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Reviews for Dare to Dance

By : ShilohDarke
  • From ANON - Jade on November 30, 2006
    Maybe its just me but i don't think your chapter uploaded correctly. BTW, they didn't like detailed lemons? They are soooo on the wrong site if they don't like lemons. Love your lemons, please make more!
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  • From ANON - hermioneandseverusfan82 on November 30, 2006
    i like the lemon in chapter 9 it was very nice and romantic
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  • From ANON - hermioneandseverusfan82 on November 30, 2006
    chapter 10 is not all here
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  • From ANON - red writing hood on November 30, 2006
    oh please. You dont have to explain your story to us readers. It's your story and I have read much more intense stories. Just because some readers didnt like it dont let it stop you from writing what you want. Its YOUR story. Plus...this is the *ADULT*fanfiction... if the complainers are to immature to read this graphic setups... then let them take it to the tamer sites.

    Red

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  • From ANON - loony_old_fan on November 30, 2006
    I didn't think there was anything wrong with the lemons in chapter 9. I hope this story continues soon.
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  • From ANON - ancientgirl on November 30, 2006
    Nothing wrong with those lemons. Just because it's fanfic doesn't mean there can't be some realism. It was her first time. What do people expect that she'll be begging him to pound her into the mattress immediately? Keep doing what you do best, which is give us a wonderful story the way it comes to you.
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 30, 2006
    i liked it! i think you handled her first time very well, with dignity and sexiness.
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  • From ANON - quill on November 30, 2006
    there was nothing wrong with the lemons in chapter 9. I find that with Fan Fic it is easier to critcize (watch out for my spelling) someones work then if you went to a book shop and bought a book. The difference is that with fan fic you have the nifty little review button, a published book has no option so if you did not like the book then you can throw it out or give it away. Fan fic all you need to do to voice your opinion is hit review. As I said before the lemons were just right perfect for making pie...mmmm I love pie.

    quill
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  • From ANON - Laurie on November 30, 2006
    I like your story as is.........
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  • From ANON - Stephanie on November 28, 2006
    Well i didn't expect that the lemons were going to be that sour...lol...yeah i was expecting something not so detail and sweeter, considering their relatioship and the pace, but great job non-theless. Loved the chapter, but i kind of skipped the *lemons* it kind of bothers me...lol.....but love the story great job. NOw write more!!!!!!!!!!!!! please!!!!!!!! i love the story, continue!!
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  • From ANON - anon on November 25, 2006
    what a great story! very hot and great writing.
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  • From ANON - ccino on November 25, 2006
    Ooooh! I like this. What will happen with Ron? Love the build up to HG/SS finaly getting it on. Pls hurry with ch 10.
    ccino
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  • From ANON - Amanda on November 25, 2006
    hey,
    just came here to say, great story!
    i'm really curious if ron will get better.
    Will it be a 'they live happily ever after' story or will it have a bit of sad ending..?

    waiting for your next update,

    Amanda
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  • From ANON - skye on November 24, 2006
    lemon pie...lemon sherbert...lemon mousse.....lemon cake....lemon drop...( ummm, no thanks Albus..)
    love your lemons!
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  • From ANON - Donavon. on November 24, 2006
    That was simply beautiful. What a wonderful chapter. Brilliant!
    Thank you and please can we have a update soon? Best wishes,
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