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Reviews for Battle of Dark vs. Light

By : Crazy4Malfoy
  • From StarrCrystal on April 21, 2012
    Damn...is there any possibility for this to be updated in the near future? I'm loving this fic!
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  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on July 01, 2008
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From scobb0707 on December 21, 2007
    I love this story so far
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  • From on November 30, 2007
    i see that hermione start having feelings for malfoy. while trying to keep her kids safe. she also figures that harry is the new dark lord
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 03, 2007
    still waiting.....

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  • From ANON - skydancer on November 26, 2006
    ohhhh....interesting......and Ron is such a prat! and I'm guessing Harry"dark Lord jr" Potter's right hand dufus.
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  • From ANON - Annie on November 26, 2006
    i like his, update soon!
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  • From ANON - ShilohDarke on November 14, 2006
    Are you kidding??? There are so many ways you can do this. She could chase him down, and thank him... She could go to Dumbledore and let him fill her in on why he seems so changed... Uhm... She could search him out herself and speak with him about why he's being so kind... She could ask him to help her figure out how to battle Ron for custody... Do any of those ideas help? I really like this story idea as I do believe that even if Lucius was a git about mudbloods, he does love his son, So I can imagine he would have a soft spot for Hermione's children!

    More soon please? ShilohDarke
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  • From ANON - Criosdan on November 11, 2006
    Just Cannot wait for more. It's such an excellent story.
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  • From ANON - Citten on November 08, 2006
    well don't give up you have the making of a GREAT story. suggestions: 1-have a friendship/relationship starting with lucius and hermione and the children. 2-maybe have lucius have his banster/lawayer helping hermione with the trail. 3-give us a little on lucius' part how is at teaching, if the students like or hate him, how he interacts with the other students, etc. 4-have some other interactions with other students and teacher and teachers with other teacher. 5-(last one -k-)show a class in session hermione's or lucius' or even another teachers with one of them (lucius or hermione) interrupting them with a problem or whatever. so that is my two bits now it is up to you and that wonderful writers creativity!!
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  • From ANON - Sampdoria on November 08, 2006
    Still like your story after the seccond chapter. You wanted input on where to go next, for what it is worth, here is mine: First of all, if you haven't already, you have to decide if Harry is truely a new dark lord on his own accord, or if he is posessed with a part of Voldemort. Seccond, does Ron knows and approves. And third, and for me most important; don't let the children be harmed, nothing will in my mind be an "off-putter" for a story as a case where such small children are harmed. Hermione has to win the trial about the children, she is the smartest witch of her age, and as you made her say; She fought Voldemort, figthing Ron should be a lot easier. She could need Lucius help I think, or the combined help of Lucius, Severus and Dumbledore. It rather depends on how long you intend this story to be, if you let Ron have the children, the story must come to an end rather quick in my opinion, reading chapter after chapter with Ron and Harry having the children would not be my cup of tea.
    I have read a lot of stories lately where Hermione are pictured more as a Huffelpuff who helplessly endures all kind of cruelties and still loves and forgives all the terrible things and betrayal done to her in the end. It anoys me, she was sorted to Gryffindor and is as earlier mentioned smart. Please give me a Hermione who not only fight for her children like the lioness she is, but also stand tall and strong against thoose who tries to hurt her. By all means, let her be smart enough to get all the help she can get, but please, please, please don't make her a person to pity and who everyone can push around as they like.
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  • From ANON - angel on November 08, 2006
    ohh noo i hope lucius will help her keep her kids ... man ..please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more ... later for now

    angel
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  • From ANON - Pam on November 08, 2006
    Great post, can't wait until you post again, so please post again soon. Thanks.
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  • From ANON - Chavela on November 08, 2006
    Dude, I can tell you what I want. I want a kiss damnit! And for Ron to get his ass kicked! Hopefully by Lucius! That would be hot. Just cause Lucius is so damn hot! LOL!

    This chapter was kick ass. Lucius rolling around laughing, that would be some site to see! I liked that, and I totally thought it was cute!

    I can not wait fot more of this story, I am so hooked in it!

    PEACE♥
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  • From ANON - lisa on November 08, 2006
    Ohhh noooo Ron is a huge git. Poor Hermione. I am sure she will find a way around that law. I hope. And awwwww Lucius was cute. Can't wait for more. More more more please. and I imagine either Ron keeps trying to irritate her or he just attacks her and maybe uses imperio since Harry wants her right? or perhaps Harry just does it hissef making Ron another Wormtail. I thought the trial would be next. I'd definitely love to see more Lucius and Severus. They are my faves. goodluck. Please update soon.
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