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Reviews for But what is love?

By : HermyHarry
  • From ANON - Rylan on January 11, 2007
    Oh please update, this story seems really good so far!
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  • From ANON - Jenn on November 28, 2006
    Excellent! Your writing style is wonderful and advanced. It has a wonderful flow and sounds like it was written by a seasoned writer. I fully hope to see you continute this story, I think it has amazing potential. I don't want to nitpick but there were a few errors that others pointed out as to the accuracy in details, but either way, they are easily fixed.

    Please don't make us wait too long!

    --Jenn
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  • From ANON - David on November 25, 2006
    Looks promising, but Hermione's eyes are brown, not green
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  • From ANON - Savaric on November 24, 2006
    Sounds promising to me, keep up;)
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  • From ANON - Lalo on November 20, 2006
    Uhm cool.
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 20, 2006
    To your question at the end someone does care about what ur writing and hopes u update soon.
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  • From JayKay on November 19, 2006
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  • From ANON - Fran on November 19, 2006
    Quite well written I must say. But it should get interesting faster.
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  • From ANON - Pamela on November 19, 2006
    this looks promising. i really like it so far. good intro. until next time! (hope it wont be too long)
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  • From ANON - SarahGranger on November 19, 2006
    Wow! you writing style is fantastic. I want to read more. You entranced me into your story, usually the writing here at aff is a little boring (Check out my story for instances... I need a beta. My writing style sucks) and find myself skipping a lot, but I actually re-read yours, hoping I didn't miss anything. Now thats a great start to a story. Please update as soon as you can.

    Hayley (aka Sarah Granger)
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  • From ANON - Avanell on November 19, 2006
    Well, definitely can turn into one angsty novel! I love Biding My Time so who knows where you can take this...I hope you do. I'm a Hr/R fan, but still enjoy Hermione getting all the attention ;)
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  • From ANON - Amy on November 19, 2006
    What a lovely start! Please continue!
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  • From ANON - TiffANY on November 19, 2006
    Jay, I like this story but there needs to be some improvement

    Hermione
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