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By : SilverPhantom
  • From ANON - Obsidian Phoenix on November 28, 2006
    I can't wait to see where this story is going....it is very interesting so far and I'm thoroughly hooked....update soon.
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  • From ANON - thrnbrooke on November 24, 2006
    Oh I need chapter 5!
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  • From ANON - Katonie on November 21, 2006
    This story has merrit. Keep it up and I'll keep reveiwing. This story rocks and you must continue till the day you die...OK, you don't have to but if you want to...
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  • From ANON - broken_wings on November 18, 2006
    ok, i likey. as for animagus form, try maybe a black snake, with an iridescent green sheen since he likes parseltongue. just an idea.
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  • From ANON - eliza on November 18, 2006
    what a succesful piece of writing... please update soon
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  • From ANON - alyxanderson on November 18, 2006
    update update update!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - jaimie on November 17, 2006
    thanks! that helped a lot ^_^. now..for an animagus form...yes the black panther has been overused...and so has the Phoenix ... hmmm i guess you could do a snake. lol you could even go and do another feline hehe a lion or tiger? lol >.< i'm not much help i guess... an owl? ...maybe a magical creature from 'Fantastic Beasts and Where to Find Them'? ...i would say a falcon or hawk...but that doesn't really suit him. our you can make him an ordinary house cat! my kitty Neko is all black and fluffy and i LOVE him!!*cuddles the grumpy cat*
    eh...well...i hope that help..at least a little lol.
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  • From ANON - sbkar on November 17, 2006
    Whilst looking through a recent copy of The Daily Prophet, I saw the following advertisement in the Personal Section:

    C. F. seeks information about Blondie and Scar. These two pets are beloved and missed. Please contact at Leaky Cauldron by asking for Dolores.

    As to animagus sitings, the newspaper and the WWN have been reporting a white Grim accompanied by a dark beast of unknown origin. The two are seen romping and playing in the area around Hogsmeade. Could they be related to strange goings-on that have been on the increase? No unexplained deaths or malicious incidents have been tied to the sitings.
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  • From ANON - Kireania on November 17, 2006
    Give harry the form of a black wolf or black snake. Or here's one i've never seen make him a fox. regular coloring or even more unique of a fox make him black... yeas i have an affinity for the color black. he's cunning smart quick and can be a famly and loving personality. i hope this helps. ja ne

    ps. love the story thus far and can't wait to read more.
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  • From ANON - crio on November 17, 2006
    omg how original!!! *applause* this is really kool, i likes it loads... i say turn him into a bunny or maybe some sort of bird.. But yea i agree a pantha is totally over done.. what about a bear or a snake to be ironic because he is a parselthongue after all..
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  • From ANON - Catstaff on November 17, 2006
    I'm liking this one so far! As to suggestions for animagi forms... I can see Harry as a bird, either a peregrine or a raven. And Draco ought to be a ferret, and be all indignant about what his form turns out to be because of Moody.

    ~Catstaff
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  • From ANON - Rc on November 14, 2006
    Love the story so far. A very creative approach and am looking forward to what is to come!
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  • From ANON - jaimie on November 13, 2006
    ...what the hell? it cut my review up! ...it's not all there now. there was a lot more too it.
    *pout*

    Harry and Draco are the only ones with double memories...that has to do with the dragon i bet. and who is that stranger? i thought it was Draco talking to Lucius...and what were they talking about?!

    i wanna know more about that dragon...or now it's those dragons huh?

    ...and damn...that's all i remember putting. i'm mad now.

    and here it is: UPDATE!! i wanna know what's next!
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  • From ANON - Jaimie on November 13, 2006
    not to sound repetitive but,(others have said the same) it is a little confusing. it's probably just me but, where is the wound? i'm having trouble with it. how big is it? is it on their back/shoulder , side of their shoulder, or arm?....lol i think i'm just silly.

    i too have to say good luck with keeping the memories apart ^^ i wouldn't be able to if i was writing it hehe but that's why you're writing it huh? >.
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  • From ANON - Jiall on November 13, 2006
    I know it's rather rude to just leave a review that simply states "more" however, that's all I wish to write. I find the idea of dual memories that do not cause an individual to constantly question thier own sanity interesting. I look forward to the next chapter.
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