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Reviews for Learning Life Over

By : Meander
  • From ANON - Minue on November 21, 2006
    'Typical Evil Overlord mistake' - okay, that I can accept. D
    I tend to write my Voldemorts more clever, but that's most likely not canon. It might also be the reason why they're always so difficult to get rid of...
    I have also an addiction to strawberries. Sadly, I'm also allergic to strawberries. I envy Harry... You know what's even better than strawberries with cream? Strawberries with chocolate. Hot melted chocolate. And now I envy Harry even more, and I get some decadent ideas about whipped cream, strawberries, melted chocolate and Draco... I can't wait until the two get together.
    What does Harry want to do? Probably flying. But what if he says working? No, I think he is past that delusion now.
    Update soon!

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  • From ANON - Lissa on November 21, 2006
    Is it really over?????
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  • From ANON - snakevamp on November 21, 2006
    well i have to say this story keeps getting better and better.
    i wasnt suprised at harrys attempt to escape. but i am glad that he is finally admiting he needs help.
    and i am looking forward to seeing how draco is planning his seduction from a distance (takes notes)
    cant wait for more, this is still a very riveting story
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  • From YamiBakura on November 21, 2006
    This is still so much love. I was gleeful when I found out you'd updated again. Obviously, Harry's going to choose flying, and I'm grinning still, thinking of Narcissa and Harry and Draco, and the tangle they've gotten into. I love that Harry's already working finding someone to sex once and a while into his schedule XD Honestly, you've completely trapped me with this; I'll be lurking, I'm sure, waiting for another update!
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  • From ANON - nataliebug on November 21, 2006
    well im very glad! your writing is just so realisitic! great chapter...AGAIN!!! let me guess...the activity is quidditch :D i hope it turns into smutty quidditch or at least sensual quidditch :) good luck!
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  • From ANON - SLQ on November 21, 2006
    Ok, I have one thought on Minue's review. Voldemort has taken away everything that ever mattered to Harry. Killing his parents, leaving him with a prophecy and a scar, indirectly killing Sirius, he did it all. Why shouldn't Voldemort kill everyone Harry ever loved and everyone who ever loved him to break him before murdering him? It's our loved ones that we would die for every time and Harry's no different. I see what you're saying about the death of everyone at the Burrow but please consider my reasoning too. Off to chapter 13, I loved chapter 13! I'm now convinced that Narcissa will attempt to leak the whereabouts of the boy who lived and get him rescued. She sees Draco's devotion to Harry and wants it nipped in the bud before it becomes permanent on both their parts. Can't wait to see what happens next!
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  • From ANON - Draconayzia on November 20, 2006
    Oh boy. This battle of wills is going juvenile! XD

    And Cissa needs to be sneakier if she's planning anything. Yeesh! XD
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  • From ANON - acr on November 20, 2006
    Good chapter. MAN I hate Narcissa.
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  • From ANON - Fiona on November 20, 2006
    Hmm, wonder what that perfect activity will be. ;D
    Aww, your explanation of the deaths made me sad and realize just how much pain has Harry been through.. :(
    Hopefully, Draco can help him some more! Nice chapter, keep it up!
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  • From ANON - Mayo on November 20, 2006
    it keeps getting better and better.

    you simply must continue :D
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  • From ANON - Minue on November 20, 2006
    I liked this chapter very much. The conversation between Harry and Theresa was great, especially Harrys reactions.

    I have, however, a logic problem with the attack on the Weasleys.

    Please correct me if I understood it wrong, but:

    Here is what really happened:

    Voldemort waited for Harry to leave the burrow, then shot a strange spell at the burrow, which looked like a flaming stone, blew the house up and then created an image of himself which taunted Harry.

    Harry told everybody Voldemort appeared with fifty deatheaters and blew the burrow up with Avada Kedavra.

    That's a totally obvious lie! At least the Aurors should have realized that a different spell was used (and if they did, one of them would have talked to the press). Also, if Voldemort was there, with 50 (!) deatheaters, why didn't he just kill Harry? He would have seen him outside the house.

    And here is the second problem: If Voldemort knew where Harry was and was able to get past the wards, why did he wait for Harry to leave the house at all? Why didn't he just blow up the house with Harry in it, it would have solved all of his problems.

    I'm sorry, that makes no sense for me.
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  • From ANON - SLQ on November 20, 2006
    You know who would get a reaction from Harry? Snape is too predictable but what about Seamus or Neville? They both grew up around Harry at Hogwarts and knew Ron, Hermione, and the rest of the Weasleys. Neville is probably a better choice as Draco's friend as he is a pureblood but it's just a thought on my part. Also, Thank you for having Theresa point out to Harry that Draco does have his own agenda and offering Harry a spot at St. Mungo's. I love that Draco got to hear from someone other than friends and family that he's not just out to help Harry but help himself too. Please continue soon and I'm really enjoying your work!
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  • From ANON - Ann on November 19, 2006
    Poor Harry he is so depressed. What a sad demise of the Weasley's. Excellent written.

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  • From ANON - nataliebug on November 19, 2006
    this story is amazing. Your writing is fantastic and the plot is so addicting! i check adulfanfiction EVERY day to see if it's updated! great job so far and good luck with the rest of the story!
    p.s. have you had in major losses in your life? your writing is so realistic...you must of gone through something similiar?
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  • From ANON - Draconayzia on November 19, 2006
    Well shit. Draco's an ass, but maybe one with a decent enough idea of what to do. Yeesh!
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