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Reviews for A turning moment in life

By : hpbcn
  • From ANON - Anon on December 20, 2006
    Ch. 4 -- You have Snape answering his door and describe that he is wearing a tight black T-shirt, yet when he turns to show Hermione his library and the labs, you say his robes billowed out. Are we to just assume that he had his robes on and open so she could still see this T-shirt, or that he put them on and you didn't mention it?
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  • From ANON - SGF on December 09, 2006
    Update very soon please!
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  • From ANON - DeathsSecret on December 05, 2006
    Gaah!!! Update really soon, please!! This is so good! I can't wait for the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - Lydia on December 05, 2006
    this is so good. you really keep it moving along. they really like dancing around each other. please post soon.
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  • From ANON - Eliza on December 05, 2006
    that quill thing... it was brilliant..
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  • From ANON - megs on December 05, 2006
    Please update soon. i absolutly loved it
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  • From ANON - skye on December 05, 2006
    yeay! that was wonderful! 'course....who wouldn't notice a panther skulking around the grounds of Hogwarts? but hey...Severus was a spy, musta been good at laying low :D the gift(s) at the end were perfect....can't wait for the bowl full of lemons that will result from the thank you.
    Skye
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  • From ANON - anya on December 05, 2006
    An interesting read. The last bits were an awkward situation handled brillantly.
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  • From ANON - ShilohDarke on December 05, 2006
    Awe.... I am so glad that the anger didn't last long on his part! It's so much nicer when they can kiss and make up quickly... among other things....
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  • From ANON - angel on December 05, 2006
    taht was great i love it .. and the gift he gave her ... please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more ...later for now

    angel
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  • From hpbcn on December 05, 2006
    Thank you so much all of you!!! I hope to update more this week as it's a bank holiday here and I'll have more free time, my ideas are also flowing faster. Seems like my brain is kind of working! Chapter 11 is up and the next one will be coming your way soon, I promise.

    Thanks again!
    Carol hp_bcn
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  • From ANON - Addie on December 05, 2006
    write more or i kill you...
    but not really cuz then you couldn't right anymore now could you!!
    like it, love it, want totally more of it!
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  • From ANON - angel on December 05, 2006
    man that was great i love it .. man they both thought the same thing .. i hope draco and ginny can help them out again .. please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more .. later for now

    angel
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  • From ANON - lisa on December 04, 2006
    Ohhhh dear. Poor Severus and now Poor Hermione. Outwitted by sneaky Ginny. and it took a turn for the better but then for the worse. They could be great together but are sooo stubborn and not willing to cahnce anything. I cant wait to see what happens. I can see the train wreck now. Too late though. Please update soon.
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  • From ANON - Shilohdarke on December 04, 2006
    Oh man! That just about drives me crazy! I can't wait to find out what happens next! When will they realize that they're meant to be together?
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