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Reviews for Deliciously So... (Editing)

By : wildrose
  • From ANON - LaBibliographe on January 15, 2007
    The review above was mine. For some reason, although my name was on the review, it didn't go through. I guess I'll sign mine from now on.

    LaBibliographe
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 15, 2007
    Chapter Ten: WOW!! By the time Lucius was finished with Hermione, he'd managed to enjoy her in a whole slew of ways. Hermione got more and more into the sex and I began wondering either about the tea or the violet cookie. How funny that Severus got a floor show. I bet he stayed till the ending credits, too. Poor girl. Is she going to remember what she did? I hope she knows that she was drugged, but that's going to make her starve herself from now on, if she remembers. Hmmm...

    At first I couldn't add my review. I had to find out how to log in, because now it's required for posting. I guess the number of reviews will decrease with this added layer for a potential reviewer to go through. Sad for us authors. The reviews only ran about one per a hundred hits as it was. Well, I know how to log in now, so you can continue to update please. Thanks for the wicked lemon!!
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  • From Shalengreh on January 15, 2007
    naughty lucius....i loved it

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  • From ANON - angelnomiko on January 15, 2007
    man ... that is one way to get her to have him ..please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more .. later for now

    angel
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  • From ANON - LaBibliographe on January 10, 2007
    Chapter Nine: So Hermione doesn't know what punishment Blinky got. I imagine she'll find out later. Poor Blinky. I wouldn't have minded having breakfast with the "monsters" - the food sounded scrumptious and the eye candy (at the table) alone would have made the meal perfect. I love 'listening' to Lucius in your story. You have his voice so beautifully.

    Why would he want to show Hermione his library? Not from the goodness of his heart. Who is this voice he keeps hearing? And why did he have such a realistic dream of Hermione - well, the dream Hermione was doing what he was hoping for, I guess, so does that show what his internal desire for her is really like? I know, I know, stay tuned. I hope your houseguests had a nice time, but I'm glad they're gone so you can write some more. It's torture when you want to write and can't get to a computer. Thanks for the further adventures of bad-boy Lucius.
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  • From ANON - Die Hexe on January 09, 2007
    Also Die Hexe ist wieder hier!!!
    ok, ok, I know it sounds like 'Umbreit Style' [shiver] ok, girl! that was nice!! wonderful idea for Blinky's punishment!! oh, and Hermione's reaction to Snape is ok..... good work... i'm looking forward to reading the next one! and, my darling, although I'm starting to appreciate Lucius... taking Sirius off my mind will be very very very difficult.. anyway... the bet is open!!
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  • From ANON - Faye on January 06, 2007
    Another....delicious chapter =) I wonder what our precious Lucius plans to do in that library of his...update soon!
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  • From ANON - 99 on January 06, 2007
    Poor Blinky! But at least Lucius didn't torture him to a horrible death like I feared. I
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  • From DarkLady on January 06, 2007
    ohh great chapter! I totally love an evil Lucius and Severus I think they are in their elements when they are actual death eaters :D well done! lemons? puhhhhlease hehe
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  • From ANON - angel on January 05, 2007
    wow .. what is she going to do now ... she can go on like that .. please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more ... later for now

    angel
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  • From ANON - Twilight Lady on January 05, 2007
    Ok, so you have his dreams and reality mixed up again - pooor "innocent" Lucius - what a pity he can't even find a way to get Hermione to have breakfast with him - this way, will he ever convince her to share much more of his than his food? I guess we will have to wait and see what else you can conjure...
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  • From ANON - Gaps of Misery on December 28, 2006
    You know what? You REALLY should do a terrible chapter next... otherwise I'll run out of worshipping and praising you. *lol* It's perfect once again, and in my humble opinion that chapter was one of the best so far! :D (I'll leave the blushing part out this time, alright? You can do it if you want to, though...)

    Happy New Year, hon! :)
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 26, 2006
    god!!! you want to drive us insane with frustration!!! It's becoming more and more interesting...
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  • From ANON - Twilight Lady on December 26, 2006
    Well done, Ophelia! Very good for your first attempt at a novel - and to think you don't always score top marks in your school essays..No more excuses from now on! The characters have depth, and you actually use wit and good psychological introspection. Just check out the odd grammar imperfection. As for Blinky - you know how I think you should make Lucius punish him - and that spell has not been used yet in your story, so...we'll see what else you conjure.
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  • From ANON - Citten on December 24, 2006
    RATS! i have to wait for the next chapter! so how long is the next chapter's editing going to take? (don't have to answer that question.) well there has certinly been some interesting developments, can't wait to see what happens! :)
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