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By : Vittani
  • From Jerica on May 06, 2007
    Draco seemed very caught up in his fantasy. It did seem like he could not think that straight either.
    I love the story you recommended. I think most of Copper Vixen storied are fabulous. I would recommened them anytime. Along with your fic. Good job.
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  • From shevien on May 05, 2007
    Hi! I haven't read this fic as yet and likely won't for a while;
    waiting for it to be completed. Any more WIP's for me and I think I'll go crazy
    waiting for the update. Just letting you know that I think this sounds (from the
    summary obviously)quite interesting and I can hardly wait to actually read it ^_^
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  • From ANON - Aaliyah on May 05, 2007
    Oh sorry, I forgot to mention, I could totally beta for you if you really think you need one, but personally I think you're doing okay, just some minor mistakes but nothing that really stands out. Anyways, feel free to email me if you decide you need a beta.
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  • From ANON - Aaliyah on May 05, 2007
    oh WOW i REALLY LOVE your story. i like your style of writing soooo much. and i definitely liked the way you worded your scene with draco after the ROR, the sentences were perfect, how draco couldnt think and everything. sorry i didnt review all the other chapters but i just decided to wait and review after i was done. plus it was so good i didnt want to stop reading between each chapter, lol. and just so you know, that other review who totally flamed you, i dont know what they're on about but i think your story is brilliant and im definitely on the edge of my seat waiting for the next chapter. i told my friend about this, by the way, and she likes it alot too. hey i think thats the longest review ive ever left, lol. well anyways, great writing, keep it up!
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  • From ANON - Bouvaid on May 05, 2007
    I haven't reviewed before, but I've been reading all along. This chapter was really well done. I could picture the scene exactly the way Draco imagined it. Good luck with your exams, and thanks also for the other recommendations.
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  • From misslala on May 05, 2007
    Oooh yay! I am excied that you updated! :) I absolutely love this story! :) I can't wait to see what happens when they actually get together.
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  • From stasa on May 05, 2007
    That was great. Loved the decryption, very passionate and graphical.
    Very good chapter, something to keep us going :D
    I
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  • From Heksy on May 05, 2007
    HOT HOT HOT!!!!
    Yeay...thanks so much for sharing.
    I just finished two double-chocolate-up-side-down cakes.
    Sending one over to you.
    * if I can ever catch that #&^$%@! owl *
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  • From Heksy on April 27, 2007
    Hey Vittamininini...I have been having a bit of fun withs zhe mead.
    A bit toooo muchz...I z-z-zink...
    I had 3 bottulz, but lost 1...teehee
    Nah, just kidding.
    Sending my house elf Skippy right over with your treat.
    Don't be drinking it all at once now, you hear?
    Hun, I seem to be having trouble sending mail to you.
    I keep getting "delivery failure".
    So please send mail to heksy@msn.com.
    That may do the trick.
    And by the way: you are very welcome about the scaring away the bad man.
    He's a jerk!
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  • From MyaMalfoy on April 23, 2007
    This is an awesome story! I love it! Making at least some of the Slytherins "good", Dumbledore (or as another author that I read terms him, "Dumb Old Whore!") being shown as the manipulative bastard that he is, and FINALLY! someone making RON the understanding, grown-up friend, instead of Hermione, is brilliant! Which reminds me, when will we find out what's going on with Hermione, anyway? I love the bits of humor in it, and the way you're developing Harry and Draco's relationship is wonderful! Can't wait to see what you do for Severus and Remus' (which is my 2nd fav pairing, next to Harry/Draco, btw) mating! Keep up the good work and can't wait til you update again!!!
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  • From berkie88 on April 22, 2007
    did he also tell Draco about Salazar and Godric? argh, I want to know what happened to Salazar to make him leave! and what makes the curse (you mentioned a time split? what is that?) happen... and of course I want to know what is going on with Hermione... btw, Harry never saw the twins did he? I believe he wanted to try his appearance on them too so will they appear? Dumbledore-bashing! yay! my favorite stories involve that! people make such good arguments against him :-P

    will he also get the memory back and get the betrothel necklaces (?) from his vault out (you mentioned them for a reason right?)? yes a bit soon for that but I'm thinking ahead :-P also can't wait for when Remus and Snape appear more. (they will right?)

    Draco's reaction to the Aiden thing... well you did say submissives don't get angry easily... so I do think he'd ask Harry about the letters first and then later Krai... and that conversation you didn't discribe... so it's good this way. people who think he should have blown up over it can pretend it happened in the missing piece with Krai :-P

    is the animagus thing still up for debate? I myself have always liked the panther, wolf and snake. somthing water-y would also be cool but not a regular fish or something please? :-P I generally don't like the multiple animagusthing but I can stand it if people don't use magical creatures for it (no one in the book has a magical creature as animagusform!). but you mentioned animagus class in the Hogwarts letter... there have been only 7 (or was it 9?) registered animagi in the past century and if there was a class there would be more registered ones... so that is one thing that always irks me in stories... it didn't really bother me in this story so far since so far the booklist is the only reference to a classactivity but here's an advanced warning :-P

    thank you for the recommendations and I hope for more soon!
    btw... curiosity killed the cat= curiosity killed the catdemon? just something that just popped into my head...
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  • From ANON - sharingan.swirl on April 22, 2007
    That DICK!!!!!!! That nasty reviewer!!!!!! What a complete ass!! He/she had NO right to criticize your story like that. Last I checked, you were the one who came up with the story!! He/she can just suck it!

    I really like your writing!! I look forward to every new chapter. I liked your comment about "descriptive writing". LOL! I'm a freak about descriptions. I love how detailed you are. And I like the recommendations you leave for us at the end of your chapters. It's like, "I know my chapter's over, but check out something else to read that you might like!" ^^ I look forward to your next update. This was a very cute one. I enjoyed it.
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  • From heartlessdiablo on April 21, 2007
    Sup Vittani, hey that was a not so bad cliffie. i like how the story is still interesting. buen suerte en tus examenes. good luck on your exams
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  • From Jerica on April 21, 2007
    Yeah you updated! I think Draco's reaction was just fine. I think because of everything that has happened to him lately and from what Harry just told him, that he would not have blown up...much at least. So when exactly do we get to see what Harry's animal form is?
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  • From DestinyDragon on April 20, 2007
    Love the new chapter!!! Also on the note you had at the beginning of the chapter, I think you write very well. I also love this story. Can't wait to see what happens next. Please update again soon.
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