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Reviews for Familiar

By : Vittani
  • From LadyKind on February 21, 2008
    oh you are mean.........you tease.......hurry and update again I will be checking often that was not nice leaving me hanging.....you know there arent that many stories where Harry is the Dom.... and it annoys the hell out of me lol so I really do love you for writing this story keep up the good work!!!
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  • From Dragonpink on February 02, 2008
    Came across this story by accident and i'm so glad I did. Haven't stoped reading it all day, had to go thru the whole thing start to finish (well finish so far). Can't wait for more =^.^=
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  • From thrnbrooke on January 18, 2008
    Soooo need chapter 41!!! What went wrong?
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  • From Jan on January 16, 2008
    OMG! That was intense. Though I can't help but wonder why aren't they feeling any different. Hope you update chapter 41 soon, so I could find out. ^_~

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  • From redneckmama236 on January 14, 2008
    Loved it!! ouch Harry was a little rough there wasnt he? it was a nice christmas. Loved the gifts. especially harry's from draco. What went wrong?? Damn it now you have me all in a twist waiting for more. Well I guess I did the same to you. Smut chapter of lies on saturday k. love ya.
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  • From serpensortia on January 14, 2008
    i'm glad you didn't flame me for the pointer i've had other authors do that.
    and i am completely in love with where your heading with the story.
    keep up the great work.
    serpensortia
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  • From dracoharry4life on January 13, 2008
    What went wrong? Or right? Pregnant?
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  • From Makovaso on December 19, 2007
    Really good!! please update soon!
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  • From Palkitty77 on November 29, 2007
    mm just as I rememebered it. Great Job and keep up the good work!


    -Cheers!
    Katt AKA Pal
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  • From KStover on November 27, 2007
    Wonderful story! I had found it on ff.net and followed over here..i am really enjoying it. Keep up the good work and i eagerly await the next new chapter(hopefully i can figure out if there is an alert feature.)
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  • From ANON - mizzwhip on November 22, 2007
    What happens next? Who's doing this to Harry's friends? Please HURRY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From QueenB on November 20, 2007
    No review; just something funny I read in the paper last week. Check it out! ;D

    http://www.gocomics.com/nonsequitur/2007/11/16/
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  • From QueenB on November 20, 2007
    Ch. 22 The recommendation "The Plan" has no URL. Which is it? I admit to being...curious.
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  • From QueenB on November 19, 2007
    Ch. 39 Even though I found myself almost writhing with objections to certain things in your story, I forced myself to read all the current chapters before venturing an opinion.

    First of all, I'm new to the whole Harry Potter phenomenon. While I've been aware of the books since the first one was released, I hesitated to get caught up in the mania that surrounded it. Therefore, I'm not as conversant or knowing about the canon.

    I do know a few things such as the names of certain characters, their various dynamics, the nature of some magical creatures, etc. It is disturbing to see Dumbledore portrayed as a manipulative self-serving cad and Severus Snape as a (submissive!) loving soul. But having no real fan's affection towards either of them, it has gotten easier to come around to the theories and story plots you have put forward about them.

    Harry has been in danger at school from his very first year, making you wonder why Dumbledore hasn't done a better job of protecting him. And he addressed his first letter to Harry as living "under the stairs" at the Dursleys. So he must have had an idea of how he was being mistreated. Why was nothing done about that? Hagrid had intimidated the Dursleys at one point; surely more could have been done to make sure they treated Harry well. Another mystery.

    Your reasoning behind your ideas are well plotted out and very plausible. I am forced to admit that I CAN believe the various plot twists, surprises and character developments. You have obviously thought out everything very carefully and it shows.

    I also like the recommendations you have at the end of some of your chapters. When I have time, I will try to read them. ("Wandless" is my favorite H/D fanfic, the first I ever read so it was pleasing to see it among your choices.)

    If there is one major quibble, it is the egregious spelling, punctuation and grammatical errors that litter your chapters. You say some of your readers have no problems with it. Well, I do. It's difficult and tedious to read a story where words like "your's" are substituted for "yours", "others" for "other's", "you're" for "your" etc. Run-on sentences are wearying and make it difficult to know who is speaking at certain times. Paragraph breaks would be extremely helpful even if they did make a chapter longer and more commas are needed. Seriously!

    I thought as the chapters progressed, these problems would be cleared up. Alas, they have not and there's no telling how many more you intend to write so the prospect of more misspellings is not a cheery one.

    All in all, excellent work. But please get a beta.
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  • From hpobsession on November 19, 2007
    I just started reading this fic and when I start so far in I like to save my comments until I've read all the chapters posted. I think this is a great story so far and will continue to follow it until the end. I like the nice Snape you depict in this fic it makes for a nice change to his attitude. As for Dumbledore, I have never wanted someone dead more than I do him right now. What he did to Ron and Hermione, no forget that what he has done to Damn near all of them is wrong. Is he going to try and kill Harry? I don't want to believe that, but I do believe that Harry will really kill him for all he has done. I can't wait to read Harry and draco's bond I'm sure it will a very special moment, and I might be anticipating that final battle between Harry and Voldemort a little bit more than that. Can't wait to see how your story continues to develop, it's really good for your first fic. I have been contemplating writing my first fic because I have definitely read enough of them, any words of advise?
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