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Reviews for Dare to Dance

By : ShilohDarke
  • From ANON - Chavela on December 03, 2006
    Wow, I can not believe the turn of events for the last two chapters. I was very surprused. I never would have thought about something like that happening. I wanna be mad at Ron, cause I dont' like him, but it is not his fault, bummer, LOL!

    Very good!
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  • From ANON - Heksy on December 03, 2006
    I found some spelling errors, but my computer acted up, so I wasn't able to write them to you.
    As to your command about certain people having trouble with chapter 9.
    Please promiss you will never compromise your writing due to the fact some people don't like what you wrote.
    It is your story to tell, never forget that.
    ~~~
    Only one thing remains to be said...I get the feeling this story isn't quite done yet.
    To many loose ends.
    I hope you will continue, and erm...I do very much enjoy the lemons.
    They make one hell of a lemonade *evil grin*
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  • From ANON - Heksy on December 03, 2006
    "and to you ove him, Miss Granger?", shoulf be "And DO you love him, Miss Granger?"
    Wit a sweep of his robes... - wit being with
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  • From ANON - Heksy on December 03, 2006
    "and answering his touches with explorations of his own"
    Sorry, but shouldn't this be:
    "and answering his touches with explorations of HER own" ?

    I hope you don't mind me being so picky *giggle*

    For the rest of it...whew...things are getting rather spicy...you keep me glued to my seat...
    Alexandra

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  • From yncarn8 on December 03, 2006
    I was in two minds whether to write this review, partly because I don't want to be got at for what is merely my opinion.

    I was a bit disappointed with chapter 9 and I agree with the person who described them as sour.

    Up until chapter 9 the tension was building beautifully between your characters and I was looking forward to the consummation of their relationship. I certainly didn't think the love scene was too graphic at all, if anything I thought it was cheesy and full of porno cliche. It made me laugh and completely broke the tension you had built so well to that point.

    That's just an opinion though, and plenty of people disagree. You can't please everybody all the time and I'm enjoying the rest of the story.
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  • From ANON - Joani on December 02, 2006
    LOved the update!
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  • From ANON - lisa on December 02, 2006
    Awwwww!!!!! Severus is so sweet and lol I 'd love to be Hermione for a while lol. Woot woot they are togther finally. and Ohh dear Harry suspects something. Poor Hermione, I feel a bad fight coming . but on a happier note yay Ron is making his way on the road to recovery. thanks to Severus adn Hermione. Cant wait to see what happens next. Is Ron really cured? or just contained for the moment? Will there be dancing again? and Will Harry find out what happens in detention? lol cant wait to find out. more more more please. Please update soon.
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  • From ANON - LaBibliographe on December 01, 2006
    Pardon my absence. I got wound up in my writing, and your other story, and the others at Luciusville and briefly forgot to come back here. so I had 8 chapters to read before I could post. Whew, you've been busy.
    Before I forget, Ch.5 at beginning you have the word dong instead of doing. NOT that I ever mind reading 'dong' mind you...

    I like Hermione's sexy dancing dresses. Enriches the atmosphere to think of her twirling in them.

    Chapter 9 lemons: I'm probably in the silent (okay, not so silent!) majority in liking the lemon a lot. You portrayed her first time beautifully and I thought it was pretty accurate. Remember that for every reviewer there are at least a hundred - or more - that don't bother to review at all. and I imagine as in most things, when someone is unhappy they're more inclined to speak up than when they are perfectly happy with something. So everyone has their point of view. Just don't lose sight of the rest of us who liked your lemon just fine.

    And the next morning was very romantic. Truly lovers now. So - I am all caught up and waiting for Chapter 11.
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  • From ANON - moony on December 01, 2006
    do i dare ask if ron will go back to normal?
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  • From ANON - snapesflower on December 01, 2006
    Shiloh honey, don't let someone's dislikes bother you. Always remember that you are writing to please yourself, not the scores that read the stuff. It's about time someone wrote some good smut, and I found the last two chapters to be very well written and not offensive at all.
    If someone doesn't want to read the stuff, they need to quit looking at R/NC-17 rated fics and stick with the cute stuff over at fanfiction.net.
    My love of uncensored nc-17 is why I now have my own site.
    So, rock on, girl. Let er rip.

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  • From ANON - Donavon on December 01, 2006
    I just love the way you are formating this story. It's just perfect. Thank you.
    And even though I swore I wouldn't do it. Please.............. update soon.
    Best wishes,
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  • From ANON - Darque Hart on December 01, 2006
    After reading your A/N, I had to go back and reread Ch 9. Did not find the referred to offending scene to be any more or less than other authors have written here at 'ADULT'fanfiction.'

    Looking forward to Ron facing HG and of course Harry's thoughts about the detentions. And naturally, any more 'dancing' sessions;)

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  • From ANON - Sampdoria on December 01, 2006
    Great story, so happy to see frequent updates. With regards to the lemons in chapter 9, I liked it!!! First f all, this is the adult-fanfiction, so juicy lemons must be accepted (and for many of us, wanted). Seccond, I find that when a story is well written, making the readers know about the caracters feelings and thougths in details and then suddenly, when it comes to what must be said to be a major step in their relationship, it is passed with two sentences and then they wake up next morning, something is very much missed.
    Keep up the good work.
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  • From Rumpelyssa on December 01, 2006
    Those last two chapters were hot! Emotional and funny.

    I think that is a great story, and yay! Pansy's with Draco in this one! I like that couple a little bit.

    Now its my turn to say this...

    MORE PLEASE!
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  • From ANON - Snakelette on December 01, 2006
    The lemons too graphic? I thought they were great; just right for a first time!
    I think this is a wonderful story and it would be a shame if you wrote it differently because of one or two complaints. Intense lemons are te best lemons imho.

    Great story!
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