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By : wildrose
  • From DarkLady on May 10, 2007
    omg that chapter was excellent! Had all my favourite things...beautiful Lucius :D Rodolphus and Rabastan!
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  • From linmo on May 10, 2007
    new chapter! I love the meeting scene in Malfoy Manor. They were all full of their characters. Following LaBibliographe's discussion, I think Voldemort kept Bella as a mad dog barking from time to time, reminding his Death Eaters who was the lord.

    For me, the change of Lucius was a bit sudden. did not see where did that "I am sorry" come from. Lusting a girl could have changed a devil? I thought you said Lucius may be beyond redemption and I kind of agree. Not that I hate happy ending, just being logical.....
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  • From LaBibliographe on May 10, 2007
    Chapter 14: I must say, a little of that lunatic Bellatrix goes a long, long way. She's the most sinister and unstable of them all. She's a complete liability to not only the Death Eaters but also Voldemort himself. She should have been disposed of, but perhaps Voldemort, being nuts himself, finds something comforting in her ravings. Maybe it makes him feel he's not so far round the bend after looking, listening and seeing her behavior. Bella is just shivery and I don't understand why they even put up with her, being all so coldblooded themselves.

    Rabastan was believable as something of a lesser power cum parasite in the Death Eater ranks, and it makes sense that he would think nothing of preying on Hermione for his own pleasure, with no regard for her preferences.

    Ooooh, evil, nasty chapter full of villains. It's a good thing Blinky was brave enough to come to Hermione's rescue at the price of his own well-being.

    Lucius showed a tiny bit of humanity (or possessiveness which isn't the same thing at all) in saving Hermione from Bella. He should have smacked Bella much faster, though. Maybe with an accidental Avada Kedavra. Oop! Sorry, Rudolphus...
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  • From palaise on April 18, 2007
    Your writing style is very enjoyable and detailed and the dialog is absolutely delightful. I especially like how you're keeping everybody in character.

    As for R.A.B., ignore the A for a moment and think about any briefly mentioned Death Eater. This train of thought leads me to Regular Black, the brother and Death Eater of Sirius Black, who was sorted into Slytherin a few years after Sirius had entered Hogwarts. Imagine this man whose brother and cousin were both Gryffindors. I can imagine that towards the end of his life he had his doubts and switched the locket with a fake one, as after all, the Blacks were an old pureblood family who must have had a lot of very old artifacts in their possession. ^_~
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  • From linmo on April 15, 2007
    never think Lucius and Hermione can be good match but I really like this story, although I really hate this Lucius. You have made him so real. Cruel, arrogant and evil. And you even managed to make things between Lucius and Snape so funny. Please update it soon?
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  • From Calliope on March 23, 2007
    Hey, this is fab! I love the in depth psycho-analysis of each character and the situations; it's really interesting. Lucius really is 'the forbidden fruit', huh... Looking forward to your next update!
    Calliope
    x
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  • From DieHexe on March 21, 2007
    Lovely!! it's lovely, my dear!! really really good..
    oh, and i found the little father and son chat quite amusing... maybe my reactions were not exagerated but i smiled a lot!! poor draco... [omg i've just said this.. can't believe]
    ^^
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  • From InfernalParadise on March 19, 2007

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  • From on March 16, 2007
    Hey thanks for updating! Another great chapter, as usual! I can't wait until the next installment!

    While I can see why Persephone might have found Lucius' fatherly talk rather hilarious, I didn't laugh when I read it. All I could think was that Lucius was incredibly cold. You wrote him to cannon perfectly. He is so arrogant, so convinced that he is right, that he doesn't even see the horrible legacy he has left for his son where all roads lead to death.


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  • From DarkLady on March 14, 2007
    lovely again darling! I loved the flashie scenes and the rab stuff of course I love a plotting Lucius :D now don't forget to update over at GE :D and if you would like me to copy and paste from this site let me know and I can update for you! :D
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  • From LaBibliographe on March 14, 2007
    Chapter 13: I liked this new chapter showing us more about the pressures Lucius - and Snape - are subjected to, being servants of Voldemort. Lucius has led his family to horrifying deaths, Narcissa is already gone and Draco hasn't much choice except which way he wants to die. Typical Lucius who tells Draco he's on his own. Such a cold man - this chapter emphasized that more, I think. Does he have any redeeming qualities? Will he stay this way throughout the story? Will there never be a happy ending for Lucius and Hermione?

    I didn't see the father-son exchange as funny. I guess everyone has differing ideas on what constitutes amusement. I thought Lucius was being as caring as he could ever manage to be, with that icicle stuck up his a$$.

    I still wonder if Snape is evil or a double agent...

    Wonderful chapter with intense overtones and new info for us to ponder. Thanks for updating!
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  • From InfernalParadise on March 04, 2007
    Oh, sorry about the blondes part from my former review
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  • From on March 02, 2007
    Well I can understand why Snape is enjoying this so much! So am I. With breakfast and Lunch being such entertaining meals, I can't wait to find out what happens for dinner. This little stand off between Lucius and Hermione is hilarious! Of course it's always funny whenever Lucius doesn't quite get his way, (although I have to admit it's equally fun when he does.) I have a feeling though that he is going to punish her for it though. Please update soon, I'm dying to read the next chapter!
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  • From DieHexe on February 28, 2007
    Dear... your fantasy is wide... it was good.. i enjoyed it, it was.. ehm...quiet!
    and you're right: it it comic...
    post again asap..

    ps. poor Draco!!! XD
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  • From LaBibliographe on February 28, 2007
    Chapter12: Omigosh, the lust potion only enhances a natural proclivity? It seems perfectly ordinary for Hermione to enjoy the sex variations she showed such a talent for. But that she actually wanted to do all that with Lucius? I agree - probably she would have done it with a mountain troll under the influence of the potion. At least Lucius is a lot better looking. 8-)

    Just what game is Snape playing here? Purely a spectator at a love match? I guess we'll see as the chapters roll along. At least Hermione has a way to get untainted food now.

    I do love how Lucius gets so riled up with nowhere to vent his spleen. Just like your title - absolutely 'Delicious'! And Draco seeing his parent in flagrante delicto - with Hermione - that would make any child bilious to see their parent as a sexual being. Poor Draco. But a lot of fun!

    Please update soon. I love the 'Lucius vs. Hermione' standoff we have now. Great chapter!
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