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By : Vittani
  • From dragongirl40 on May 01, 2008
    poor krai. dumbles really needs to be taken down. update soon please.
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  • From AstraDeclinant on April 30, 2008
    Wow! Amazingly good story, I read al 41 chapters straight through and I can't wait for more! I absolutely love Krai, it just makes me mad that that asshole of a headmaster killed his mate! Seriously Dumbledore deserves to be dropped off the Astronomy Tower! lol now that I'm done venting I just thought I would tell you to keep up the good work! Oh and here is some nice brownies for your plot bunnies and a nice bottle of rum for yourself!
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  • From ANON - Brittany on April 29, 2008
    I just read this story all the way through, and I have to say I love it!!
    I can't wait for another update!
    Could you please email me when you update?
    My email is britt.sass@gmail.com
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  • From ANON - Grimalkitty on April 28, 2008
    This is my first review, but considering that I only started reading after you posted chappie 41, I have a lot to make up for. ^_^ You are indeed a skilled writer, let no one tell you differently. I've been an editor for many years, and yes, there are a few things that need work, but they don't take anything away from the actual plot. What I can see tells me that once you get into a flow, you don't stop to think about the trivialities, you let the story weave itself as it will--and I LOVE that in an author. Okay, technical assessment aside, I've always felt that Dumbledor was the nosiest, most manipulative (expletive deleted) in the whole HP universe. Anyone who could have ended Tom Riddle before he even began, and who would let whole families, not to mention countless Muggle and magical people be destroyed just to test a prophecy from someone obviously cracked definitely can't be trusted. And the whole House Points thing? Come on, Harry spends the whole year breaking the rules, nearly getting killed, and doing everything he can to get himself expelled, and he gets a million points for being spectacularly bad at dying when others want him to. Yeah, you're really making him friends with the other Houses, there. Meanwhile, people actually following the rules learn to hate and alternately envy the biggest walking Target in the wizarding world. Gah, frustrating. I enjoy writing Harry as a little bitter about all this...but I completely agree with you. Dumbledor's got to GO.
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  • From FemFatale on April 24, 2008
    I honestly don't know what to say...but I suppose I'll muddle through somehow :P
    This story is brilliant! This story has to be the most well written peice of literature I have ever come across on this site. Also I'd like to add that your plot bunnies are absolutely brilliant! It's about 11:08pm and I have just finished the most up to date chapter. I've been reading over the last 2 days and I am more than impressed. I love the direction you are taking Dumbledores role in, and Sev's role in here is magnificent (sp? lol I'm too tired to care really). I'm not usually fond of HarryxDraco pairings (I'm a snarry girl myself :P) but this is wonderful. PLEASE!!!! keep it up...the other stories I'm reading have stopped dissapointingly unfinished and I'd love to see this one go the distance.

    L-O-V-E I-T !!!!




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  • From erospandora on April 24, 2008
    -CRIES-
    You killed his mate thats so sad, not to mention you didn't put up another chapter ^^
    he he
    Poor guy though Draco isn't bonded to him his pet snake is being abused... i wonder if draco will come around for the lil snake guy since his girl was taken from him??

    Update soon,
    ~Eros
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  • From MilleniumForever on April 24, 2008
    I read this all the way through to chpt. 41, i must say i am IMpressed. I LOVE this work. I thoroughly enjoyed all of the intricacies in this story....What has dumbles done to our poor harry??? I mUST kno!
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  • From LeeB on April 24, 2008
    I just found this story, and I was up late last night reading it, then I started as soon as I woke up this morning. I really enjoy the concepts. You have some new and nifty ideas, and a nice way of keeping up the pace. It's interesting watching the old man get more desperate and unsubtle. I like Krai, he's interesting and fun.
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  • From dominique1 on April 24, 2008
    had me up all night i lve this story oh please let harry get his frriends back and find away to bond with draco or should isay allow dracos bond to completed
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  • From dominique1 on April 24, 2008
    love it i like how you made manny a smart independent elf
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  • From shinythiefxblast on April 24, 2008
    God Dumbledore really needs a good ass kicking.
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  • From serpensortia on April 23, 2008
    I don't know what to say. I knew you were up to something, but I never imaginged it to be this devious. (sigh) I like it, I really do. But, it will work out right? But, why on earth would you have killed off Silasi? Her character had so much potential. Well I will leave it up to you, the author. But I hope that there was a good reason to have done it.

    serpen
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  • From thrnbrooke on April 23, 2008
    Sooo need chapter 42! He killed her! Oh poor Krai!! Dumbledore is sooo in for it now! How did he stop the bonding?
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  • From ANON - redneckmama on April 23, 2008
    Ok love, about time. LOL. Love this. and ohhh is Dumbledore gonna get it! love it cant wait for more and am still working on the last chap of lies but got a new plot bunny in my head that is demanding me write a Drarry soo. Love ya.
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  • From hisdarkmaster on March 12, 2008
    love this fic! PLEAVE UPDATE soon
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