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Reviews for Hermione's Little Secret

By : Marti
  • From ANON - Ryu on November 29, 2006
    *bursts out laughing* If I were a prude do ya think I would be on this site???? Really? Think before u write.Anyways I am not the only one that pointed out that you went from cold to hot and completly missed warm.Foreplay should take at least a couple of chapters if your dealing with a virgin character. Heck, even the storys with Lucius Malfoy X someone had him wait around a couple of chapters and he's not exactly the type to wait now is he?I've read a couple more chapters because I am fair and I've found that in general you do tend you want to race ahead and not give enough details.Like how random was Rons death? Completly out of the blue he just dies.No mention of a potential threat. Nothing.It's like some one decided to just drop an anvil on him or something. Couldn't you have made it a bit more elaborate? Like a fight scene or something? Plus its comepletly, in every sense of the word, unlikely for Ron to ask Hermione to marry him after she tells him she is pregnant. This guy doesn't have table manners,likes to sulk and in general behaves like every tipical teenage boy. There is just no way he would marry her. Even if it were his own kid he would probably run a mile and then after much deliberation attempt a proposal. Guys are like that. As a male friend pointed out to me( and he's 24 mind) " Marriage is a complete fuck up cos when you get married thats the last girl you'll ever sleep with in your WHOLE ENTIRE LIFE. Scary. I mean why would you even want that?" Another friend reported that he had just had a HUGE fight with his girl friend because she wanted him to throw out his porn. That, my dear, is what guys of that age are like. So really, Ron should have had at least one chapter of self-doubts/panic etc. But whatever. Snape is also too cuddely.What happened?
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  • From ANON - juls on November 29, 2006
    nice lemon... but ummm RJ... EEK hugz juls

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  • From ANON - angel on November 29, 2006
    ohh man .. that are they going to do now i hope rj does not open the door.... please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more ... later for now

    angel
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  • From ANON - Ryu on November 29, 2006
    Damn. You are either a virgin or havn't been a virgin for a reeeeeeeeeeeeeeeaaaaally long time.Or a nympho.Or u r a guy. 2 small paragraphs between two life-long opposites and enemys meeting for their first kiss and them lying on the ground fucking their brains out. Nooooooooooooooo way would a virgin be that easy, especially not Hermione Granger. Talk about spreading easier then butter.Where was the fucking foreplay????????? I am fealing incredibly cheated here.Why should I even bother with the 2nd chapter?
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  • From ANON - vic on November 29, 2006
    you're evil! making us hot and then stop! i hope you keep your promise and give us soon a new chap.
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  • From ANON - lisa on November 29, 2006
    WOOOT WOOOT!!!!! hehehe. quite steamy and yummy Draco is sooo hot. Only to be Hermione that lucky witch.! Please update soon. more more more please.
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 29, 2006
    LOVE this fic. :)
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  • From ANON - strangerdanger89 on November 29, 2006
    OOOO You are EVIL I don't want to wait
    You make a great scene and you go and do this
    Man you are such a tease lol
    but I loved it
    Can't wait for more

    later
    strangerdanger89
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  • From ANON - allie on November 29, 2006
    please updat
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  • From ANON - juls on November 29, 2006
    Evil... purely evil cliffy my friend. Juls
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  • From ANON - angel on November 29, 2006
    ahhh you are right you are evil ... please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more ... later for now

    angel
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  • From ANON - BuffyXO on November 29, 2006
    One quick question: Is she going to end up pregnant again? They are NOT being careful. You know I love your writing and story, so keep it up.
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  • From Magali on November 29, 2006
    nice! update again!
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  • From ANON - Chavela on November 29, 2006
    Chapter 23

    Nice chapter! Very hot!
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  • From ANON - Chavela on November 28, 2006
    YAY! I got to catch up after missing lots of chapters. I love the way things are turngin out. Everything is awesome! Great job, I can not wait for more chapters!!!!
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