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Reviews for Nothing is what it seems

By : gsyoung
  • From ANON - HentaiZaru on December 30, 2006
    AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW, I am so sad now, update soon!
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  • From ANON - Gendo on December 30, 2006
    Bloody hell, that was an excellent chapter. Now I can't wait for the next update to see where this goes. Great job, and keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - timothyology on December 23, 2006
    A few notes:

    Practicing
    Realizing
    Realized
    Excercise

    You like to spell all of these with "s" instead of "z" or "c". Do you have a beta reader? The story's great. If you want a beta email me at scottlovesjayne@yahoo.com
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  • From ANON - HentaiZaru on December 23, 2006
    Way to go, Draco, hehehehehe. Update soon!
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  • From ANON - lissagal99 on December 18, 2006
    It is such a beautiful story.
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  • From ANON - thrnbrooke on December 18, 2006
    Need chapter 8! What did Draco say to Harry?
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  • From ANON - thrnbrooke on December 16, 2006
    Gotta have chapter 7! How does Draco respond to that?
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  • From ANON - ZooArmy on December 14, 2006
    Don't know why you're not content with the sixth chapter? I liked it, I really did and do! Like all other five chapters before ^^. Update soon.
    The story makes me kinda come down from all my day-life stress 'cause it's so sweet and...don't know...I just love it a lot and hope for a really really awesome happy-end. =)
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  • From ANON - Bookworm51485 on December 13, 2006
    Well, I must compliment you. You are a good writer. Your style is easy to follow, you don't bog us down with details but things aren't underexplained. You have good spelling and grammar which is always a plus. My only problem with this story has to do with my own personal preference. I don't especially like stories that paint Draco as a poor, abused or neglected little boy because usually the point is to make you feel compassionate towards the character. And I can feel for Draco, but when it feels like the authors laying it on really thick, I just lose it all. I don't really find Draco to be a pitiable character. I don't buy him as being abused or a cutter. And I guess it's possible but I find that I just can't get into stories with him like that. Though he isn't the only character: Ron and his siblings, Hermione. Don't really find them especially pitiable in that role either. BUT despite this your writing has drawn me into the story enough that I do kind of want to see where it's going.
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 07, 2006
    OMG! please update soon!!
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  • From ANON - anjellic on December 06, 2006
    OMG! please update whenever you can! My heart is pulling for Draco. As someone who has gone through a similar situation as Draco, you're really getting the feelings across well. The sense of lonliness, helplessness, and the ability to control something, a single thing, in your life. I feel for him so much. Harry, just being there, is perfect...not trying to fix anything, yell at him, etc. really great so far!

    C.
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 06, 2006
    LOVE IT!! Oooo, so very much! Please update soon!!
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  • From ANON - thrnbrooke on December 06, 2006
    I sooo need chapter 6!
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  • From ANON - HentaiZaru on December 06, 2006
    Poor Draco, I feel so bad for him. Update soon!
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  • From ANON - HentaiZaru on December 02, 2006
    Thisstory is getting more and more awesome by the second! Update again!
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