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Reviews for Dance with the One that Brought You

By : KatDiva

From ANON - mischeifmanaged on November 09, 2006
whew! is it hot in here, or is it just me ;) keep writing please, you've taken an idea and made it unique, realistic, and intriguing. I'll be back!
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From ANON - Petalsoft on November 09, 2006
I absolutely love your story. Please continue soon.
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From ShilohDarke on November 09, 2006
Oh man!!! Oh man!!! Oh man!!! DAMMMMNNNNNN IIITTTTTT!!!! Just when I was really getting into it... the chapter ended!!!! I want more, and I want it NOW!!! Accio chapter 9! Accio Chapter 9! Oh!!! I want to e Hermione in that dip. Man! If he makes her mad enough, she'll shag him just so he knows she was a virgin! More?? Please?? Soon????

Shilohdarke
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From ANON - Bethalina on November 09, 2006
Sat and read the whole thing... damn good... love the ending of your latest chapter... i was giggling because i can actually picture it...cant wait for your next update... cheers***
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From ANON - reggieb is a girl on November 09, 2006
Bravo! Bravo! Now write me more! Ooooo dancer!Draco is so very, very yummy. I must say that I'm loving your story, even if the time line isn't one of my favorites (I am, I'm sad to say, a sucker for the last year of school or anything post-Hogwarts when it comes to my fanfiction, I'm not much for the whole they're-ganna-be-at-school-for-a-while-longer setting. But I'll bend the rules just for you). Yay keep up the great writing!
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From ANON - Chavela on November 09, 2006
Chapter 8~

SCREAM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! OMG! I can not believe he is acting like this. That is so damn hot! I am just melting from it all! *gushes* That was just too much!!!!!

MORE. I am begging for it.
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From ANON - natyslacks on November 09, 2006
Ok..... I feel so silly now, but this chapter made me swoon... Yes, swoon... I don't know what got into me. I don't normally do that at fanfiction. But it might have been the setting, atmosphere, characters andjust wow the writing. But I loved this chapter. I felt like I was in Hermiones shoes and the discription of Draco just made me want to be there physically.
*Inserts random fan girl squee* Thank you, this is one of my fave chappies you've done so far and I cannot wait till the next one!!!
So please update soon!
Love Natalie *Goes of into her own fantasy ::sigh::*
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From ANON - moxie on November 09, 2006
oh. my. god. wow. dude. i want more. wow.
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From ANON - skye on November 09, 2006
ah....broom references......lol.... loved the stewing jealousy of Draco and Fleur's dance. ( visions of the entrance in the film with the, ah, behind.. view....)
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From ANON - Lilybean84 on November 09, 2006
Don't worry about not having a beta. Not every writer needs one! Your writing is amazing:)
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From ANON - Luthi on November 09, 2006
I don't mind you... I don't blame you either... you TOTALLY have my sympathy... this chapter made me drool all over my keyboard! (Still works, though, lucky me ;P) Oh my GOD, I can really picture Draco dancing with Fleur... and I wish Viktor would get out of the way for the actual shipper here! This guy is bothering me more with every chapter I read ;) just always hoping Hermione will push him away before long...
Keep it up! I love it!!!
(Even though Draco was really an ass, saying those last few sentences... *rolleyes* Oh well! Don't girls just love assholes?! ;P)
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From ANON - iluv2dance on November 09, 2006
OMFG!! THIS STORY IS SO FUCKING HOT!!! YAAAY THEY'RE FINALLY TOUCHING!!! Keep it coming!!! Keep them dancing the passion all night long! Can't wait for more chapters!
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From ANON - deeply.jaded on November 09, 2006
Your last chapter knocked me of my chair!!!
He is EVIL, just plain evil. But he is seduction itself.
(you know the movie, stranger then fiction...try to imagine Malfoy coming to live as a person in your story...licks lips)Well we can always dream.

Can't wait for your next update.

Oh and: you haven't got a beta!!!! I'm seriously jealous now!!!! Grin
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From ANON - deeply.jaded on November 09, 2006
About chap 7:
I just love the way Harry is reacting. So Harry has some what of a dark side..huh? Love it, gives me goosebumps. You really display an interesting Harry, not a poof!!
And how naive is Hermione, it's rediculous really and so much fun at the same time!!!
I'm really enjoying your story.

Yasmin
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From ANON - Ravensblood on November 09, 2006
You are making me shiver, my dear, oh god please update soon....
I love your Draco. I really do. I love the way your entire plot folds in so very well with the book. How do you do it? I must know!
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