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Reviews for For Her Safety

By : zairaphel

From ANON - purrfus on November 08, 2006
ch 6 - Interesting pairing. What you have written so far is intriguing, and you are right - short chapters are better than note - but if you started practicing just making them a paragraph or two longer at a time, then by the time you get to chapter 30 ( I'm hoping for 50 or 60) they will be almost enough to provide a story meal instead of a little snack.
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From ANON - Dee Dee on November 06, 2006
I love this story. It is one of the few that have SB/HG. I can
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From ANON - angel on November 06, 2006
ohh yes i see her snapping ... please please please please please please please please please please please please upate soon i would love to read more ..later for now

angel
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From ANON - Izzie on November 05, 2006

Really wonderful beginning! I would have been thrilled to pieces if the chapters were a little denser, but I can't wait to see more!

I think the concept is interesting--I like Sirius/Hermione and I have liked Marriage Law challenges in the past, so a combination of the two seems great. I'm curious to see how they deal with Hermione going back to school and the still-looming threat of Voldemort.
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From DarkLady on November 05, 2006
I really like marriage law fics, at first I only liked the Sev ones but I have since found a whole heap of other ships with the same premise, I think you are doing really well so far and I did like the last chapter, I am looking forward to seeing how Sirius and Hermione interact with each other :)
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From ANON - angel on November 05, 2006
well mione took that well .. hmm will mione and sirius be having a little talk later .. please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more ... later for now

angel
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From ANON - lisa on November 05, 2006
Wow quite interesting. more please update soon please and the last chappie was fine as it was.
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From ANON - shygirl on November 05, 2006
omg i LOVE it! you write beautifully and originally - cant wait for the next chapter!!! xxxx
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From ANON - karine_snake on November 05, 2006
That was good ^^ Please update soon and keep up the good work !
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From ANON - angel on November 04, 2006
man how is mione going to take to the new about the new law and she marring siri...please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more ..later for now

angel
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From ANON - angel on November 04, 2006
wow great start ... please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more ... later for now

angel
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From ANON - Dylan on November 04, 2006
Good start, although you should have put the first two chapters together. I know you authors like to tease the readers, but short chapters just annoys the hell out of me! :)

Anyway, I think this is the first Sirius/Hermione marriage law fic I've read, (it's usually one of the Malfoy's or Snape,) so I look forward to more.
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