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Reviews for Dark Lady

By : Ms_Figg
  • From nonentity on February 17, 2009
    Tweet and Chi?

    Love this monk storyplot and how consistent the monastery is with the modern world. Especially the part where everyone thinks the zealot is bonkers. I'm glad you didn't get more graphic with the splattered brains. Ewwww . . .
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  • From voraciousreader on February 16, 2009
    Hermione needs to watch her back. Then again, a Wiccan friend of mine lives in a rather 'Unsophisticated area, and I once asked her how she ogt by with her more 'righteous' neighrbors. Her reply was classic: "Oh, I just shoot back."
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  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on January 23, 2009
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From catysmom1028 on January 23, 2009
    I like it. Please update soon.

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  • From slygriff21 on January 21, 2009
    Wow! This is a great story and I can't believe I missed it! I can't wait till you update again and I hope it will be soon!

    Your biggest fan,
    Tiffany
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 21, 2009
    cool....demons...
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  • From ANON - Justin on January 20, 2009
    write more i like this story
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  • From voraciousreader on January 20, 2009
    Making him live up to his name? Gods, that's just brilliant!
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  • From Tenar10r on January 20, 2009
    Wonderfully evil!
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  • From Ms_Figg on January 20, 2009
    Voracious Reader: Yes, I faltered when this scene came to me, but forged through it. House elves would definitely move Hermione, which was why she tried to get rid of them quickly before she could feel anything concrete, anything that might touch her heart or soul, which is pretty much the same thing. So, when the elf responded to her perceived kindness, she felt she had to protect herself. By just killing such an innocent creature, it shows how dark she really is. I think it's worse than killing a human being in some ways, because we can at least surmise if she kills anyone, it might be deserved in some way. But the house elf was a complete innocence. Her only justification is her own selfishness to keep her powers, and maybe her own life because of her situation. Is her life worth more than a house elf's life? Well, some believe a life is a life, regardless of its station. This is going to be some story to write. Sigh. Thanks for commenting. Oh and Odius Titwilder? lol. It just came to me, but I do have a funny reason for it. You'll see later in the story. :))
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  • From voraciousreader on January 20, 2009
    'Odius Titwilder'? JK herself couldn't have come up with a better name! I understand her reasoning, but I am sorry about the elf. And I think the minister is in for a shock when she finds out about her envoy's mistreatment. There are certain diplomatic courtesies involved that he's trampling on.
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  • From voraciousreader on January 19, 2009
    As always, you are true to the internal frame you create, and I love that. Somewhere in a 14th century grimoire it states that a wizard must be mad to make a deal with a demon, because it also requires absolute faith in god to make it work. I think you just illustrated that point beautifully.
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  • From Ms_Figg on January 19, 2009
    Anon: lol. No degrees here, I'm afraid. But I do have good reading comprehension and a vivid imagination. So I just research what I'd like. I need a master that has some possible basis, located in a remote area, who has a bit of mysterious lore around him. He's going to be very different from the true myth, but some aspects of him will fit the myth. He's just going to be 'more' than he's portrayed. I'll create a dark history for him, and a reason for him to latch on to Hermione.
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 19, 2009
    Your plot bunny is erudite and fascinating. 'The Grey Man of Ben Mac Dhui'? You don't happen to have a degree in folklore or european anthropology, do you? More!
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  • From wudelfin on January 18, 2009
    Yes!!! *on bended knee* Thank you!!
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