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From ANON - on July 28, 2016
I just finished reading Intangible, it is awesome. I'm hoping you will start updating again, I need to know how Harry reacts to the Vesper. Will he tolerate Draco having sex with the others? What is wrong with Harry that he crushed the Hogwart's people? Why did Hermione react to Harry with such negativity? So many questions I need answered. I love that there is so much angst in this. It is so different from everything else. I think that it's brilliant. I tried to figure out how to contact you on live journal, but couldn't figure it out. I hope you are feeling okay. Just know you are missed.

Hestia

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From Tommy-Lane on October 12, 2015
You know what I love about your stories? They are raw, filled with imperfect, slightly crazed people, no sugar coating, just these damn raw scenes that leave me spell bound. I hope that makes sense because I truly adore your writing and wish I could capture the base of emotions like you can in a such a brilliant way. I had to read this in two sittings (super frustrating because time was not on my side this week) and oddly enough I just kept thinking about the image of Harry in the tree. About Hermione staring at her life long friend and feeling nothing but malice and hate and her quickly trying to talk herself out of those feeling because it was Harry. About Draco so damn excited and rooted to his spot, adoring the fierceness of Harry's new look and about Matten(eh, did I spell that right?) who probably wanted to grab Draco and run while chanting "oh shit, oh shit, oh shit" in his head.

Don't know why that stuck with me all day and night but it did.

Then Harry roared in insanity and I couldn't help but grin when Draco roared back. I love that he was so pissed that Harry took the ring, that he was able to throw off the call and just shout at Harry and get the boy to see 'some' sense. He is no longer the quiet, repressed, fearful boy from the beginning and I love that. These two have a mountain of issues but there's something...sweet?...ah that's not quite the right word but its the best I can think up at the moment, about them. I hope whatever is fucked in Harry's head from being thrown into that other dimension gets healed and that they can actually carve out a good life with the Vesper. I have my fingers crossed that we get to see a scene of Harry interacting with Matten.

And Hermione, down in that tomb...goodness can you image her walking out to see the entire village fucking with Harry and Draco going at it in the middle of it all? Ha, I bet she'd start taking notes.

I cannot wait to see what happens next. Will Draco truly be in that form forever and thus force him to never leave the village? How will Harry deal with Draco and his harem? And will Snape and Jaz actually make it out to the village? I can't believe there's only two chapters left!

On a personal note, I'm so very sorry to hear that you're feeling sick again! I sincerely hope that it's some bizarre fluke and that you start feeling better very soon. Best of luck!
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From ANON - blj.14 on October 03, 2015
Just read ch.22 and I hate you right now. Drarry is my favorite couple ofall time and you have ruined it for me with Draco's actions. I believe a relationship is between two people who love each other,not group sex with any body handy when you are horny. I am so disappointed with Draco. He didn't even wait to see if Harry had really died. Some mate he is. I can't finish.
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From Tommy-Lane on September 20, 2015
How on earth did I miss your update? I check this story constantly and yet...ah well, got to read it now :) I'm so excited to see Draco coming into his own and I can't wait to see him fully fierce in his own right. The suspense is killing me! I feel like I'm constantly on the edge of my seat, each chapter inching me closer only to fling up more questions and keep me there.

"The boy was his last thread of sanity, the only one that would not look at him in fear even at his worst, and Harry knew he was at his worst. He could not stop himself."
- I am so freakin nervous for Harry right now, he's gone mental and violent and I know once he comes back to his senses he's going to hate himself for what he did at the castle. I'm dying to see what happens, will Jaz and Snape (by the way that was an awesome scene between those two, such opposites that mesh so wonderfully together in these little snippets you give us) make it to Harry before he makes it to the village? Will they be able to restore part of his sanity? Or will it have to be Draco who brings him back to himself? Part of me hopes Harry gets to Draco first, even though it's sure to be heated and angry and well...violently sexy.

I'm dying in suspense waiting to see their reunion. And, though it seems so strange to say this, I hope Harry doesn't hurt the Vesper for manipulating/threatening Draco into leaving and then having him in a way Harry very much feels should be reserved for him. I wonder how in the world he's going to deal with that aspect of Draco wanting to be with the vespers...or will that need be curved if he has Harry back and the ring comes off?

