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By : GryffJr
  • From ANON - Michelle on October 03, 2015
    Oh, I hope you continue this story, it has started very welll. I love a hermione/snake time turner story!!!!
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  • From kattniptwo on July 20, 2011
    Oh loving so far..I do hope you keep it up..is there anywhere else you have this posted?? hopeing for update soon!
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  • From winter748 on June 15, 2011
    Oh, this story gets better and better with every chapter. Although could benefit from some minor editing, the story & characterizations are very well done. Thanks.
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  • From Sampdoria on June 15, 2011
    Absolutely wonderful update, even if Moody did his best to annoy me:-))
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  • From Sampdoria on June 11, 2011
    What a fantastic story, I am so happy i found it! I have mixed feelings about time-turners, i find them utterly boring when the main goal is to change nothing at all, and i find them totally interesting when the plot is to change what went wrong the first time (Why on earth spend time on a time-turner that doesn't change anything? if status quo is the same at the end as it was in the beginning, why write/read it at all?) That said, I really love your plot so far and I find it very well written. i don't know who you will end up saving, I hope that it is mostly the bad that dies, even if i am pretty sure you will "kill off" some nice ones too. While my high hope is that the prophecy about Harry will never see the ligth of day, thus leaving both him and Neville a childhood with parents and friends. If you "have to" kill James and Lilly, would you at least make sure that the rigth guy gets the blame, meaning Peter is exposed and Sirius don't have to spend 12 years in Azkaban for something he didn't do. A free Sirius would also benefit Remus, there is no way Sirius wouldn't look out for his friends. Just as interesting would be to see if you "save" other Slytherins than Severus. Not only because I want to see who you chose, but even more so because every man not in the clutch of the snakefaced idiot, makes the ligth side stronger. (You are allowed to kill Moody since he treated Hermione the way he did just because she is a woman..:-))
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  • From MorwennaAmy on November 25, 2008
    Fantastic! I'm really enjoying this - so great to have some original elementswithin the parameters of time-travel fics. Also, I'm coveting Hermione's wardrobe! Looking forward to another good chapter soon.
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  • From Smurfette on December 09, 2007
    This is one of the most original plots I've ever read, and I'm disappointed to see that you haven't posted since Feburary...I'm avidly praying that you continue to post, or can maybe direct me towards a completed posting of this story? I love the way you have Hermione acting like Snape...as I said, original and imo, ingenious plot line! :) Looking forward to more, or a possible link to the completed (or ongoing posting) of this story? email is: smurfgirlz@optonline.net Thanx! :)
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  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on August 20, 2007
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From Kimjo2 on February 02, 2007
    "what is the most powerful all purpose protection spell you know of?" (my question) thanks for the update. i definately like your twist on the time turner thing and i look forward to further updates.
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  • From DanielleHall on February 02, 2007
    I really do love this story. I would love for updates to come sooner :P
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  • From on January 17, 2007
    cool cts please
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  • From ANON - sinbad on January 01, 2007
    wow I hope Hermione gets her wish. How will the future be effected? I love how you got this story going.
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  • From ANON - Lisa on December 28, 2006
    *purrs* love the story update soon though I was hoping you would make it when Snape was a new teacher make it easer on them for romance BUT hey its a nice twist... making it switched where hermiony is the teach and snape is the student... Update really soon PLEASEEEEEEEEEEEE
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  • From ANON - l on December 28, 2006
    Fantastic!
    I love timeturner stories and this is so far the best start of one i have read. Do you think you could bring Sirius's brother regulus into this story? He was there in cannon after all, and played a role in teh war.
    I hope that this story contineues onward to actually change the future instead of turning out to be something that was "ment" to happen..where the fututre is all the same. It would be quite depressing if you end up doing that after the picutre of "present day hogwarts" you have painted for us.
    I hope that you continue to write in the plot as of as much importance as the relationships between the characters as you have been doing. Please keep writing this story. I'm really enjoying it.
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  • From ANON - Linda on December 27, 2006
    Intresting begining!

    I will be looking forward to chater 5!
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