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By : Vittani
  • From Draeconin on April 05, 2007
    At the end of chapter one: Please get a beta. Trying to make sentences longer by stringing them together with a comma just makes you look like you don't know what you're doing. I'm sure you take pride in your work and would like to show it off to best advantage.

    And I'll pass on a tidbit I learned when I was doing research for "No Light Without Shadows"; the Ministry of Magic can tell when and where a spell is cast, and even what spell it was, but it cannot tell who cast it (as evidenced by Harry getting in trouble for Dobby's flying cake in book two). So in an area where a lot of wizards and witches are, a two-year-old could be casting spells, if they were capable and weren't reported, without getting in trouble with the Ministry.

    On the other hand, I like your story telling capabilities. If the technical problems were corrected the story would be more enjoyable, but one can see a good story in there anyway.
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 05, 2007
    i love this story, its amazing.
    personaly i really hate dumbledore, he's such an asshole
    well anyways i just bought a snake for a pet, a yellow boa, and im trying to think of some good names..
    anyways awesome story!
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  • From misslala on April 05, 2007
    Meow! Harry stalking Draco...hahaha that is too HOT! I shouldn't have read it all, cause now I want to go back and read it all again just to refresh my fuzzy memory of everything...lol Keep up the great work.
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  • From heartlessdiablo on April 04, 2007
    Damn somtimes I hate you. :) leaving us hanging like that is just sinful esp. since i just got back from a week in the land of lovers USA. urg i wish you would update more often because the story just keeps getting better and better.
    waiting impaitently for an update,
    VM
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  • From Jerica on April 04, 2007
    Why must everybody end it like that? Just when I thought we where getting somewhere too. I hope you update soon. I don't think I could take the wait. As for a form...I really like wolves. I think that one wouldn't be that bad of a form from how you have describe him so far. Just whatever you do don't make him a snake or any kind of bug. I just can't see that. Well i can see the snake I just think you could come up with something cooler. I see Harry as being a predator. Something that is going to protect his 'mate'.
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  • From ANON - rainbow on April 03, 2007
    awesome
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  • From cw19403 on April 03, 2007
    I thought I would check in again and let you know that I'm still reading. I'm definately still enjoying it. Keep them coming!

    The chapter where Dumbledore was thinking about all the stuff he was manipulating was a bit of a shock. Yeah, I could see that you had set him up to be one of the bad guys but it was still a bit abrupt. On the other hand, I'm enjoying the build up between Harry and Draco. The more tension, the better, I say.

    BTW -- what's with Hermione? You'll get back to that, right?

    Coyote
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  • From Auroawinter on April 02, 2007
    Im glad you enjoyed the story ^_^

    Anyway Im running late for work but I wanted to review before I left LOL.. another great chapter and I cant wait to read the next

    Ja ne
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  • From hinatanaruto on April 02, 2007
    grrrrrr that was evil!!!! please update soon. *give you bottle of creative juice* i heard it works wonders ^_^
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  • From ANON - sharingan.swirl on April 01, 2007
    This is such a smart fic... very entertaining and original. I think Harry's animagus form should be a Stag... for obvious reasons. Looking forward to the new update!
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  • From stasa on April 01, 2007
    I CANNOT believe that you have stopped there!!! You are such a tease!
    Update soon, please, I
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  • From ANON - Britt on April 01, 2007
    Exelent chapter, and keep updating. I would go with some preditory animal for Harry, like a big black panther.

    -Britt ^^
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  • From Heksy on April 01, 2007
    Woman...GODS...how long will you drag your feet? Update!
    Nah, loved the chap and I think the muse is in for a little treat today.
    How about some fresh made meade?
    *goes off to catch another owl*
    keep it coming hunney...
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  • From misslala on April 01, 2007
    Wow! Ok, I just read this whole damn thing tonight...and let me say first off, it's blood brilliant! I love it! LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE! hahaha please email me when you update, lmay3@carolina.rr.com I can't wait for more, can't wait to see what happens with Harry and Draco and I am SO GLAD you set up so much from the start. I like the angle of Dumbledore and his sneaky ass. PLEASE tell me that memeory will be unlocked soon. Harry needs it, I know he does, LOL.

    I like the familiar - he's smart, he's cunning, its too good not to keep going. I am glad I hadn't found this sooner, only because it gave me the chance to read so much at once. Your writing is great and as I read I remembered you reviewed my story "For the Best" I hope you read the ending - you didn't review anymore after.

    Anyway, keep going, I love it! Animagus, hrm...Lion is too cliche, a cat demon...hrm...I can only image how Harry looks and it is too delicious for words. RAWR! Thank you so much for sharing this story I love it
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  • From lissagal99 on April 01, 2007
    Umm... yep. I'm mad... all of it led up to a cliffie!!! Really I find cliff hangers a bit much. I've been reading this long, I'm not going to stop just because something actually happens!!!
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