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Reviews for Dark Lady

By : Ms_Figg
  • From ANON - shameful lurker on November 04, 2006
    Mrs Figg: too bad. Well, feel free to take elements from one or both ideas in future fics. Anyway I'm looking forward to the Dark Lady story, and the Halloween story updates are eagerly awaited.
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  • From ANON - firewall on November 03, 2006
    Ms Figg, my take on this story is you have begun a major digression from the usual norm you write. I rather enjoyed this dark Hermione and do not have a problem with her engaging in other sexual partners...it is her. It always astounds me how you are able to pull different aspects of both Hermione and Severus' character out and manoeuver them about to suit your story. I say, go for it, Ms Figg. I'll read and review.
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  • From ANON - pickyrev on November 03, 2006
    Oh yes! I don't care what you write, who you write. I just want you to write your wonderful stories so I can read them. I think it would make for a great story even if it is not striclty SS/HG pairing. With your unlimited imagination and great writing style, it is sure to be another winner. Why did you even bother to ask? Is there one fan of your writing who would object. You could write government regulations ( most boring and tedious writing I could think of) and if we knew they were yours, we would still read them faithfully.
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  • From ANON - Jessica on November 03, 2006
    hey im all for that ..... i would love for this to become a full fic ^_-
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  • From ANON - Lyssa on November 03, 2006
    More please...this could be very fun....and i'd like to see how dumbledore reacts....
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  • From ANON - KayJay on November 03, 2006
    I would love to read anything you write. I'm a big fan. I tend to "jump ship" (please forgive the pun) myself, so seeing Hermione with anyone would be fine. I really like what you've done with her character and I would love to have you explore a "darker" Hermione. So I say write on!
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  • From ANON - elementaldeity on November 03, 2006
    I think it's a wonderful idea. Dark Hermione with various Slytherin men in one story. Reading doesn't get much better than that. I hope you do develop the plot for it. I love all your stuff and am a loyal reader if not reviewer. Sorry for that;)
    elementaldeity

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  • From ANON - sophie on November 03, 2006
    i love SS/HG but i love LM too! DM is ok, hes not bad but just kinda young but i dont care. please write the story because not all of them have to be strictly SS/HG and this story has a really good beginning
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  • From ANON - Ms_Figg on November 03, 2006
    shameful lurker: wow, my eyes crossed on the sex magic idea...so complicated...but cool. Unfortunately, I don't write well to plotlines because I have to work on getting it to a set point A, point B point C and I just don't think linear like that. I've tried to do it but was unable to...the exception being the Marriage Law story I wrote, but I hadn't even read the challenge properly so :::shrug:::. But they are both exceptional ideas. Maybe someone else will pick them up. Thanks for posting.
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  • From ANON - shameful lurker on November 03, 2006
    Oh yes please write it.
    Alternately there are other multipartner stories that I'd like to see. I fantasized a lot about them but I can't write to save my life so... if you like the ideas please please write them.

    1) sex magic (HG/many with HG/SS emphasis)
    Post HBP, SS is invited by Lucius Malfoy to the Malfoy Manor dungeons where he detains a special guest. As they are descending the stairs, Lucius collapses, dead. SS continues to the dungeons and finds Draco dead on top of a passed out Hermione. SS immediately recognizes the special ability that Hermione has used to suck up the life energy of her rapist and his blood relatives, the sex magic through which a witch can capture, store, manipulate a man's life energy during intercourse. He decides this is the breakthrough the Order have been hoping for, worth blowing his carefully created cover, and disapparates with HG to the (not-dead) headmaster's secret location. They have to prepare HG for the great rite during which she will have to feed from the lifeforce of the male order members so as to get enough momentum to destroy Voldemort through Harry (shared blood) and Snape (dark mark). Obviously this rite works much better if there is no contraception so that a life can be created, adding to the energy sucking impetus. Optionally, Harry is the child conceived by his mother during a similar rite, in which Snape may or may not have participated, and this is why Lily married Harry's idiot father. (You can see why I am no writer and especially no smut writer, I can't make myself write precise details about sex. Use your imagination. Obviously you have lots of it). I have no further "plot" ideas so I don't know how the story ends.

    2) The Hogwarts harem (SS/many with possibly SS/HG) This is Edelweis' challenge on owl.tauri.org:
    "Keeping Albus' pet DE busy
    Challenge:

    The Hogwarts staff members were appalled when they learned that Severus Snape has been hired to teach Potions. Such an ugly and antisocial young man, a suspected Death Eater, how to make sure he would not abuse his position as a teacher to molest the students ? It hardly looked like he was able to get laid without resorting to coercition, while he was barely out of hormonal teen age and was bound to have strong urges, possibly perverted by his dark background.
    But of course Severus, even if a repentant DE, is still a Slytherin and able to manipulate the rest of the staff for his own profit...

    Required:
    a) Must mention staff schedules that include "keep SS busy" hours.
    b) At least one member of the staff must keep SS busy and sated through sexual activity (implied or explicit as you wish). Harem or gigolo themes are okay too.
    c) If the story is an HG/SS ship (not mandatory but appreciated), Severus' ability to be "interested" in a younger witch after so many years of b) must be questioned.
    d) SS would not actually abuse his position as a teacher that way, whether he bothers explaining that or not.

    Genre: no(t too much) angst please. Comedy and/or humour and/or romance preferred. Shameless PWP is ok too.

    Up to the writer:
    rating, canon compliancy, story timeline etc.

    Comments welcome..."

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  • From ANON - HLL on November 03, 2006
    I think that your story idea is awesome no matter who Hermione is with. Please continue writing!!!
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  • From ANON - v_sev on November 03, 2006
    Hi,
    My dear genius in my opinion you can/must write hermione and Severus in all forms and manners, so write her fuc..ing whom ever you want, I bet it will be hot and hard!!! lol
    Go for it, it's going to be another masterpiece.
    Hugs
    v_sev
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  • From ANON - Kristen on November 03, 2006
    I think anything you write is great.So go for it.^_^
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  • From ANON - MND on November 03, 2006
    Well... I don't think i'd like a story with Hermione with multiple couples, but I DON'T realley know, cause I haven't read any yet. But i liked your chapter, so GIVE IT A TRY
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  • From Rumpelyssa on November 03, 2006
    OOOH YES PLEASE!!! I am possibly a HYUGE SS/HG shipper but I have a soft spot for Hermione/Lucius, and Hermione/Draco... so yep... it sounds good to me...
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