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Reviews for What lies within your enemy

By : sassygrl
  • From Leenah on January 30, 2007
    please please continue this. It's absolutely lovely. Oh and I love the cuddly Draco and Blaise.
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  • From ANON - Demandemon on December 03, 2006
    great, damn it, keep going, i thought there was more but there isn't damn it i want more
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  • From ANON - Krysty on November 12, 2006
    its so cute! u have got to update soon! please? i just luv it! ^_^
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  • From ANON - vittani on November 06, 2006
    cute definitely needs an update
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  • From ANON - Lita on October 31, 2006
    Awww how cute! I love and I hope u update SOON!
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  • From ANON - valeria on October 31, 2006
    It's so beutifule
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  • From ANON - xEVx on October 31, 2006
    Hmm.. your beginning is nice, alots of options are available for you to continue the story.
    Looking forward to it. Hope that in this story Draco will have a loving parents.
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  • From ANON - Kara on October 31, 2006
    hey really like the story, good plot so far keep writting!!! look forward to the end xxoo

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  • From ANON - stef on October 31, 2006
    cute cute! i do like this actually! not meant as an insult but you might want to get a beta-reader just so it makes things easier to read... things like filisophers is meant to be philosophers and so forth... other than that, things just like slowing down the story and putting in a bit more descriptions would savour the ... well, for lack of better word, flavour of the story.. Also you might want to put something in the summary other than the usual 'I suck at summary' thing as that usually turns readers off... Even get someone to help you with a summary if you must but i guarantee you will get more readers if there is a worthwhile summary... If you want any help with beta-ing or the summary, feel free to give me an email...
    Otherwise, I do actually really like this story so far,
    Keep up the good work and please update again soon
    Stef
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