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By : Vittani
  • From wvsailor on May 20, 2007
    Woohoo! Love it so far! Is Dumbles going to be as evil as he sounds? I've never liked the character, to manipulative for his own good and he never seems to get caught. Looking forward to you next update!
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  • From Jerica on May 18, 2007
    Are they sure no one saw them? I mean someone could have been there and then left with them noticing because they were too caught up in each other. What are they going to find?
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  • From VillesSlave on May 18, 2007
    I like how in depth your story is. It makes it a bit slow-paced, but I think it is necessary for the depth of AU that your story is. I like ^_^
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  • From Jan on May 18, 2007
    I love this bloody story. Can't wait for another update. So please, please update soon. :D
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  • From misslala on May 17, 2007
    Wow, I am shocked! Thank you so much for reccomending my story! *Blushes* I feel all gooey and teary, I am such a girl!!! LOL

    OH! And this was a nice chapter, I always love when the boys end up grinding into one another until they cum, *fans self* that is so hot - its so intense!!! *rawr* Ok, so now that I am done gushing, I can't wait for more! :)
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  • From thrnbrooke on May 17, 2007
    Soooo can't wait for chapter 27!
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  • From ANON - Aaliyah on May 17, 2007
    oh man i gotta learn to get these reviews into one review, lol. anyways, i just wanted to say to that person who keeps critisizing your work, uhhhh, hello! this is a fricken FANFIC! its NOT REAL! its okay to have class issues, and it doesnt matter if its logical or not that harry's hair is long. hes not real, therefore, his muscles will not be strained. so stop nit-picking and just read the story. if you have some real criticism, then go ahead and say it, dont waste time on the umimportant stuff, especially if the fact that harrys hair is long adds to the story. sheesh!
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  • From ANON - Aaliyah on May 17, 2007
    wow that chapter was great as well, i was so excited when i saw that you had updated! and i dont think your story is between and outline and a story, its definitely a story. the characters are developing just fine, especially in this chapter where i saw a lot of character development in draco, and some in harry. i saw how they are changing, how harry comforts draco and draco belongs to harry. its coming along perfectly. once again, i cant wait for the next chapter. oh, and congratulations on finishing your exams, thats gotta be a relief.
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  • From stasa on May 17, 2007
    Well, all I can say is, I most certainly hope that someday somebody will answer my question that way
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  • From ANON - VM on May 08, 2007
    ah poor Draco has it bad for Harry. Nice images for such a quick chapter though. Excellent and good luck on those exams. I myself am so busy anymore, its crazy.

    good work,
    VM
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  • From Draeconin on May 07, 2007
    Chapter 22: You have a real fetish for using the word 'bar'. In fact it's OVER-used. I would suggest you use 'except' and other words/phrases as well.

    The story? Somewhere between an outline and a real story, in my opinion. It needs filling out: not so much in details, but in developing the characters.

    It would also help if there weren't so many run-on sentences, and punctuation was used more correctly. The story *does* have promise, but I think it could use more work. Keep at it, though; I believe you have the talent.
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  • From thrnbrooke on May 07, 2007
    Sooo need chapter 26! How wonderful!
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  • From Draeconin on May 07, 2007
    Chapter 11: Careful of how you have the characters talk; it's a class issue. Ron, as one of the lower class, would certainly say 'owt' for 'ought', but Harry would never say 'summat'.

    The only other story issue I have is the length of Harry's hair. Yes, it would look 'super-cool', but that much hair, as thick as it is, would weigh at least five to ten pounds - all pulling on his scalp and neck, leading to muscle strain by the end of the day, and likely headaches much sooner. Not to mention that he'd be sitting on it, having it snag on stuff, getting in the way during dueling practice, etc. I'd say mid-back to lower back at the longest for practical purposes. At that length it could be controlled by braiding or binding.
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 07, 2007
    I must say I love this story. It's quite excellent, and even fun! And funny in places. And... uh... Aberforth Dumbledore fucks goats!

    Cheers
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  • From Vraaq on May 06, 2007
    Hey there,

    I just read your story, and well, I think the fact I read all 25 chapters in one breath should say enough about the quality ;) I like your sstyle, and you're very good with tension arcs. But I do feel some things are a bit over the top. Here I aim on all those different bloodlines in Harry, he became a bit to powefull and special to my taste. I do love Krai though. The looks, the talk, everything :) I think Krai is a very respectable snake. I wonder when we're going to find out what's with Hermione... It would be a shame to loose her. I also like the cold Dumbledore, I hope you will get round to show us more of his charachter. I do miss the opld Snape though, and I feel the imperius curse is a bit obvious. I can't realy believe a powerfull wizard as Snape would be under the imperious for such a long time. But then again, the Snape that's coming out is interesting as well, I wonder how much more we will see of him.

    Loved your story, hope you update soon. :) (and I hope my english is still understandable, and not too Dutch ;) )
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