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Reviews for Dare to Dance

By : ShilohDarke
  • From ANON - Jade on December 01, 2006
    Great chapter. Thanks for fixing it so quickly!
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  • From ANON - pickles87 on December 01, 2006
    wonderful chapter.
    waiting for more.
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  • From ShilohDarke on December 01, 2006
    Okay! Now, we're in business! I am so sorry that I didn't check that last night when I uploaded it. I never meant to put up a post to the story that ended up looking like a complaint to the readers! Forgive my mistake!!! I will have more lemony goodness posted again in ch 11, I promise!

    Thanks for letting me know (No telling how long I would have been adding chapters without putting in the important stuff!)

    SD
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  • From ANON - WickedlyWanton on December 01, 2006
    Um..., I don't see how it is any more graphic than some other fics I have seen on this site, nor do I think that your fic would require a lesser degree of smut (lol-sorry, that sounds a little prudish while we are talking about lemons). I myself have written smut that is either just as graphic or even more so. I happen to enjoy your story very much and hope that you continue what you feel is good for the fic-if the smut brings you readers, doesn't take away from the story itself, and/or fits the action in the rest of the story, I say make it as graphic as you want. But that's me. I like it!
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  • From ANON - huh on December 01, 2006
    as this is an adult site, maybe one should expect the plot to get a bit detailed when it comes to the passages FOR ADULTS! If someone can't cope with it, then you should just scip the parts or simply stay away from this site in your best interest. Critic on plot, style of writing, slopiness etc. are normal and often welcome. But LEMONS??? I'm very very sure, I've read much steamier ones.
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  • From ANON - Mariah Thomas on December 01, 2006
    Your Fanfiction is great and I would like to say that being graphic with lemons is the piont of the web site, others may be affened but they had fair warning before they got to your fanfiction, plus each person's first veries.
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  • From LVanna on December 01, 2006
    Opinions are like assholes, everybody has one.

    I do know how you feel though, no matter how many great reviews you get that one bad one just hits the wrong way. Just want to throw up your hands and say screw it, I ain't writing any more of this story. Been there, done that...then I go back and read all the GOOD REVIEWS and eventually it takes the sting out of the bad one(s).

    Now, that said here's a bit of what probably will be an ego boost for you. The first time you left a review on my story(ies) I was thrilled to no end, you are one of my FAV Fanfic authors. I LOVED The Beauty Found Within The Beast, it's one of my fav LM/HG stories. I've been following the other LM/HG you have on here and Dare To Dance as well. Those reviews you left encouraged me to keep writing even though another writer, who I use to admire, said somethings that initially left me feeling as though I'd never be considered a good writer. Anyhow, I really do hope you will continue this story so many of your readers, including myself, would be so disappointed.
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  • From ANON - ozarkmoon on December 01, 2006
    RE: Your comment on other reviews. Pay them no mind. Yes it was somewhat graphic - but , um surprise, this is an adult site and as far as graphic imagery goes, this chapter 9 of yours was not the most graphic nor uncomfortable in any way to regular readers of erotica of the NC17 rating. You did a lovely job with the chapter, with the characters and with the sex. Do not let anyone tell you any different!
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  • From ANON - m. majere on December 01, 2006
    I thought it was a nice chapter and very appropriate. Have these people read some of the other fics in here? They can get rather dark.
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  • From ANON - Vanessa on December 01, 2006
    I thought the lemon was HOT! I wouldn't change a thing and if people don't like it they don't have to read that chapter. Honestly the name of the site is Adutl Fanfiction and if they can't handle graphic material they shouldn't be on this site.
    Sorry for ranting,
    Have a nice evening,
    'Nes
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  • From ANON - LNR on December 01, 2006
    Ignore the complaints!!! This site isn't called "Adult fan fiction" for nothing. More please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - AFC on December 01, 2006
    i don't know what those other people were talking about...those lemons were HOT HOT HOTTT!! i loved it...and i can't wait till you write the next set. as for this last chapter...is it just me or is the chapter suppose to be that short and it's suppose to end saying "This was her first,". just a little confused there. awesome job!! i'm loving it!!
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  • From ANON - Brianne on November 30, 2006
    chapter 10 was cut off unless it was just an a/n
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  • From ANON - msvanessa on November 30, 2006
    I love the lemons... the story is still brilliant. As a matter of fact, considering this is ADULT fan fiction, it was rather tame, as far as graphicness is concerned. I thought it was just naughty enough. Bravo. Please don't tone down your lemons.
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  • From ANON - christina on November 30, 2006
    I personally say write how you want to write it's your story if people don't like it they can find something else to read. I, myself, have greatly enjoyed your story and it is one of my saved pages so that I can check easily to see when you have undated. Go with what your doing it is coming out very nicelyand I look forward to more.
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