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Reviews for Dance with the One that Brought You

By : KatDiva
  • From ANON - Chavela on December 21, 2006
    Chapter 17


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  • From ANON - ^.^Cat on December 20, 2006
    Ack! I'm so awful at remembering to review! Tsk, tsk I get lazy. But I love this fic! Really you could totally go with a H/Hr or K/Hr, but I can't wait to see more D/Hr action! It's such an interesting premise, I haven't seen it before, and I love how you're keeping it in line with GoF, no easy task I'm sure. But since I'm reviewing I want to recommend another fab D/Hr lemon "Everything you need" by BeautifullyMalicious on the Contraveritas site. Delicious read. Can't wait to see where this one goes! ^.^Cat
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  • From ANON - desra34 on December 20, 2006
    PLEASE UPDATE!!! I LOVE THIS FANFIC SO, SO MUCH!!!!!! thanks.
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  • From RiddikulusSugarQuill on December 19, 2006
    Oh gosh, I'm sorry. I meant that those eyes Hermione was looking in were very similar to the eyes that were in the scenes playing out in my mind with me as the main character. *cough*damn that Hermione*cough* Haha sorry for the confusion! Nope.. no plagerism on your part.. Haven't described Draco's gorgeous eyes yet! I'm glad you like the Adrian Pucey part.. I just felt it was important to have a chapter without Draco to show that he will not take over the independent side of Hermione. -Update soon!
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  • From ANON - Shez on December 17, 2006
    KEEP WRITING!!

    I love it!

    Keep up malfoy n hermione ;)
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  • From ANON - Raul R. on December 16, 2006
    Simply amazing.
    I started reading it today.
    Every chapter I was hooked.
    You have no idea how much this story makes me happy ^^
    Great grammer, vocab, and plot.

    YOU ARE AWESOME! xD
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  • From ANON - Verdi on December 15, 2006
    hey

    she got a REAL kiss!

    i love the games they play but this time Malfoy was dead on serious! WOW!

    verdi
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  • From ANON - Terry Moon on December 15, 2006
    Dirty Harry:

    Liked it! Seems to me that Harry fancies a bit Hermione. I like how you put their relation in here, it's similar to what I imagined till the sixth book came out. Loved Hermione in an apron and arguing with the elves! Lovely chapter!
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  • From ANON - skye on December 15, 2006
    Oh that was beautiful! Don't appologize for the dance-details. You detailed it nicely for the non-dancer and the dancer alike. It was great how you had Draco completly ( completly!!!!) off kilter with his mannerisims!
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  • From ANON - Hopeless Romantic on December 15, 2006
    haha, loved the last line, as well as the entire chapter. Great job so far!
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  • From ANON - Julia on December 14, 2006
    Awesome chapter. I even laughed out loud a few times. I can see this is going to be a great story. Haha, pointy ballet shoes, I'm a ballerina, it'll be interesting to see how you incorporate ballet into this. Anyways, kudos, nice chapter.
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  • From ANON - RiddikulusSugarQuill on December 14, 2006
    Oh lord.. that kiss. That kiss. I was practically entranced, I swear. I pictured the whole thing while reading it but, weird.. those eyes were very similar to mine in my version *hmm...* Just to comment on what you think of your work : BORING? BORING? This chapter was so perfect I could see it and feel it and - fell in love with it. Continue.. new chapter.. please..
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  • From ANON - Britva on December 14, 2006
    Ohhhhhhh.
    I'm so excited that Draco's finally making his move.
    Poor Hermione though.
    She's gonna be in a tough spot with all these boys competing for her.
    Don't worry about using lyrics in your fiction.
    I think it added, and was needed for this particular chapter.
    Wonderful chapter once again.
    Completely looking forward to the next :)

    x.
    Britt
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  • From ANON - kittigoddess on December 14, 2006
    oh my gosh! your cliffies will be the death of me! please write more!

    who will hermione pick and will she find out that draco kinda molested her? update please!
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  • From ANON - Ochre Rainbow on December 14, 2006
    I think it's a very enjoyable story and I look forward to reading more of your work.
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