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  • From MargBennington on May 01, 2017

    I love Salazar! Funny, witty and sly to boot!


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  • From ANON - Blk Buttafly on September 07, 2013
    Are you going to finish this Story? It's really getting good. I really like your writing style. Keep up the great work!
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  • From ANON - Wendi on June 26, 2011
    Please ,tell me somewhere this story Is finished?I need more it was great
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  • From ANON - Miss Anslow on April 30, 2011
    Omg, this story is by far the best I have read in a very long time. It's fantastically written, the plot is so intricate and perfect and I thank you for writing what you have so far. Please update soon as I am dying to know what happens next :)
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  • From ANON - Amber on March 11, 2011
    I love this and I hope that you update soon and I cannot wait to see when they find the real Severus that is gonna be awesome and what of Voldemort?
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  • From ANON - CS on April 21, 2010
    I'm very much enjoying this story. I do hope that it is not permanently abandoned. Please write more... thanks!
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  • From ANON - Kay on June 23, 2009
    I love this story so far update soon please!
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  • From ANON - michelle on August 15, 2008
    ohhhh my gawd. this story is awesome!i love the fact Hermione's attracting men left and right. haha! she's actually one of the two (teenage)females i like in HP. The other being Luna. I'm guessing the false Snape is Rufus? anyway! if you've got a mailing list, can you add me to it? please! or do you have a fanfiction.net account? i'm gonna read your other stories now and they look so promising!kya!
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  • From ANON - mournie on June 12, 2008
    Hi, a quick comment on the linguistics of this chapter, though the story line is fresh, interresting, and well-paced. The gang are unlikely to have used the term 'caucasion' as well as 'nigger'. It would be more common for the first to not be commented on, to be 'white', or a general compliment. The 'caucasion' also seems a bit above the vocab of gangs (though this is because yours is) The scene also seems slightly staged; as if it has not been experienced. You could possibly make them seem fairly drunk. In the next chapter, (I've only read to there), it would also be unlikely for race to be mentioned in the arrest, particularly using the term 'black' as opposed to 'afro-carribean'. I'm impressed with the new take on that though; Blaize is mostly written as Italian or eastern-european.
    All together, innovative idea, well-written execution!!!
    (love the way you write Lucius; and my bet is on Snape ganging up with Narcissa!)
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  • From Heidi191976 on November 17, 2007
    I know that it has been a while since you have updated this story, but I hope that you will PLEASE continue with it. I would love to find out who the faux Snape is and if they find the real Snape. I would also like to see Lucius and Hermione get married finally and start their family. So PLEASE PLEASE continue.
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  • From ANON - Julia on November 04, 2007
    I do have my suspicions concerning the current minister. ;)
    Are you going to continue this ff?

    Love,
    Julia
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  • From Shalengreh on October 07, 2007
    i wait for more....more!
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  • From ANON - Lady Darcy on September 11, 2007
    *singing*
    Where'd you go?
    I miss you so.
    Seems like it's been forever
    since you've been gone.


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  • From lizziek on July 10, 2007
    What a lovely, yummy story. Luscious is being a bit too nice for me, I really like him as an evil bastard but any Luscious is better than most anyone else (except for maybe Snape). Speaking of Snape - "the brightest witch of her age" eh? Sirius back from the veil? That would be sooo delicious and if Regulus can show up, I don't see why Sirius can't.

    Anyway, kudos to you for a terrific story. I wasn't sure about Hermione as a secretary so it's nice to see her moving up in her career already. Looking forward to more!
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  • From ANON - LadyDarcy on July 05, 2007
    WE NEED NEW CHAPTERS!
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