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Reviews for Dark Lady

By : Ms_Figg
  • From ANON - Quashi on November 05, 2006
    You asked for a response. Lets see: You have already established a Hermione with tremendous power, but some flaws in her control. You have established her respect for Severus, and her appreciation of Draco as eye candy. I vote for waiting. Possibly play up her lack of control in bed. Draco would have the job of summoning her bed partner, and of taking away the body the next morning. Can you see blond-and-gorgeous trying to appear NOT SEXY? How would Draco and Severus react to her commanding Lucius to her bed after they've seen her kill all of her previous partners?

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  • From ANON - Vivian Black on November 05, 2006
    Wow. This is a great twist. I truly hope you decide to keep working on this piece (I will resort to begging!). I look forward to (hopefully) the future chapters you add to this story.

    Thank you,

    Vivian Black
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  • From ANON - Allison on November 05, 2006
    Hermione with Slytherins? YES PLEASE!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Shady on November 05, 2006
    I'd be really interested to see this turn into something longer. The multiple partners thing doesn't bother me, as I ship her with Lucius, Draco, and Sev anyway.

    Hope you decide to continue.
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  • From ANON - LNR on November 05, 2006
    I think that this would make a really good story line. Just put it in the threesome or multipul catagoty, or use the brief summary to state that it's primarily HG/SS with bouts of HG/LM & HG/DM with a full summary inside.
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  • From ANON - gudrunm on November 05, 2006
    Ruth,

    please continue with the story! It has a catching spin to it, it is original. and you write soo good that I devour anything coming from your pen.


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  • From ANON - Ms_Figg on November 05, 2006
    I've decided to finish this story, but when I do it...it will be posted only on AFF and not my own website. I will have to move it out of the SS/HG ship area as well because it will involve multiple wizards. Ought to be interesting to write Hermione in the dominant role. She will be "good" however, though good is relative. lol. Kind of looking forward to it. Thanks.
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  • From ANON - David on November 05, 2006
    This is very different from what you usually write, but for me that is actually an advantage, no offense. You're obviously a very talented writer, but to be honest I find the dominant Snape/submissive Hermione scenario you seem to prefer rather repugnant and I really cannot conceive of Hermione as a massochist. I hope you don't go down that path if you continue this story as I think it has real potential. I've always loved stories where Hermione is extremely powerfull and having all those former Death Eaters as her virtual slaves has fascinating possibilities. Her relationship with Draco would be especially interesting; I would see his attitude to her first being fear and loathing, mixed with reluctant desire, then changing to love and perhaps even worship! That's my view anyway, but it's your story. Best of luck with it if you decide to continue.
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  • From ANON - witch on November 05, 2006
    Dear Ms_Figg,

    Since reading the first story that I have stumbled upon, I have faithfully followed your writing ever since until I read every one of your stories. Magnificent!!! I had to be literally detached from my screen sometimes!
    What concerns the Dark Lady story, I would love you to make it into a full story as well as pairing Hermione with more than one wizard. Perhaps it would prove to be a pleasant change to see Hermione enjoying herself with both Lucius and Draco as well as Snape (even though I shall always stay a faithful supporter of Savey....)

    Hoping to see more of new stories from you,

    witch
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  • From ANON - ozarkmoon on November 05, 2006
    Yes please! PLEASE! PLEASE, PLEASE!!! Have Hermione be truly demanding of all the men we love - Severus and Lucius especially. If anyone could make it more than acceptable by the - normally - SS/HG fans, you could.
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  • From ANON - sheedy on November 05, 2006
    Go for it!!!! Just let us know if the mods move it to the general catagory please.
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  • From ANON - Lydia on November 05, 2006
    I liked the story. very interesting. i would like to see it go further. Hermione could be very bad with Draco and Lucis but with Severus be very good and often. i hope you continue this.
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 05, 2006
    so i take it not all reviews were +
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  • From ANON - Cara on November 04, 2006
    I personally only like Hermione with Severus and vice versa.
    But if you have other shots I'd skip over them.

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  • From ANON - Jess on November 04, 2006
    I love all your stories! You're one of my favorite authors. Please continue this fic!
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