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Reviews for Hermione's Little Secret

By : Marti
  • From ANON - universal randomness on December 01, 2006
    Hope to see more of the senile old had!!

    How long to wait before SHE BLOODY WELL FINDS OUT?

    And great work as always!!

    xxxx
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  • From Magali on December 01, 2006
    this chapter rocks! I loved the embarrassing scene, it was so funny! I hope you update soon!
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  • From ANON - ailla on December 01, 2006
    No Brit would become attached to American beer. :P
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 01, 2006
    Wonderful fic. Great chapters. Can't wait to read more.
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  • From ANON - Avanell on November 30, 2006
    Oh, no! I hope there isn't too much trouble with her telling more folks than necessary, although telling Lilah was harsh - but understanding given her situation.
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  • From ANON - Lady Lynn on November 30, 2006
    Well, at least it looks like the girls are getting along together even if it only lasts until they find out that they're half sisters.
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  • From ANON - angel on November 30, 2006
    ~lol~ that was great .. i love what happen in class ... please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more ... later for now

    angel
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  • From ANON - BuffyXO on November 30, 2006
    Pale arse? LOL!! Thanks for giving us two chapters in one day. Thanks also for showing that Rianna is still a little 11 year old girl despite her magical studies and intellect. The way she descript Minerva's passing was age perfect and I would wager a parroted version of what Hermione told her at the time. I also like the relationship that Rianna is building, it will really make things easier. I would love to read about other characters speaking to Dumbledore and "Aunt Minnie" for advise on the interwoven relationships developing. I think it would be a neat way of putting them in your story -- thanks for reminding me that they would be in the Headmaster's chamber. It would also be a hoot, for them to admit in some office extracurricular behaviors preceeding Severus. I ALWAYS thought they had a thing for each other. Anyhoo, keep up the awesome work and take care. --Heather :)
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  • From ANON - juls on November 30, 2006
    Great update... keep it up. juls
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  • From ANON - angel on November 30, 2006
    omg sev and rosmerta man .. please please please please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more ...later for now

    angel
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  • From ANON - BuffyXO on November 30, 2006
    Marti, how much do I love that you revealed that Snape was with Rosemerta? So much! Thanks for making my day! I also think it is great that Severus gave Draco some food for thought about his relationship with Hermione, because, seriously, what is he doing with her? One minute he is yelling at her for her "little secret" and the next he is shagging her senseless. Anyhoo, I love your story, love your writing, so please keep updating your awesome work! :) Heather :)
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  • From ANON - Avanell on November 30, 2006
    Great chapter...loved the mention of Rosmerta. I fine fit for ol' sevie, eh?
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  • From ANON - pumkin on November 30, 2006
    i love the story. i can't wait to see what happens when the girls find out they are sisters. don't worry about what others say. i don't understand how people can be so rude to people who have the guts to write fan fiction. i give you credit because i would never be able to do what you do. good lick. keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - bella on November 30, 2006
    I don't think I've ever read anything more American-sounding than "He grabbed a beer from his ice box..."
    Smirk.... thanks for updating so often. I abhor people who hold chapters for ransom/reviews.
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  • From ANON - Ryu on November 30, 2006
    I dunno, am I missing something here? Is a story not supposed to be fantastic because you can put yourself in that characters position. You know...you can try and understand how Harry feels without parents even though he is a fictional character and you can try and feel how Hermione feels getting preggers at 17 etc. Thats what adds emotional depth and makes a story so believable. Even though the CHARACTERs DON'T EXIST ( yes I do realise that thanks)their emotions and emotional situations could happen to any of us. I mean not tryin to see some untold depth here( Are you trying to be purposfuly shallow then????)but how can you read a story without identifying with the main characters? And if the emotional situation is just by passed in favor of some smut( which I'm sure many others also do and I don't have a problem with that, everybody gets in the mood for meaningless smut sometimes ;) )how can you build up a proper plot??? You gotta either mix them together properly or else just write meaning less smut. Like I said many just come here for the smut so its not a bad thing but sometimes you need...a bit more....just giving some critical advice seeing as nobody else ever does. If I didn't like ur story at all I wouldn't have bothered with a review because I feel the worst review is no review at all. You can be angry at me if you like, I don't mind...
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