From Rumpelyssa on November 04, 2006
I posted the review above before I read for me diatripe - Listen, for me, I don't have a beta either, and I write sex in my stories. Guess what, who bloody cares? This is an Adult site, if you want to read mushy HG stories go elsewhere. I will defend Ms Figg.

Ms Figg - I started reading the one with Raucous, and I did not like it, sorry... (not a flame review) I didn't find it funny, but that hasn't stopped me from reading all your other ones. I happen to think you're good. So what if there are americanisms... I am british personally and I put a lot of British slang in mine. The first rule of writing is to write what you want to read. Personally I prefer a bit of plot with my smut, but there are times when I don't have enough time to read a plot, and so I read yours - in fact your Sex.God Snape helps me dream at night and forget my pain and misery. We seem to both write and not have a beta for the same reason. I happen to respect you for that, as I write pretty damn quickly. I update practically everyday, I'd just find a beta would get in the way, and I agree, we ain't being paid to write the stories.

I have tried PWPs. I don't get many reviews when I do it, but I can write the ones with plot. As long as I drop in a bit of smut every now and then they're happy. I can't help but plot... I read yours with envy... wishing I could be brave enough to write some of the terminology you write. But I don't swear, and I find certain words embarrassing to think let alone write... so, yes, in a small way you help me escape.

As for sticking to canon - like there's time to reference the books for every small insignificant detail. I'm sure I've strayed from Canon, but then I work from memory. I write what I can. The reason I write Hermione a lot is because we don't know too much about her past before Hogwarts, so she's pretty much a blank canvass.

My personal favourite that you've written is the Halloween one... I prefer sensitive caring Snape... as I said in my previous review, I liked this one though.

KEEP IT UP! CAN'T WAIT TO READ YOUR NEXT ONE! YOU GO GIRL!
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From Rumpelyssa on November 04, 2006
Very bad Snape. I do prefer the more sensitive Snape, but this story was really good.
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From ANON - Sarah Timontry on November 04, 2006
Excellent story. Masochistic Hermione is fabulous. Great writing style. I always enjoy your stories - keep them coming - please!!
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From ANON - RyuaAlba(not logged in) on November 04, 2006
Damn, that was hot! Very sexy, rough and dirty and so much fun...
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From ANON - pearlywhiteteeth on November 03, 2006
ooh...this Severus was nasty and HOT! damn Figgy. So different from the other story you are working on. And tell for me to go sod off! You have some of the most original, entertaining and hot storylines about this ship on AFF and what's amazing is you say you don't plot stories. You write so fast how would you even have time? Accusing you of stealing plots and lines is just idiotic. There are going to be similiarities in fanfic stories. For me just sounds jealous and bitter and used this review board to vent it. You should delete that bullshit. I don't review often but I read. I like your work. Screw off for me!
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From ANON - cearrae on November 03, 2006
Pardon the expression - I'M HOT TO TROT FOR A SECOND ROUND! - As to the reviewer who flamed you - if they don't like what you write, why are they reading your stories. It's not as if they are required to pay to read. It's not mandatory to hit each fic as they appear. As to writing fantasy stories using the HP universe - heck, it's just for fun. Every writer is taking advantage of the creativity of JKR and branching off. Not one fan written fiction can be considered cannon, regardless of how they put it - It's not their idea in the first place.

NOW HASTE YE BACK TO THE QUILL AND PARCHMENT = YIKES! MORE SMUT, MORE, I SAY!
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From ANON - angel on November 03, 2006
~lol~ man ..the was awesome i love it ... and going to make her pay to the potions ... man .. later for now

angel
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From ANON - Ms_Figg on November 03, 2006
Anon: Yes I did notice the ratings, but there's really nothing I can do about it. I know when I look at a new story I don't really check the ratings but read the first few paragraphs to see if it holds my interest. Hopefully others do that as well. To tell the truth, I don't have time to worry about jealousy or ratings...shoot...I don't even have time to read any other stories...I'm so busy writing. :) Thanks for being supportive and don't worry. I'm not discouraged a bit.***
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From ANON - Anon on November 03, 2006
Miss Figg maybe for me is the one messing with your ratings. The last ones you put up are all four stars right in a row. she sounds jealous to me and maybe no one is reading her work. Your stories are all good au stories. Dont let people like that discorage you or stop you from writing. A lot of us love you. Thajnks
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