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Reviews for Ensnaring The Senses

By : juls
  • From ANON - skydancer on November 08, 2006
    wow, he was a git! lol
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  • From Rumpelyssa on November 08, 2006
    This is cool, but I doubt that Cissa would be moved to another house.
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  • From ANON - anonna on November 08, 2006
    Good heavens! How will this all turn out? Poor Severus, poor Severus's daughter. I'm not so sure of my concern for Hermione. Did she tell her daughter frightening tales of her father. I thought she loved Severus...
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  • From ANON - marti on November 08, 2006
    stupid review things have word limits!!!!!!!!!! they didn't tell me!! aaahh lol....that sentence should read as "She had gone down there.....etc.." sorry bout that.

    great story, keep up the good work

    marti
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  • From ANON - lisa on November 08, 2006
    I forgot to say lol more more more please. Update again soon. Love the story.
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  • From ANON - lisa on November 08, 2006
    Omg he knows now1 A lil late to be reading the letter silly Sev. What a mess! and I suppose Hermione never told cissa of her father. that he is the great Bat of the Dungeons. a big mess. and a big ol fight i fear is looming. I hope they fix things soon for Cissa's sake. Every lil girl needs her daddy. ther are just some things Mummy's can't do that dad's can.
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  • From ANON - marti on November 08, 2006
    oooh, I loved this chapter! no warm fuzzies here: I like the pissed off Snape and scared Narcissa! Most other fics I read with him meeting his child @ a sorting are sickly sweet! Nice. But mean of mummy Hermione to put the fear of the dungeons in her, lol. I noticed one typo, if you don't mind my pointing it out. I'm a grammar fiend~~~~She had went there just once a few years ago, and had been made to clean the chamber pots as a punishment.~~~~~
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  • From ANON - Pam on November 08, 2006
    Great post, can't wait until you post again, so please post again soon. Thanks.
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  • From ANON - beeky63 on November 08, 2006
    Wow! What an emotionally charged story. I really like it and can't wait to see how the meeting with Hermione and Severus goes. One little thing though (hope you don't think I'm nitpicking) you said "you would want an ex-deatheater in charge of their children for 11 years. It is actually 7 years, 11 is the age that children start. You already knew that though, your sub-conscience propably took possession of your fingers for a moment. Anyway just thought I would point that out in case you missed it. Can't wait for the next chapter, keep up the good work. Toodles.
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  • From Rumpelyssa on November 08, 2006
    I like this one so far. It is sweet, and I am glad that this is one with Harry and Ginny and Remus and Tonks together. It looks like this one is going to be chock full of my favourite ships...

    Keep it up!
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  • From ANON - lisa on November 08, 2006
    Wow awesome start. I love it already. Ohh dear Hermione's soo stubborn. I thinnk they should all just ignore her and let Severus know. and Stubborn Severus needs to look at his letter before its too late. 2 stubborn bullheads they make quite a pair. and I imagine Hermione smarts still from his running out on her. Severus has alot of explaining to do. cant wait for more. more more more please. Update soon please.
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  • From ANON - sheedy on November 07, 2006
    Great work!!! Too bad Sev doesn't read his mail.
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  • From ANON - anya on November 07, 2006
    Beautifully written. I do hope there will be more, soon?
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  • From ANON - emily on November 07, 2006
    Oh, good God! There MUST be more. You can't leave them like this!
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  • From ANON - ccrawley on November 07, 2006
    Oh, crap, he did not read the letter. Enjoying the story.
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