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Reviews for Broken Toy

By : eyesemerald
  • From Annecia89 on August 23, 2014
    I loved it! I smiled and shed a few tears as well!
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 31, 2009
    wow... I've just finished reading the whole story through from chapter 1 until the epilogue. I'm totally hooked with the story that I spent the last two days to read this story through. I'm looking forward to more Draco/Harry stories from you.. ^^
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  • From callistianstar on September 21, 2008
    This was such a fabulous story! Although I'll start out with something that is supremely bothering me...did Ginny ever come back? lol I completely detest her character...but I searched though the chapters, and it doesn't seem like you ever had her reappear. I'll pause for a second so that I can laugh hysterically over that fact. All in all, wow. I can't even wrap my head around the number of hoops you had Harry and Draco go through to get to this ribbon-present-Draco event. I sort of had a moment of clarity over the biggest obstacle, at the end of the chapter before Harry discussed with Hermione how he found out the memories were false. But that is mostly due to the fact that you mentioned Ginny right before that point. I loved and thought it was very clever how you wrapped the deal with Draco's contract. Although as far as the Draco-no-magic law went, I had hoped that even after Draco was a wizard again, Harry would be smart or otherwise to ask Draco to marry him. Especially since that was such a sore spot when it was first introduced. What you did to Ginny was clever too. This is my first time hearing Evanesco doing something like that, and I also liked how Draco used transfiguration against Pickles. Those are really the big things sticking out for me, but like I said, I can't believe the roller coaster you've put us all through. lol Wonderful job.
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  • From serenagold on June 29, 2008
    Ahhh!!! The story is finally completed!!!! omgomgomgomgomgomgomgomgomg!!! hehehe!
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  • From QueenB on June 26, 2008
    Epilogue Excuse me for not reviewing this story before now. I got sucked into a website featuring Harry/Severus slash and have been caught up in that since March or April. Ho boy.

    I'm so happy to see the two guys get together after all this time. It seemed incredible that Draco would need action to understand Harry's feelings. Surely that's a Gryffindorish trait. Then again, Draco is probably used to people lying to him. That scene in the alley was very convincing; too bad that reporter spoiled it. Hadn't the idiot ever heard of covert surveillance that doesn't use a flash? Moron.

    That final scene with a nude Draco wearing only a bow was very provocative. It's too bad more of these stories don't come with pictures, hm?


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  • From thrnbrooke on June 25, 2008
    I am soooo going to miss this story!!!
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  • From Mangacat on June 24, 2008
    Ah well.. what an extraordinary end!! Couldn't have been done with it any better!! Let's just see what you come up with next time for sure!
    Cat
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  • From daynajones on June 22, 2008
    perfect ending, loved it to pieces!
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  • From chantalmalfoy on June 21, 2008
    OMG! SO good! I loved loved loved the end. It's absolutely perfect. So full of emotion!!! I just love it! Yay! :)
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  • From on June 21, 2008
    that was absolutely mad.
    i usually lose interest in stories when they are really long.
    but with yours ive beeen WAITING for updates :D
    and it was great.
    love the end.
    :D:D:D
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  • From ANON - butterpie on June 20, 2008
    Well done indeed! I somehow realized that Draco actually needed to express himself to Harry, and show just how much he cared for his former master. The Marguerites are symbolic of healing of a trama to the mind as well as the body. Thank you for such a marvelous story, and of course please continue to entrall us with more of your fertile imagination.
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  • From meEksiNs on June 19, 2008
    Either Harry is EXTREMELY insecure or he is just teasing Draco or something happened with his serious get together with the Weasleys or Potter is just simply nutters.

    WHAT THE HECK WAS THAT??!!

    Thanks for sharing this marvelous fic! Please, update soon!


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  • From genna on June 17, 2008
    This story is impressive.

    The inner voice sequences are unsettling because Draco's self-esteem is so low. His self defense is to always think the worst and push his loved ones away when he feels threatened. It reminds me too much of me at my most vulnerable times when I have too little trust.

    I honestly think you crossed the line from ordinary fic, to original pronunciation of serious human sentiment.
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  • From alleycat88 on June 15, 2008
    OH Jesus...I nearly screamed when I read the ending....before I remembered there would be an epilogue. I just hope the epilogue does not end up like this chapter!! I am so sad that this fic is done. I am hoping to read more stories from you though!! It has been wonderful darling! I shall see you at the epilogue!
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  • From ANON - lilly on June 15, 2008
    ahhhhhh!!!! no! Please update soon! Please!
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