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By : Vittani
  • From ANON - AmaRae on February 02, 2007
    Love your fic, and really enjoying Krai's character. It's nice to read something truly original amidst all the same-old, same-old storylines. Can't wait to read more, and hope your college work goes well, been there done that.
    I've only recently got into HP, so i'm afraid to hazard a guess as to the bloodlines (I was thinking about basalisk but that's not exactly humanoid is it? are there draconians or gargoyles in HP world? plus Veela for the more common one), but I'm sure it'll be good. Did I mention, I love his hair and am completely jealous. Mines just below waist length and in constant need of care.
    As for his animagus form, I think it'd be nice to see wings, so he can get used to how they work before Christmas-time, hmm? Don't worry, I don't expect you to respond to that, besides I'd rather wait and see, erm.. read that is. I'd suggest those creatures that pull the Hogwart's coaches, but they don't seem hmm quite the right image somehow for our boy. Or maybe if the bloodlines are heading the way they seem, maybe the form should be furry/feathery just for contrast. How about a phoenix just to piss off Dumbledore and Fawkes, but that seems too goody, goody for your developing Harry. Gryphon/griffon or some large cat, sleek but powerful eg leopard, esp black, and wouldn't that look good with green eyes?
    Well, in any case, looking forward to your visions for Harry's future.
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  • From DestinyDragon on February 02, 2007
    I love this story! Please update again soon.
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  • From ANON - V.M. on February 02, 2007
    hey i was looking over the other reviews and i think that a panther is an awesome idea. a dragon is just too big and besides, turning into a magical creature could create problems. much easier to turn into a non-magical one so that harry has complete control and remember, not one of the animagi mentioned in the real series are magical creatures.

    Black panther all the way!
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  • From ANON - V. M. on February 02, 2007
    Sup dude, story is still awesome. mind sending it to me in word format so i can save it to my computer? just want to be able to read it without all the hassle of the web.

    keep going cause i'm anxious to read some more!
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  • From Jan on February 01, 2007
    Wonderful story. Can't wait till your next update. Please make it soon. ^_^
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  • From ANON - Angelica Faerie on February 01, 2007
    I've always liked the idea of Harry as a black panther. It works with the color of his hair and eyes, and it also works with the traits you mentioned of grace, cat-like flexibility and silence. Hope it helps.
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  • From Extraho on February 01, 2007
    harrys animagus had definetly got to de a dragon
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  • From ANON - rainstorm on February 01, 2007
    heya! love the story so far. very detailed and well thought out. I like the characters and Krai sounds unbelievably cool. I hope he kicks Dumblebore's ass thoroughly.

    Can you alert me to further update via my e-mail? Thanks and keep up the great work!
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  • From angelnomiko on February 01, 2007
    wow .. that was great .. and i hope harry finds out that mione is not spying on him willingly for him ... please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more ... later for now

    angel
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  • From ANON - Angelkitty7888 on February 01, 2007
    i'm still loving it!

    hmn.... desire for blood, slight fangs, acute hearing and other senses, flexibility, untangling hair, ability to move faster and more gracefully than most.... part elf?.... i have an entire encyclopedia of magical creatures and i can't recall any 2 creatures combined that would have those attributes... then again none are springing to mind quickly.... so when i find out i'll probably go "bloody hell i shoulda known that!" lol

    hmn.... i think Harry would make a good tiger.... or maybe a mythical cat? a mythical cat would be better... especially considering his father became a stag....(that's rather unususal right?) he has to be a very graceful preditor of some kind.... especially with the want for blood ;)

    Please hurry and post? i can't wait to read more..... and i can't wait to see how draco is....
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  • From ANON - Kermit on February 01, 2007
    Great work, can't wait for the next chapter.
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  • From thrnbrooke on February 01, 2007
    Soooo need chapter 15! He almost sounds Vampire and Werewolf. What will his animal be? Oh I can't wait for more! Maybe a winged cat?
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  • From Heksy on February 01, 2007
    Finally...I was beginning to think you fell of the face of the planet, Vittani.
    About Harry...the creatures could be demon/veela. But that would be too easy I suppose.
    How about dark elf/siren?
    About his animagus form...Hungarian Horntail Dragon?
    Makes snese you know?
    Black scales, bright eyes, bronze tips on the tail.
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  • From ANON - Damien Mitchels on February 01, 2007
    What about a chimera or a griffin.
    Or someting from the maruaders era.
    Dog, horse/deer thing.
    Or a wolf.
    Something for Remus
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  • From on January 25, 2007
    I absolutely fucking love it!!!!!!!! Amazing!!!
    Loving the scheming snake!!!
    Could you inform me of updates please? vicky_robinson_1990@hotmail.co.uk
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