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Reviews for Rihanna's Son

By : Marti
  • From Shellnet on August 29, 2019

    You didnt do the final battle or the wedding even an epilog it needs a little something


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  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on August 25, 2007
    I really like this story alot. Can please write some more chapters?
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  • From LoverofDarkness on June 12, 2007
    I love the story. Please update as soon as you can.
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  • From Marti on May 27, 2007
    Actually, Wolfen, I do occasional edits, deletions and such. I'm sorry if it keeps going back in the recently added listing.

    I was also asked by one reader to delete the author's note pages, the ones that have no chapter. I have done so, which again adds it to the latest listing.
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 27, 2007
    amazing stuff.
    defenitly do a sequel.
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  • From wolfen18 on May 27, 2007
    Amazing how this thing keeps getting to the head of the recently added queue. You might want to get help for your feedback addiction. I suppose I'll enable you some more with some fresh feedback. I usually don't bother with stories I have read that fall under the guide line of:
    If you have nothing nice to say...don't waste the epidermis on your fingertips by typing out crit that is less than "YOU ROCK!!!!". Because 99% of the time, such a critiquer will have to read through the amusing attempts by the other lemmings to defend the writer as the next Hemmingway if it wasn't for viscous flames obviously thrown by those who can't write.


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  • From DB1 on May 27, 2007
    @16 You can't end it there!! You have to do a sequel where they are one big happy family..lol..damien is adorable!!! I want to read more!!!

    *DB*
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  • From RWHandLoraineProductions on May 20, 2007
    This is a much better chapter. The other one was a bit of a disappointment. I'm glad you included that bit at the first, made the other bit more understandable. Thanks for editing it. I still loved this story.

    Red
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  • From barbarade on May 20, 2007
    Clap Clap. Even though I really hate that its ended.
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  • From angelnomiko on May 19, 2007
    wow that was great .. i cant wait in till the sequel.. later for now

    angel
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  • From NatalyPodroykin on April 18, 2007
    Hello. I just love ur story. Can't wait to read wht happens next. OOOOOOHHHHHHH!!!!!!!
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  • From vonHardenberg on April 17, 2007
    Anna and daughter + Remus???????? Do you know the whole story about "Uncle Remus"? Look up "Br'er Rabbit"
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  • From vonHardenberg on April 17, 2007
    This is an excellent story and one I don't believe I've seen anywhere before. I will be watching for updates while I am reading your other stories. Thank you for your gift of prose.
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  • From LustBlood on April 16, 2007
    "The view of your lover's face when she sees her car clutching the broom six feet above the floor with a four year old wizard driving: PRICELESS!!!" ---- LMAO!!!! So wrong. Can't wait for your next chapter! Damien is adorable! I love him!!!! Marti.. if the child characters in your story are even half as mischievous as your own three.. how on earth do you get time to write?? Update soon please!!!
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  • From angelnomiko on April 12, 2007
    ~lol~ that was awsome i love it and that he wanted to take crook for a ride ... please update soon i would love to read more .. later for now

    angel
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