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By : Rumpelyssa
  • From angelnomiko on February 23, 2007
    wow .. now ron know the truth and snape is going to try to woo mione .. please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more ... later for now

    angel
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  • From ANON - LaBibliographe on February 23, 2007
    Chapter 9: Snape and Blaise seem content with their relationship. Calm acceptance. What was Snape doing on the moor anyway? So is Snape really going to try to wrest Hermione away from Lucius? For himself? Or for his new son, Blaise? I'm not sure why he's decided to throw himself into the fray, except that apparently he does not want Lucius and Hermione together. Too Late!! Hah!

    I suppose there is still a tiny bit of wiggle room for Snape to head off Lucius' concerted attempts to marry Hermione, but she succumbed to Lucius so quickly in the woods that I think their bond is unbreakable. Even if she IS leading Lucius on a dance to the altar.

    Ron showed why Lavender wanted to hang onto him, in his personal, private passionate session with Pansy. I'm glad Lavender is out the door. Zach is welcome to her (actually he has to marry her.) There seems to be a large number of trouser zippers that can't stay up at Hogwarts lately.

    My fingers are crossed for Lucius to succeed with Hermione, but not toooo quickly. I do like UST with them.

    Please update soon and tell us what happens with the potential Snape-Hermione-Lucius triangle. Hermione gets all the hot ones...drat her. Tell them I'll take the loser, okay? (As long as it's not Hermione.)

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  • From ANON - Mary on February 23, 2007
    Loved it! At least Severus knows what Lucius is up to! Wonder if he's going to tell Hermione? Looking forward to reading the next chapter!
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  • From ShilohDarke on February 23, 2007
    I finally got to sit down and read the latest two chapters! ('bout time!) Anyway, I loved them! What a surprise! Blaise is Severus Snape's son? WOW! Hermione sure did give Lucius a hard time. (not that he didn't deserve it, but I nearly cried with Hermione when he broke the figurine!

    I am glad he fixed it, and by doing that, I think he showed her that anything is possible, if you only let yourself believe!

    Lovely story, darlin! I can't wait for more!

    SD
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  • From InfernalParadise on February 11, 2007

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  • From ANON - firewall on February 11, 2007
    Ch 6 - I'm glad I get to review this story. I'm too lazy to sign in or I forget to and then never bother. It's too easy to just carry on.

    Anyway, I'm enjoying this story although I'm a little worried about Blaise. I happen to like him and would really prefer nothing awful happens to him. I'm off to read the next two chapters you have posted. Thanks for sharing this with us.
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  • From ANON - catysmom on February 09, 2007
    Can't wait for more chapters. :)
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  • From ANON - Mary on February 07, 2007
    I loved this chapter! Poor Lucius trying to convince Hermione to be his wife. And she's being stubborn. Looking forward to reading the next chapter!
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  • From on February 07, 2007
    That was quite a treat for all of us and yes it definitely was very hot. I just hope that Ron does not fault Hermione too much for taking up with Lucius. Maybe Pansy can soothe his confusion and save him from Lavender's clutches yet. I do enjoy the twists that this story has brought and am always amazed by the ideas you come up with. I just hope that they do not get into too much trouble for spending the night together, because who really could leave after enjoying such a lemony treat with two helpings? Keep up the amazing work that you always do.
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  • From lilbitbord on February 07, 2007
    I read the one shot a few months ago, then I found it yesterday and noticed it wasn't a one shot anymore. Now I'm hooked, can't wait to find out what happens next.
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  • From Sampdoria on February 07, 2007
    Great chapter, great story!!!
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  • From DB1 on February 07, 2007
    @8. cool chapter. Yay for lucius and hermione!!! poor ron, hmm the pansy and ron thing, interesting, can't wait to read more!! Plese update soon

    *DB*
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  • From ANON - Kirabates on February 06, 2007
    WOW!! Beautiful, never would have seen that coming! Ron and Pansy, though, honestly I think that I prefer her to Lavender, she seems evil. Total surprise, I really like. Very nice how Mione and Lucius became actual lovers again, I really loved alot of the emotion that you put into this chapter. I can't wait to see how the Ron, Pansy, and Lavender thing works out. Nor can I wait to see the next step for Mione and Lucius, and what about Zabini? Will you tell about what goes on in his and Harry's search for Snape and Draco?
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  • From zairaphel on February 06, 2007
    Wow. Absolutely wonderful. I cannot wait for the next chapter. Keep up the great work! :D

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  • From LaBibliographe on February 06, 2007
    Chapter 8: Hogwarts is beginning to look like the ark - couples pairing up right and left. Lavender can eat dirt (and marry the Hufflepuff) leaving Ron with someone who actually might like him. And I hadn't thought about it, but it's true that Ron really should have a woman who dominates him (like Arthur has?) for him to be truly happy. Pansy might like that job in a marriage. I don't think she would have been happy with either of the Malfoys - they're each too domineering themselves.

    But right now Lucius is turning into a lovelorn lovebunny trying to court the one he wants. His method obviously got him laid - several times - but I do love him when he's snarky, although I guess this story's Hermione wouldn't stand for it and he's definitely operating at a disadvantage if she's already carrying part of his next generation.

    So when is Snape going to debut? I can't imagine what you'll do with him - on the run, being a daddy - the poor guy has it rough. I wouldn't want him for my daddy (okay, maybe my Sugardaddy but no blood relation). Will Snape get paired with anyone? Sheesh, who's left? NOT Blaise's mom. She had her chance and I don't find her a terribly comfortable character.

    You know, if Hermione's not already preggers, she may be from today's chapter. Those two never learn, do they? Yeah, yeah, if I had Lucius in my bedroom I'd be just as "dumb".

    So, eight chapters from a one-shot, who woulda guessed? Now, let's try for nine. I'll get you started.

    Chapter 9 - .........

    8-)
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