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Reviews for Dare to Dance

By : ShilohDarke
  • From ANON - Kris on November 21, 2006
    O.o More... plz?
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  • From ANON - Catstaff on November 21, 2006
    Of course we don't mind transitional chapters! Having a plot to the story is a good thing. And you spin and excellent tale.

    ~Catstaff
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  • From ANON - ancientgirl on November 21, 2006
    No complaints from me. I'm glad Draco was able to get to Severus and I'm glad Hermione seemed to have been able to defend herself.

    Thanks for the update. I'm looking forward to more.
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  • From ANON - lisa on November 21, 2006
    Wow They seem to be torturing each other when if they'd only speak. And Omg Ron!!!! He is possessed and Poor Hermione. Thank God Draco heard heard her and went to grab Severus. And perhaps there is more to Harry and Drco huh? lol Cant wait for more. more more more please. I cant wait to find out what Ron did to her. Poor Hermione hope its not too bad. Please update soon.
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  • From shelagh on November 21, 2006
    Great chapter.
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  • From ANON - Jade on November 21, 2006
    :) :D :) Yeah! An update! Good chapter :) :D :)
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  • From ANON - Laura on November 20, 2006
    Excellent writing- good story and I love the buildup between them. Hot. :) LK
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  • From Ducky on November 20, 2006
    This is so hot and well written.... keep writing, i'm hooked! The though of Severus dancing is just so hot.
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  • From SorceressFujin on November 20, 2006
    Great chapter! Hmm, I like the twist with Ron. :)
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  • From on November 20, 2006
    Hmm... Good chapter for introducing us to the Ron concept, which is, by the way, pretty original I think (I've never read that idea at least). Other than that though, it felt pretty rushed, and I thought the ending was really abrupt. It just didn't have the "end of the chapter" feeling to it. Futhermore, I was really surprised when Snape broke away from her and we didn't get any explaination from him. Since you've decided to do an internal dialogue for both of them, I would have expected some sort of explaination there... especially after the whole "later, but not now" thing.
    Anyway, I hope you don't take my critism the wrong way - it's kindly meant.
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  • From ANON - msvanessa on November 20, 2006
    *dies from the suspense!*
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  • From ANON - Annie on November 20, 2006
    ohh so close, more!
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  • From ANON - Nightwitch on November 20, 2006
    OH Please write more I want to see Hermione and Severus together:)
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  • From ANON - lisa on November 20, 2006
    eeee gads killer cliffie man!!!! Lol. that was quite hot the dance and lol the making out. Poor Severus he has a chance and seems to haev gotten cold feet AGain. It looks like Hermione though is going to give him all the nudge he should need to open up. but ack I wont know til next chappie. evil cliffie. Cant wait for the next cahppie to see if she makes him face her or runs away again. more more more more please. Please update soon.
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 19, 2006
    alright, update soon. im interested in seeing where this is going. :)
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