Ah I'm rambling at you again. I'm still thoroughly loving this story and can't wait for an update!
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From BAFan on September 04, 2015
Ch. 20

Hmm. Seems as if some of Harry's "saving people thing" has rubbed off on Draco. :-p Very interesting chapter, with probably even more interesting events yet to come.
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From Tommy-Lane on August 31, 2015
First off, I love that your expanding the Vesper village and their people - doesn't distract from the romance thread at all in my mind, makes it deeper and more complex and really just plain brilliant :)

Now those last three chapters...my goodness. I kept thinking about how at the beginning of this story Draco was so scared of his sexuality, so torn up over wanting another boy - over wanting Harry - and now he's thrown in the middle of a village that revolves around sex in a way and their all their just dying to please him and oh my, the poor confused boy! Then realizing that he was giving off the mating call that Harry had done to him and that scene with him and Matten and letting out all his hurt from his childhood and all his loneliness - you got me all teary. It was a perfect way for Draco to finally relax and start to understand the Vespers. It was interesting watching as Draco started to realize that so much of what he was witnessing he had dealt with Harry about before so he knew what to do to make it better.

Now Harry's waking up and oh gosh he's going to be pissed isn't he? Because now not only is Draco gone, but it sounds like he is planning on living with the Vespers after school is over, AND he just basically had an orgy with them. Yup Harry is going to be pissed and why do I get the feeling that Draco is going to love/hate it? I'm so curious to see what happens with the sleeping Kila-thing (why can't I ever remember the name when I'm writing?). Will he wake up when Harry comes storming in? How will the Vesper village react to Harry, especially the young ones? Ah so many questions!

Can't wait for more, I love this story!
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From ANON - Anon on August 31, 2015
As a fanfic, this story is good. The one thing I will say, though, is I completely lost interest about a chapter or two after Draco went with the Vesper. I will admit that I've just glanced at the chapters since. The ending of this lastest chapter has me wonder if this story is in the right location. If this community is going to be the end result or permanent ending, it really should be in the threesomes/moresomes section.
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From ANON - Rini Yamori on August 30, 2015
Oh my god please never stop writing you are amazing and I love this story to death I hope more comes out soon or I might just die
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From Tommy-Lane on August 13, 2015
Dear me, I had this ball of intense unease rolling around my stomach all through chapter 18, the walk there very chilling in this quiet subdued kind of way that just made it all that much more emotional. I sure hope Harry's okay, will he be able to shift back to human form or is he destined to remain the torn up beast in body and in spirit? I can't wait until he wakes up and no doubt freaks over Draco missing.

The Vesper village was very interesting. I must say that apart form the massive bed that they want Draco to inhabit I didn't picture that at all. It sheds some new light on them knowing that the Vesper waiting outside the castle all that time where their young who didn't have the control to ignore Draco's call. Makes a little less creepy in a way. And I did not expect them to be in human form. How interesting, its so intriguing with their mangled bodies, I can't help but think that they are so beat up because bother Vesper and Humans can't help but pick fights with each other out of fear. A never ending cycle that perpetuates itself.

I find it so unsettling how they just kept touching Draco and humming at him. It sounds as if their intentions towards him are good, in their perspective at least, but I can't help but think RUN, RUN! Espcially after that little hint about the Kils-something (whatever Harry is) being asleep nearby. What is that all about?! I know they say they won't force Draco into anything but I fear that if it comes down to it, that they stoop so low as to try every dirty trick imaginable as well as trying to off Harry.

Oh goodness, I seriously can't figure out what will happen but I can't wait for more! Update soon please!
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From ANON - starr on August 12, 2015
good god and you left it there !!!!! when is Harry going to wake up....he is not human anymore so what's going to happen now !!!!! Drao has the whole village wanting to sleep with him ??? strange 1!!!! Thanks for the update !!!!!
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From Tommy-Lane on July 29, 2015
Questions, questions, questions - the suspense is driving me nuts!

When I pictured his tourer of the village, I thought it would last like a day but a week? Holy that just makes me even more nervous! I'm very happy Hermione is going with him, it will be interesting to see how that all works out. The Vespers - especially that Matten guy - are rather fascinating and intriguing...in a creepy way, but still intriguing none the less.

"Matten gave a soft purr and Draco snarled, whirling towards the annoying creature that kept trying to control him.
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From ANON - starr on July 28, 2015
Only Hermione would find way to go with Draco...not happy here that Draco was so much of an dumb ass to go with them !!!!! so the bird is alive and so is Harry.... Thanks for the update and hope to see more soon ::):):):)):):):)):):):)
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From ANON - starr on July 25, 2015
OMG is Draco nuts to go with them !!!!!!!! he'll never get out and if Harry services he'll kill everyone !!!!!!
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From BAFan on July 25, 2015
Ch. 15

I repeat, oh shit. Draco, what the hell are you doing?

Deja-vu!
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From BAFan on July 25, 2015
Ch. 14

Oh shit. Draco, what the hell are you doing?
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