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By : Vittani
  • From thrnbrooke on July 09, 2007
    Sooo need chapter 33! Pansy and Neville will make a cute couple!
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  • From serenagold on July 09, 2007
    The war is on!

    I want to comend you on that speach you wrote for Harry a chapter or so ago. It was very well writen and displayed the conviction he had for his beliefs in an incredible manner. I'm also glad Pansy is on their side. I love the fact that she loves Neville. Neville never gets any play in these stories. Poor Neville.
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  • From Jan on July 09, 2007
    WOW! I am so happy to see that Pansy is with them. Hope that they all end up with their loved one's. Please update soon. ^_^
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  • From Sheree on July 09, 2007
    First, thank you hey now for defending me. That was really nice of you. Second, Vittani, I did tell you why I was bored. It seemed that the interactions with Harry and his snake were the only ongoing interactions for chapter after chapter. It seemed as if the summer was never going to end. I don't mind stories with a lot of chapters as long as they move quickly and it was as if it wasn't moving forward. I still check in from time to time and read what's been updated. Of course it's rare that I review again if someone takes offense to what I've said in a previous review; however, I really liked the new chapter and the relationship between Draco, Blaise and Pansy. I'm glad Pansy is loyal to them and I think she and Neville would be cute together.
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  • From misslala on July 09, 2007
    yay!! I like it. I'm glad Pansy isn't a bad guy!! I like how she likes Neville! Can't wait to see what you have next, lol
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  • From Heksy on July 06, 2007
    Well, Tipsy got home and went right into the kitchen, after profusely apologising.
    Mimsy came to tell me there were some bottles of Ogden's missing, after Tipsy arrived...I wonder, hahahaha.
    Anywho, loved this chapter.
    It sets the mood for what is about to come.
    You did very well.
    Update soon and please send me a heads-up, thanks.
    Oh yeah...the visit will occur in december, for christmas, or did I already tell you that?
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  • From ANON - uh-huh on July 02, 2007
    Using magic he snuck beneath the compartment door (even with that it was a tight fit) and casting a varied form of legilimens (to read thoughts not invade) listened to the boys fears. And then he knew exactly what to do.

    He ( this snake familiar) is just taking all kinds of liberties, ain't he. So he uses magic to read thoughts and fears of another to in fact use that to his own and his "masters" own advantage. No, that is not an invasion of privacy. No, that is not over stepping ones boundaries. It is perfectly ok and innocent doings because the ends justify the means. ::bat my pretty little eyes:: uh-huh

    Hello Dumbledore. (actually I think it is all a bit worse than Dumbledore)
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  • From ANON - so on July 02, 2007
    So, after reading Draco's thoughts his now passed away friend Aiden, the whole situation all the sudden reminded me of Dumbledore and Harry. The ends justify the means. Harry is a bit humble, knows what muggles are all about (good, bad, human), has loss many people to VoldyMort, but he has also defeated him many times and is building a confidence there, also has a lot of hang ups now that can be manipulated, etc...So Dumbledore may have gotten Harry that way by ommitting things, ignoring things, encouraging things..SO. No biggie. In the end Harry is better for it right? The ends do justify the means. Right?

    So now Draco is on his way to "Harry's" side. Of course he got that way cause of a imaginary/non existant relationship with a nobody named Aiden who has now perished unjustly by the hand of Pervy Voldy Pants...but its no big right, just a little lie. The ends justify the means. Now Draco is on his way to being the perfect mate for Harry-kins. Little lies, by and by...no big.

    So how is Dumbledore this big-bad? and Krai...he a saint, right?
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  • From ANON - hm on July 02, 2007
    So you killed Aiden off. Well that's better than nothing, I suppose. It still seems rather dishonest, though.
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  • From ANON - hey now on July 02, 2007
    hey great fic. Although I don't get how Krai talking to Draco is ever going to help Harry and his relationship. Its Harry that needs to know he's talking to Draco and Draco that needs to know he was talking to Harry. If Draco finds out he's talking to a snake I doubt he'd be impressed or happy. I wouldn't. Just when you think you can open up to someone they are just being dishonest. it's rotten.

    ANd you don't have to jump down Shree's throat. She didn't say she hated your story. ONly she was getting board. Meaning she likes the premise and wanted to continue liking it. You don't have to be snide. It makes you look bad. Just because a review might not be all gushing and oohs and ahs doesn't mean the reader hates your story enough to stop reading. Alot of readers review in hopes that what they review will impact future chapters so that means they let you know what they like and don't like. You were kind of harsh in your response. And you don't have to respond to negative reviews or reviews that don't sing your praises. KNowing how to take reviews of both the good and bad kind is part of being a good writer.
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  • From thrnbrooke on July 01, 2007
    Soooo need chapter 32! I know Harry wants to keep Draco safe but he's made himself weaker! Draco needs to make Harry see that!
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  • From Jan on July 01, 2007
    Loved it.


    Please update soon ^_^
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  • From ANON - Slytherin Sailor on July 01, 2007
    OMG! thank you so much for ur review. I was so flatered when I saw it. anyway I just wanted to let you know how much I love 'familiar' and I can't wait for the next chapter!!!
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  • From misslala on July 01, 2007
    Poor Harry, having to put off mating, when Draco now seems ready. haha Boy they are in for a rough ride. Looking forward to more :)
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  • From coru on July 01, 2007
    I love your story as allways but I was wondering if you have ever heard of a harry snape story that is harry being a veela and the ruler of the veela not to metion heir of all the founders and merlin
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