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  • From ANON - harry-draco on November 06, 2006
    great, again a new chapter. I like it,
    please update soon
    bye
    harry-draco^,^
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  • From ANON - AllyKat on November 06, 2006
    You need to proof read your work closer. Some of your word usage is wonky. "Wired" for weird, "aloud" for "allowed", etc. Distracts the reader.
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  • From ANON - l'etje on November 06, 2006
    keep going and post soon
    bye bye
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  • From ANON - Hambares on November 06, 2006
    Whew! Now no one can legally take Harry from Snape.
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  • From ANON - harry-draco on November 05, 2006
    hm, interesting story so far. Please update soon
    bye
    harry-draco^,^
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  • From ANON - kami_no_yami on November 05, 2006
    Interesting... I don't belive i've ever read a story that goes down this vien of plot before, what w/the whole buying/selling in a strage Muggle appt. I believe I would like to see where this is going. Please update soon. I do have one correction. In chapter two Snape says to Harry: "Is this WHAT your master had you do!" I think you put the emphasis on the wrong word it should be "Is THIS what your master had you do" unless of course you did this on purpose and I didn't get it; but hey whatever, it's your story do as you will!

    Ja ne! ^.~
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  • From ANON - l'etje on November 05, 2006
    keep going and post soon
    byebye
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 05, 2006
    i like the start update soon

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  • From ANON - l'etje on November 01, 2006
    this is very good beginning keep gong and post soon
    bye bye
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  • From ANON - Hambares on November 01, 2006
    I can't wait to read what Poppy will thinkof all of this. The abuse Harry has suffered! Poor little guy!
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  • From ANON - Blinded_HP on November 01, 2006
    Hi, I just quickly want to point something out to you. When I started "Life as I know it" I didn't know a lot about BDSM and Dom/sub relationships but since then I've been e-mailing to and throw with a submissive in America.

    She pointed out to me that whenever a sub addresses his/her Dom they do so with a capital letter, ex. master would be Master.

    I like the fic thus far and if you need any help with finding more information I can provide you with a few links that had helped me with the writing of my own fic.

    Keep it up, I look forward to the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - Woof. on October 31, 2006
    This is really good^.^. I hope you continue!
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 31, 2006
    please don't take my critisism badly, i'm simply going to point out things that you can improve upon. It takes time and other peoples imput to become a great writer...use the "bad" reviews or the "flames" to help you improve your writing.
    One thing you have done in this story is repeat yourself, there is no need for you to spell out snape thinking "i'm sure the man raped harry this morning and he's sore" three times..I know you didn't say it exactly like that and each time you said it diffrently..but its still very redundant.
    Try reading your story aloud to yourself it may help you notice mistakes.
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  • From ANON - Solv on October 31, 2006
    very good so far, I hope you continue.
    and heres a little prezzy for the story.

    http://ser8.imgdump.net/images/10312006/s8_22ba550859d3f6f.jpg
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  • From ANON - Lina on October 31, 2006
    OMG!!!!! So f***ing amazing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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