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By : Rumpelyssa
  • From ANON - cateye on November 19, 2006
    way to go Hermione for sticking up for Severus to Harry,loved it.I love how you write Molly in your stories,you not only write her as having the fellings of a wife and mother,but also a life before the husband and kids.I felt bad for Lucius when he was thinking about Narcissaand Draco,he even blames himself for Severus and I don't think thay want him doing that.I know soon you will make Lucius happy,and we could see alittle more Severus!Can't wait for more.
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  • From ANON - Pam on November 19, 2006
    Great post, love the story, can't wait until you post again, so please post again soon. Thanks.
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  • From ANON - lisa on November 19, 2006
    Poor Lucius, so sad and so alone. There is a spark there and I do hope Hermione opens her eyes to it and convinces Lucius he can live and love again. I like this Lucius, he's humble but ohh so sad. and He loved Narcissa and his son. The lil talk with her painting before bed was so heart rending, he still assured her no one could replace her. He needs someone and am glad Narcissa told him as much. Love it Bella. it's another awesome story. and lol I would definitely love it that Narcissa was updated. awaiting the next chappie.
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  • From ANON - Lady Lynn on November 19, 2006
    I must say, I like where you are going with this story so far and I love that her virginity went to Zabini of all people! I can't wait to see what happens next.
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  • From ANON - LaBibliographe on November 19, 2006
    Realistically, I know that Lucius isn't meant to be anywhere near a nice person in canon, but I can't help being totally seduced by your Lucius, commanding and arrogant, but a caring family man who has lost his whole family to tragedy. Oh, did I mention sexy? His attraction to her legs is a very believable way for him to start liking more of her and his errant thought about making Hermione his wife was shivery good - as though the idea had sneaked up on him from his own mind.

    I'm enjoying your take on Lucius and Hermione, and the way you are getting them together is great, with other characters breaking up the intensity of the L&H initial interaction. I really like this story. I spend more time writing than reading, but I'll be waitng for your update. Thanks for writing this!
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  • From ANON - Catstaff on November 19, 2006
    I'm very much enjoying this one. It makes for an interesting twist on the how-they-met angle. My only -slight- quibble is that you've stated Hermione's ambition is to be a secretary. I picture her as wanting to put her organizational skills to use for more than just making one person look good. Secretary as a starting point, maybe, but not as her ultimate goal. I can picture her as working her way up to the top of the Wizarding equivalent of FEMA or something like that... where groups will have to be deployed to handle emergencies at a moment's notice, and organization is the key. (Yes, I know there's a Ministry department that does something like that, but I don't have time to comb the books to look it up right this moment. The family is waiting for me to finish writing this review so we can go out for breakfast.)

    Anyway, I'm happy to see such a quick update and hope to see many more.

    ~Catstaff
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  • From ANON - Carol (hp_bcn) on November 19, 2006
    Cooool! I'd love to get Malfoy for myself too, sign me down for next secretary practices!

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  • From ANON - Mary on November 19, 2006
    I loved it! Poor Lucius can't make up his mind about he and hermione. And I loved Ron's reaction about all the shopping bags she had! Looking forward to reading the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - Lyssa on November 19, 2006
    Awe, that was sweet. Keep up the good work
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  • From ANON - skye on November 18, 2006
    Well, I am a brand-spankin'-new Lucius/Hermoine Fan ( just started today!, as I'm reading waaaaay to fast through the DM/HG and SS/HG stories)

    This one has me tingling for more!

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  • From ANON - LaBibliographe on November 17, 2006
    This sounds like a very promising storyline. I'm a sucker for boss-secretary stories so this suits me perfectly. I do like how you haven't rushed Hermione into Lucius's arms and made them fall all over each other right away. That he's lonesome seems workable, even though it's only been six months since his family died. He never struck me as a loner type so she probably seems interesting to him. Plus he can already see she is living up to her reputation as clever. I don't think the mature Lucius would be interested in anyone without brains even if the packaging was spectacular. (Well, he might enjoy unwrapping the package briefly before tossing it away...) They do suit each other and if they find that out after, say, 20-30 chapters then I'll be reading each and every one of them. I hope Lucius isn't TOO saintly, but I do like the possibility that he isn't going to be mad, bad, and dangerous to know. Okay, maybe a teeny, tiny bit bad. If I wanted bland, boring, and upstanding I could read a story about Arthur. Oh! Maybe there aren't any... 8-)
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  • From ANON - cateye on November 17, 2006
    Lucius can train me anyday,but idon't know about the makeing fun of Severus,AND HE HAS A STYLE ALL HIS OWN.wE ARE GOING TO BE SEEING sEVERUS IN THIS TO AREN'T WEIT JUST ISN'T A STOTY WITHOUT SEVERUS.I CAN UNDERSTAND WHY AURTER FELLS THE WAY HE DOES ABOUT LUCIUS,HE HAS SEEN ALOT OF THE THINGS LUCIUS HAS DONE IN THE PAST,AND THAT MAKES TRUST HARD.THE MALFOYS HAVE ALWAYS BEEN BATRADED AS A CLOSE FAMILY IN THE BOOKS,WHAT CISSY WENT THROUGH IN THE 6TH BOOK SHOWS SHE HAS ALOT OF LOVE FOR HER SON.NOMATTER HOW WE THINK OF LUCIUS ALL THE SIGNS POINT TO HE LOVES HIS FAMILY,AND THAY LOVE HIM.VERY FEW FAN FICS SHOW ANY OF THAT,THATS WHY I LIKE YOURS SO MUCH BECAUSE YOU WRITE THE WHOLE PICTURE.
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  • From ANON - angel on November 17, 2006
    wow that was awesome ... i like how she stood up for him please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more ... later for now

    angel
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  • From ANON - Dee Dee on November 17, 2006
    Wow you did it again, I love this story!
    When Lucius makes his move I wonder if Hermione will go for it, or do the
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  • From beigelexus01 on November 17, 2006
    Ohh...I like this story a lot. I love seeing Hermione paired with Lucius. It is a wonderful change from seeing her paired with Snape all the time. Please update soon and you are doing a great job!!
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