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Reviews for Potestatem obscuri lateris nescis

By : Guderian
  • From sanda on July 17, 2007
    good chapter
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  • From Sinkingboat on July 16, 2007
    interesting.. who do you plan to have for the harem?
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  • From sanda on January 31, 2007
    good chapter
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  • From ANON - Shardae on January 14, 2007
    So what happens when they get Harry to their world???
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  • From ANON - cxz on January 03, 2007
    more
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  • From ANON - momoko on January 03, 2007
    good story
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 01, 2007
    i'm very intrigued with the the story and hope you post soon!
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  • From ANON - A Reviwer on December 29, 2006
    First, while there's obviously a lot of people who like it, there's also a lot who don't, so things like mentions of MPREG and the like should probably be mentioned in the coding. Second, this is really, really short. Too short to be a prologue, to short to be a first chapter, and too short to really give anybody a hint of what you're aiming at. Also, paragraphs are really long, and you use a lot of words, but you don't really seem to say anything.

    Lots of this /looks/ like it's got potential, but the story really needs to be betaed. Assuming you post anything soon enough for me to remember that I'd reviewed this, I'll keep an eye out, but as it stands, I'm really kinda let down. The codes you'd listed got my hopes up, but this chapter doesn't come through on any of it, and infact was very disappointing.


    Later
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  • From ANON - HarryFan on November 19, 2006
    This is shaping up to be a really great story.
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  • From ANON - kratos on November 11, 2006
    a good start i can't wait until you update soon but can the next chapters be longer thanks and bye.

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  • From ANON - corey on November 11, 2006
    its ok but needs longer and when you write a small chapter make sure you put another long chapter after it quick because people forget stories that only start off with very little.
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  • From ANON - Aria-Chan on November 11, 2006
    Very interesting and intriguing beginning! I am very much looking forward to reading more. Thank you. If you want to discuss ideas or something you are welcome to email me :)

    xxxx Aria-Chan
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  • From ANON - angel on November 11, 2006
    wow that was awesome start ... please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more ...later for now

    angel

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