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Reviews for Broken Toy

By : eyesemerald
  • From aestheticsofhate on June 15, 2008
    OMGWTFBBQ!!!

    next one please!!!
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  • From JayFiclover on June 15, 2008
    ARGH! HOW COULD YOU LEAVE IT THERE!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    Totally rockin LOVE this story! So very filled with angst, happiness, intrigue and emotion!

    I wonder if they'll ever get to bring Ginny back?

    Hope you update again soon!
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  • From dracoharry4life on June 14, 2008
    Please say this wonderful story has a happy ending. Please?
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  • From ANON - butterpie on June 14, 2008
    Hey, you're back. and with more amazing things going on too! Finally Draco is free and a wizard once more, and all because of one Harry Potter. The way you left this tale seems to hang on whether Draco still wants Harry in his life or not. I expect Harry knows that Draco needs his freedom and the right to choose what to do with his newly restored independence. You've managed to spin a mighty fine tale, and I have enjoyed ever dip and curve in the ride, and as it pulls into the final lap home I wish you could hear me clapping my hands. So here's to you kid and please continue.
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  • From ANON - Catigizmo on June 01, 2008
    This was an amazing read. It almost put jk rowling to shame keep up the great work
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  • From chantalmalfoy on May 20, 2008
    Awww... How perfect! I loved it!
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  • From Mangacat on May 18, 2008
    Oi.. that last part was really worth it *g* finally he got it with all the frustration and the anguish set aside.. but that botched love confession, just adorable!! Give us the last chapter!!
    Cat
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  • From Roozette on May 17, 2008
    You updated! You updated! And it was all because I asked you to. *preens*

    Ok, I'm over myself and back to reality. Seriously darlin, I loved this chap! I can see where it could be frustrating to write, because the conversation between Harry and Draco had to be handled in such a way, and then Draco's moment of blinding realization... but you handled it beautifully! And the sex scene? Was really sweet! Do you have any idea how weird it feels to write the word "sweet" just now? But it was! It was perfect and hot and beautiful and I just love love love you!

    Are you going to be able to wrap this story up in just one more chapter? Because you have the trial... then the reactions... then the justifications/repercussions... then the mini-epilogue or "what now?" moment... Man, I am ever so glad you have it mostly written already! This whole story has been just wonderful from beginning to end. So original and clever and tummy-clenching angry in parts. I want to hug it! But I tried hugging my laptop and.. erm.. yeah, not so much.

    I'm done rambling now. Just wanted to remind you that you are fantabulous and I hope you continue to write.

    Kisses, Love, and Cookies ~
    Roo
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  • From ANON - arealdeal on May 17, 2008
    How in God's green earth could you not be happy with that! Good lord, I can hardly type. Seriously I am abusing the back space key like no body's business. I am almost sorry to see this one end. Great ride so far, definitely on my top ten, and that is saying somthing as I have been reading avidly for over 2 years.
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 17, 2008
    Lovely

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  • From thrnbrooke on May 16, 2008
    Sooo need chapter 33!!! Beautiful! Draco almost messed things up badly! I hope the trial goes well!
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  • From Roozette on May 12, 2008
    I really miss this story! Please update soon. Sorry to hear you were in the hospital for a time. Hopw all is well with you now.

    Kisses!
    Roo
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  • From gaara89 on April 12, 2008
    You absolutely must continue this! It's one of the better Harry/Draco stories I've ever read, though it is admittedly confusing at times, I can usually make sense of it if I just keep reading. Good writing...it might be just me but sometimes in the midst of action your descriptions tend to get a little bit confusing...but if I keep reading I end up figuring it out. I only bring it up because most of the time author's jut hear "good job!" and "udate soon", we rarely get material to better ourselves with. Again it could be just me, and despite those brief moments of confusion I am aboslutely in love with this story. Please do continue soon!

    ~Reigh~
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  • From chantalmalfoy on March 24, 2008
    OMGoodness!!! What a wonderful chapter!!!! *grin*
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  • From QueenB on March 24, 2008
    Ch. 31 Ha! Very clever--and the Gryffindor figured it out. Take that, Slytherins! I saw something like that once on a TV show called "Gargoyles" but this solution didn't occur to me. Now that it works, they can use it on the other bonded slaves. I'm sure that will be next and Draco's role in figuring it out will weigh heavily in his favor regarding his past crimes.
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