Click Here!

Reviews for Potions,Poisons and Antidotes

By : shelagh
  • From ANON - skye on January 12, 2007
    HEEheeee.....lovely chappie as per usualy. I must say though....I finished 10, went to scrounge for lunch and I come back to ....11! I love the term " went pear shaped" guessing is British slag, but its funny for this Canuk Skye
    Report Review

  • From ANON - ccrawley on January 12, 2007
    Overall, enjoyed the story.
    Report Review

  • From ANON - kazfeist on December 19, 2006
    Wonderful action so far, Sheedy! :D If you want, I know a beta who could help you clean up the grammar glitches. But the story itself is lots of fun to read! Keep up the good work!
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Anon on December 19, 2006
    WOW good job!
    Report Review

  • From juls on December 14, 2006
    Wow.... hope every thing works out.
    Report Review

  • From ANON - sheedy on December 12, 2006
    Thanks Kazfeist(sp?) that's exactly the kind of input I need to get better. I unfortunately don't have a beta and it has been years since I took an english class. I would love to know where the major mistakes are so that I can fix them. Feel free to drop me an email to point them out, I will try to make sure my email is available on my author panel.

    To all of my other reviewers thank you so much for the words of encouragement. Your reviews do make such a difference in my muse.
    Report Review

  • From ANON - kazfeist on December 12, 2006
    A wonderful idea and well-executed, so far. Your original character seems a good match for Severus. Some annoying grammar glitches throughout, which I only mention because they distract from the lovely flow of your story. I might suggest a wonderful beta, named eilonwy1, who has a Livejournal.com account. She's an English professor and a wonderful author in her own right. Her stories, Baby Days and Baby Days2 are up at Coloured Grey. I wanted to wait until I'd read all the chapters before reviewing. Can't wait for more. :D
    Report Review

  • From ANON - guardgeek on December 11, 2006
    LOVE THIS FIC UPDATE SOON!!!! OMG what's going to happen??? poor Hermione!
    Report Review

  • From ANON - lisa on December 04, 2006
    Woot Woot!!!! Yay for Severus and Sarah!!!!! Cant wait to see what happens next. and lol hopefully Severus wont need his room. hehehe. hope we get to find out. and I hope they work out. It would be awesome for Severus. and I am glad Draco and Hermione are finally moving forward and are sooo in love. They are soo cute together. I see dark clouds ahead though, the fun and fluff cant last forever. More more more Please. Please update soon.
    Report Review

  • From ANON - lisa on November 29, 2006
    wow. Good chappie. Poor Weasley's. it's quite sad and all.but also quite Happy too. Draco and Hermione are soooo cute together. more please. Update soon. Please.
    Report Review

  • From ANON - vixen on November 26, 2006
    yay you updated.... I loved this chapter, I am soo looking forward to the next, love sev with the harley....
    Report Review

  • From ANON - lisa on November 26, 2006
    Awwwww that was sooo sweet and sooo romantic. I loved it. Awesome chappie. and lol Severus and his bike, woot woot. love the harley. Of course a powerful wizard such as he on a harley makes difinite sense. and uggg Percy. I knew he must be, he's too snobby and too driven for power not to be a deatheater. Poor Arthur and Molly. It hurts beyond the worst pain you can imagine to lose your child , but even worse to find they were into stuff that was totally wrong and horrible. more more more please. It seems Sev and Hermione have moved on and are back working seemlessly. cool. Please update soon.
    Report Review

  • From ANON - TNgirl on November 26, 2006
    WOW! That was unexpected! At first I thought you were gonna say that it was Ron, but Percy is bad enough! Poor Severus!! I have a feeling Blasie(sp?)is a part of this, maybe I'm crazy! I hope so! I can't wait to see what happens next!! Update soon, please!!
    Report Review

  • From ANON - lisa on November 25, 2006
    Awwww Poor Severus. heartbroken. too bad this isn't a threesome lol. ahh well. I am surprised Draco let it slip right there. and it seems Severus and Draco need a lil talk to men things. It will be awkward if Hermione does marry Draco with Severus as her boss. more please. Please update soon.
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Avanell on November 22, 2006
    I like this, except for a couple of nit-picky things (no worries). That was real fun, how Draco let it out in front of everyone. And poor sevvie...I'll take him!
    Report Review

T.O.S. | Content Guidelines | DMCA Info | F.A.Q. | Facebook | Tumblr | Abuse | Support | Contact | Donate

Click Here!