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Reviews for Familiar

By : Vittani
  • From ANON - amaltheanie on March 28, 2009
    hey pumpkin, I've read this story in one day and never commented because I was too captured by it. It's a wonderfull story, with a good amount of angst, romance, creature... The theories are well composed. For the next chapte, which you better put on very quick, I would say this: why not do both? you can write a graphic one and a non-graphic. This way, both kind of readers are content and it's entirely their own discission. Ah, recommendations: "not your usual veela mate" WIP h/d veela draco creature harry ( not gonna tell what kind)on fanfiction "Double edged sword" complete d/h quite some ginny/harry het in the beginning but gets much better on hexfiles
    If you want more stories please e-mail me, I'm gonna write one myself on fanfiction but I have no fans. pout so I have to find some people who'll encourage me.

    Keep up the fantastic, wonderfull, amazing work

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  • From ANON - poemkeeper on March 24, 2009
    I absolutely love this story. I hope that your muse allows you to keep going with it. Don't worry what anyone else says, your writing is some of the finest that I have seen. I won't say hurry because as a fellow writer I know how much that irritates, what I will say is that I will be waiting avidly for the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - Akuma on March 21, 2009
    My, oh my, I love your story. It's absolutely perrrrrrrrrfect. Can't wait for the next piece.
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  • From Toddy on March 19, 2009
    I came to 'Familiar' late Three times I have passed my usual bedtime in reading it. Do not shorten what comes next if it will ruin the story. I presume that Harry has had some kind of bond made with Dumbles or Voldie and that is what the memory block will reveal - thus preventing Draco fulfilling the bond. I do hope you kill off Fawkes; I had never thought he could be an evil bird [nice one!!!!]
    Looking forward to the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - myrtja on March 18, 2009
    ive been reading this without reviewing once so i could catch up. n i finally did. this is awesome i love it! i love the fact that u made Harry a Draco. I love his animagus form n how not all the adults are blind until the end. i really really really cant wait until the next chapter for the memory. i love your writing style and u have a great n unique imagination. thank u for writing this. i hope you dont mind but i had copied n pasted it n printed it out. i was reading it during my PSSA's. it was a great time filler. im know im repeating myself but ur a great writer n i cant wait for the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - crazy_good on March 18, 2009
    great story so far, but plz update soon i need to know what happens *begging*
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  • From ANON - E on March 17, 2009
    Oh my god, I'm actually crying right now. But uh, I want you to know that I think your story is absolutely amazing and you have a real gift for writing. I hope to continue reading more of your work in the future.
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  • From coru on March 16, 2009
    As much ad i would love to see the whole thing bare bones pleas love your story

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  • From ANON - Tree on March 16, 2009
    Fantastic story!!! Just stumbled upon it...and I had to read it all in one sitting! FOR THE LOVE OF ALL THAT IS HOLY, WHAT IS THE DAMN MEMORY!? Ok, I'm done. Ive just very excited for your next installment. Also, I love your recomendations. That is so thoughtful!
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  • From serpensortia on March 16, 2009
    I was so excited when i saw your email in my in box
    but I have to admit to having the memory of a gold fish
    ... I'm going to start reading from the beginning again
    ^_^ this btw I am excited to do

    anyway I'll post again after i finish

    ever faithful Serpen
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  • From Mystique887 on March 16, 2009
    Oh my goodness... I just read all of this in one go! I have been up and down on this sick little emotional rollercoaster and you make me get off in mid air?! *GASP* How dare you. Lol, well I hope you update soon, I really wish that I could give a valuable critique but my mind is so filled with every bit of material that it would be hard to say anything that would reflect all 42 chapters. So, I will try to leave a decent review next time but at the moment I'm just too...what's the word? Dbvckbefbdefvbreibgviyrbfvyebvhjbfejhbvjdhbfvjd is what it is I think lol. Oh, and I can't believe you're killing off Krai you evil evil woman!!! I can't wait to see what that memory is though so I suppose that my damnable curiosity is shaking me into a callous mode because even as his death saddens me I am forced to acknowledge that the block was not likely to have been lifted anytime soon had it not been for Krai's impending death...hmmm... Well I'm off to ponder such things lol, and in case I haven't said it enough...PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!
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  • From Mystique887 on March 16, 2009
    I really love your story, the only thing that bothers me more than words could possibly express would have to be your incorrect usage of "you're" and "your". "You're" means "you are", "your" or "yours" expresses posession. I have been waiting for the mistakes to end hoping that somewhere along the line you would have enlisted the help of a beta, or that a helpful review mught have come your way. If you're still unsure of when to use them, just imagine how the sentence ould sound if instead of writing "you're" you wrote "you are" it may help. Either way, I just wanted to point this out in case it hasn't been brought to your attention. Other than that I simply love your story it's absolutely brilliant and your story recommendations have been wonderful as well. Keep up the good work, I'll review again when I'm done reading all that has been posted. I just hate feeling as if I'm saying something completely redundant, or commenting on something that has already been revealed in later chapters. Well, until then.
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  • From Jan on March 15, 2009
    OMG! How could you have killed Krai?! You're so EVIL!!!! omg, I almost started to crying...

    Please update chapter 43 soon ^_^

    Jan
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  • From ANON - kitty_cat_goth on March 15, 2009
    I just read all 42 chapters all in one go. I must say that i love the plot of the story and can't wait for it to be updated again, i saw many of the stories u suggested i have already read, but i will look up all the others as you have good taste in stories!!! I can't wait to see where the story goes!!
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  • From thrnbrooke on March 15, 2009
    Soooo need chapter 43!!! Why? Why did he have to die? What does Harry now know?
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