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Reviews for Greeneyed Trouser Snake

By : dropedonmyhead
  • From AyaChan2006 on June 15, 2008
    hey are you going to continue this or should i just delete it from my list??
    e-mail me with your answer at kaoru_14_89@hotmail.com
    ...ta

    Aya

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  • From Leenah on April 02, 2007
    Yes, for goodness sake, continue. I loved this story when I thought it only had two chapters, but the prospect of more has certainly brightened my day.

    Leenah.
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  • From tiapotter18 on March 29, 2007
    please, just continue the story. i really like it!
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  • From Heksy on March 28, 2007
    Whahahahaha, "Operation Find The Bottom"?
    Only you can come up with something like that....
    Please...continue, if only for the laughs...
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  • From blackpaddy on March 28, 2007
    awesome! yes do please continue but maybe make it under a new story...?
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  • From thrnbrooke on March 28, 2007
    Oh tooo too funny! I can't wait for chapter 4!
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  • From misslala on March 28, 2007
    This is too cute...lol That was some good smut though. Hey don't mind Anon, see me personally I think they are both able to be vulnerable enough to give or take...Yes one may be more dom than the other but in my expereince with my husband, one of us usually takes the lead and the other enjoys it very much. Though there are strictly top and bottoms-who cares, its your story! ;)
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  • From RentaiKitten on March 27, 2007
    Keep going - it's hilarious!
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  • From VRon8899 on March 27, 2007
    Should?!?!?! You better!!!! Er..I mean, Please do continue!!! ^^
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  • From NightLo on February 08, 2007
    Just read reviews and find out some saying of not supporting bottoming Harry - actually my personal preference is Top!Draco, but if I really come across any fiction of Bottom!Draco, but Draco and Harry have equal share of power, I will just skip that part and read on! So I think bottom!Harry is also VERY okay!

    Actually I don't like any fic that have TOO submissive Harry, like Harry is fragile and weak and broken, and Draco is somewhat powerful and superman-like, I actually have my hairs stand on whenever reading one! That is too OOC (just found out the meaning of this word) - and I don't like it!!! In your case, even Harry is a bottom, but their relationship is just perfect - no one dominating anything except sex life!

    Please keep on, and I will definitely like to read more!
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  • From dantemalfoy1 on January 25, 2007
    I liked your story a lot. The dynamics of the couple are interesting. I loathe stories where suddenly Harry is superpowerful and that implies that Draco becomes his completely submissive partner. Most of HD fiction appears to consist of those stories, which is disheartening.

    I don't hate stories where Draco is a bottom per se, a good example would be "Shadow of his wings" where he bottoms but is a forceful and powerful character. I just hate where Draco is degraded and expected to behave like a welcome mat.

    Your story is nothing like that, it is vibrant, funny and believable. Harry lets Draco take control in the bedroom, but he is a complete mainstay of the relationship. I just hope you write more stories in this rich vein. Do not be disheartened by petty critique, when you clearly have written a very good fic.
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  • From ZooArmy on January 24, 2007
    Oh my god please please please tell me there will be another chapter.
    another chapter as hot, as great, as awesome, as fucking sexy, like the last one!
    *crouching on my knees*
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  • From itsallgood on January 23, 2007
    Heeheee!! I loved this. Absolutely loved it. The strip-down at the party scene...nice. Hot. ;)
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  • From ANON - Natasha on January 09, 2007
    Very Very good story. I really relly enjoyed it. Well Done. :) :)
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  • From ANON - anonymous on December 31, 2006
    wow...that was great. That was...something I could definitely picture Draco doing--all of it. And thank you for giving that reviewer their just desserts--Harry is referred to over and over as being small for his age so good on you for not making him a power-buff auror like in some fics lol. And even though it was a tiny part, I just loved it when at the party draco downs a whiskey and jingles the glass for Harry to get him another one. fucking fantastic.

    cheers

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