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Reviews for Hermione's Little Secret

By : Marti
  • From ANON - Avanell on November 29, 2006
    I totally forgot my own comment to that flamer...yes, some guys WOULD propose and want to marry the girl. maybe they so desperately want the girl (love, possession) and/or want to be the one to fill the "manly" role of parent. So it's not unrealistic at all. Neither is the girl for sleeping with a malfoy type guy. Of course, I did grow up in a different world from you (can anyone say San Francisco?), just like the world of witches and wizards would likely be different from your perspective.

    in ref to my reloading story...Sorry, Marti, but after loading the story up on another site and with my other stories, I just don't have time to search for all the 'bolds' and 'italics'. I'm burnt out by then! at least ffnet transfers data nicely, or you just click on a button "poof!" it's there ;)
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  • From ANON - ccrawley on November 29, 2006
    Keep on writing, loving the story and especially liked that it was Adrianna that caught the two of them. Looking forward to more of the story.
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  • From ANON - Avanell on November 29, 2006
    Wow! Two more great chapters! actually, I read the other one earlier before my long walk, and got home to find another! Still anticipating you know what!!! ;)
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  • From ANON - angel on November 29, 2006
    ohh man .. i hope in some small way sev is happy for mione and draco ... please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more ... later for now

    angel
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  • From ANON - blondiexoxo on November 29, 2006
    hey i love it i really do lol very hott and yummy lol cant wait to read more
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  • From ANON - BuffyXO on November 29, 2006
    As always, very great job! I am sorry that someone flamed you -- they are just sore that they do not have your talent for writing and cannot create Draco to their liking as well. I love how your ended this chapter, because the very same thing happend to a coworker of mine and her seven year old son, so I was laughing myself silly. What questions RJ may have now ... but they may just oblivate him. Again, I think she is going to end up pregnant again, but only you know for sure. Keep up the awesome job!
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  • From ANON - strangerdanger89 on November 29, 2006
    O god that is horrible!
    My little sister walked in on me and my boyfriend once... Reason 1 why I moved out
    But god you make me want to rio my hair I want to know what it going to happen...
    lol but I can cope... plus I love the story so I might as well wait make me want it more

    well later
    strangerdanger89
    (my real name is carlie)
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  • From ANON - Magzie on November 29, 2006
    Well, that was... AMAZING!
    haha, I like it how you ended with "HEY MOM!" thats brilliant, at least he never walked in while Draco was pounding her into the mattress, He would have been mortified.. I remember when my causin caught his paretsn doing it, he told me all about it, alls I could do was laugh at him. Anyways please update soon!!

    Magzie
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  • From ANON - lisa on November 29, 2006
    WOOOT WOOOT!!!!! mORE SMUTTY GOOD lEMONS . AND oMG caught in the act!!!! omg how embarassing. lol
    soooo funny. lmao. They gotta alot of explaining to do now. I'd hate to be them right now. lol i got tears from laughing soo hard. thanks you made my night!!!!! Awesome chappie. More more more please. Please update soon. lol still lmao.
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 29, 2006
    I like it a lot. great job. keep up the good work
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  • From ANON - kate on November 29, 2006
    Hey Marti,
    I have been reading your fic for a while now. I really like how you have set it up. Nicely done. I know this is a crappy review and Im sorry, but my gut hurts from a bad sandwich so forgive me. I have added you to my aol buddy list, katgirl172001, if you ever need someone to chat with. I love this fic, keep up the great energy and lemons. lol.
    Kate
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  • From ANON - karinma on November 29, 2006
    Oh goodie:D Please let that be RJ coming in and finding them, so that it might speed this story up:D
    And I love the way you write Severus:D I think he is featured a bit to little here.

    And thank you so much for fast updates *worships*
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  • From ANON - RiddikulusSugarQuill on November 29, 2006
    Oh My God! Ok. That was just.. mortifyingly hilarious. Great job. Please updated ASAP! Like.. in one hour if possible! (Probably not.)

    Can't wait until your next update!
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  • From juls on November 29, 2006
    wow, I'm so glad this is fiction about fiction people. That reviewer up above is trying to apply RL feelings to fanfic. Anyhow, so what if they went fast and hard at the beginning, I have rad alot of stories here that have. And Ron was raised by Molly and Arthur, and so he would react like that when push comes to shove. Hedid that in CoS when he sacrifed himself on the knight. Anyhow~~ love the story still. Huggles
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  • From ANON - Pam on November 29, 2006
    Great post, love the story, can't wait until you post again, so please post again soon. Thanks.
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