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Reviews for Deliciously So... (Editing)

By : wildrose
  • From Rumpelyssa on November 30, 2006
    I liked it. Every story needs an interim on exposition. This was interesting. I did that with my first fanfic, tried to keep every character in line with the books, it is hard; which is why I stray now... it's so much easier!

    Harry/Ginny - YAY!!! Love that couple. Ginny's cool! I hope she'll get to kick some soon.
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  • From ANON - Elle on November 29, 2006
    Oooh, such a good story. I can't wait to read more, I hope you are writing more for us.
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  • From ANON - Tenar10r on November 29, 2006
    This story is getting better and better! I think you portrayed Severus perfectly.
    I hope that you continue to recover from the flu and feel as though you can write more.

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  • From ANON - angel on November 29, 2006
    man ... so he sent back for her thing well there is a good start.. please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more ...later for now

    angel
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  • From ANON - Pam on November 29, 2006
    Great post, love the story, can't wait until you post again, so please post again soon. Thanks.
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  • From ANON - Leonora on November 28, 2006
    That was very hot!

    Are we going to see Snape in action?? I wouldn't mind that at all.

    Keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - Ev on November 27, 2006
    I am in desperate need of an update on this lovely story. Cliff hangers kill me and I have been checking fairly often to see if you have updated and it just kills me to not know what comes next. Keep up the amazing work!
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  • From ANON - tenar10r on November 20, 2006
    I am enjoying your story very much. You have a great start and I love how rotten you have made
    Lucius Malfoy. I can hardly believe this is your first story.
    Here are a few suggestions for tidying up the text a little.
    beautiful: long blonde hair = should be "blond" when refering to a male.
    stairs to the defence against the= defense
    YOU BIGHT ME = bite
    favourite pass time of Potter = favorite
    when she finally realised = realized
    Felling quite disgusted = feeling
    back up her pretences, she started = pretenses
    who was as defenceless as she = defenseless
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  • From ANON - LaBibliographe on November 17, 2006
    Chapter 4: A dastardly Lucius. I suppose now that he's raped Hermione it would be difficult if not impossible to sell them as a couple but that's quite all right. He and she don't always have to be together in the end. He's running much more true to the Lucius Malfoy that Jason Isaacs keeps telling interviewers the character is like. Totally evil, arrogant and irredeemable. The story is interesting and pitting Lucius against the three teens makes for a lot of possibilities. I wonder what Severus will do with Hermione? Guess I have to wait and see. Update soon, please!
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  • From ANON - Dee Dee on November 17, 2006
    Wow this is a wonderful story!
    Wander what Snape will do when he sees the new
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  • From ANON - Die Hexe on November 17, 2006
    Oh My...! What's happened to the innocent, childlike, sweet Ophelia I knew? ^^" You've grown up... my little girl! anyway... that was damn scary! don't misunderstand me: i like it!! i like the way you write and i want to know how it goes on... Severus won't do anything wrong, or?? Girl: heal as soon as you can and post more!
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  • From ANON - Ev on November 17, 2006
    Update soon please! Cliff hangers kill. It's a wonderful story!
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  • From ANON - Citten on November 14, 2006
    boy lucius is so very cruel in this story. it makes me think of how j.k. rowling propoble thinks of him at least to some extent. i really am dying to know what severus will do is he part of the order or a d.e. and how will he react to hermione? well don't make us wait too long to know the answers!
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  • From Rumpelyssa on November 14, 2006
    OOH so is Severus going to have her? Or is he going to help her?

    Can't wait... I love Severus....
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  • From ANON - Pam on November 13, 2006
    Great post, love the story, can't wait until you post again, so please post again soon. Thanks.
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