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Reviews for Broken Toy

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  • From AloneintheOpen on February 23, 2008
    This is absolutely, the most, bite your nails, hang on to the edge of your seat, story at the moment, and if Harry dies, I'll lose it.
    Its very good, and it is one of my favorites.
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  • From alleycat88 on February 23, 2008
    A cliffie!? How dare you!? Just when....*sob*...everything was going so well! Now....oh.
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  • From emare on February 19, 2008
    Don't leave us hanging! Update soon!
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  • From remembermeby on February 16, 2008
    Wow, I caught up on some chapters I had missed and I am glad that I had missed them because the cliffhanges...ohhhh...it was amazing, really good and I do hope you can post more soon and please make the boys happy soon and finish this up happily...please?
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  • From Kimikokun on February 04, 2008
    now you just left this thing at the cliff hanger of all cliffhangers and u want to finish it in one more chapter =|. i say more power to you =P.waiting for the next chapter to see how this things gonna end *if it ends =P*
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  • From ANON - HxDfovever on February 01, 2008
    OMG talk about a cliffy! I love this story it has everything :D. Fluff,mystery,romance,Angust (woot!) and a plot!
    Please please update soon I can wait for the next part of the story :).
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  • From chantalmalfoy on January 29, 2008
    AAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!

    Talk about a flippin' cliffhanger!!! LOL! WOW! Ginny's been vanished. Draco can't get over his insecurities. And Ron handed Pickels over to Blaise?!?!?! I need a drink. lol. And another update. Very soon. :)
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  • From alleycat88 on January 28, 2008
    Oh shit oh shit oh SHIT! The shit has hit the fuckin fan! WOAH! Ok...woooo...calm down. this will alllllllll work out!
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  • From AloneintheOpen on January 26, 2008
    I KNEW IT!

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  • From ANON - Emily Waters on January 26, 2008
    It's quite intense. Very surreal and at times quite sad (how Draco is looking for ways to use Harry, always on his guard, never fully sincere). I keep reading and hoping for a happy ending. : )
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  • From QueenB on January 26, 2008
    Ch. 29 I haven't read any of the latter HP novels so I don't know much abou what happened just prior and before the last confrontation with Voldemort. But the Vanishing Cabinet sounds like a nasty piece of work, even worse than the Mirror of Erised. Makes me wonder why someone didn't smash it into kindling.

    That was a tense chapter, all right. (These people have a thing for anagrams, don't they?) The surprise at the end was a shocker, too. Cue the scary music. Dum dum DUMMMM!!

    But this may explain why Blaise Zabini helped. He was probably hoping Harry would reject Draco and then his father would get Draco back. Snagging Harry would have been the icing on the cake.

    Now I'm eager to see what happens next. Will they capture Blaise and his father? Will Pickles still remain transfigured? Will they go after and retrieve Ginny? Tune in next week. Same Bat time. Same Bat channel!


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  • From thrnbrooke on January 26, 2008
    Soooo need chapter 30!!!
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  • From ANON - butterpie on January 26, 2008
    Poor, poor Ron. Three of his family in their attempt to hurt Draco took Harry along for the ride. Ron has evanescoed his own sister, and to add to this sorry tale he then remembered, and realized he had handed Pickles Lander, aka Alldrick Peens to his own son Blaise Zabini at the MOM too. Wowsers what is next? You got me in suspense now kiddo so for the love of Merlin please continue.
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  • From Roozette on January 25, 2008
    Oh you bad bad child! You take forever and nine years to update AND THEN you leave us with a cliff hanger???? I thought we were friends! I thought we had bonded! Why would you do this to me??? Er... and the other readers, of course. You must fix this! Immediately! Harry and Draco need to openly declare their undying love, Blaise needs to choke on the silver spoon, and Ginny should reappear inside of Azkaban and not be discovered for many many months. *nods* Yep, that'll do.

    I'm so glad you didn't make Ron a baddie as well. I don't particularly like his characters, but three Weasley's bad is quite enough. Damn Ginny. I never liked her.

    Update update update!!

    Roo
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  • From AloneintheOpen on January 24, 2008
    A plot twist of all times. I never suspected. Well written, and very creative. The only thing I knew, was that Draco was innocent. That's all I predicted. This has become one of my favorite pieces on this whole site.
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