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Reviews for Wonder Boy

By : ifyouweremine
  • From leodraconis on October 18, 2008
    Hot and kinda sad. Very well done.
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  • From ANON - vibora on November 30, 2006
    wow! that was great!
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  • From ANON - esrinthly on November 29, 2006
    ooh...I like this. The chemistry between your Draco and Harry is amazing. Cant wait for more.
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  • From ANON - LJ on November 29, 2006
    I liked the plot, loved it, actually, but the story, while well-written to a point, was not up to my normal standard of excellence.

    The sex was written well-enough, and the emotional bit at the end, while fantastic, was out of place.

    What would make this fic better would be if you lengthened it just a bit to include the desperation that the light side had to win, and why Harry had to get into Malfoy Manor.

    I know it was PWP, doll, but if you wanted that then you shouldn't have started with the whole test-tube bit in the first place.

    Hope this helped.
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  • From ANON - no name on November 29, 2006
    This is the best audlt fan fiction story because it is in keeping with the original story. Bloody brilliant.
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  • From ANON - Ladynight on November 28, 2006
    Oh My God! Please tell me your not going to leave it there? It's too good top leave it there and i want to see Draco's reaction to how Harry gained acess to his house. Please???
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 28, 2006
    He got to fuck Malfoy and save the world, I don't think I'de be complaing to much heheheh
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  • From SlashySnitch on November 28, 2006
    AH HA! That was certainly different, but I liked it! Great job, write more like this...with more of a plot! That could be cool!

    Slashy Snitch
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  • From ANON - teaspoon on November 28, 2006
    lol What do you meant THATS IT! lol You have a great oneshot that could be turned into an even GREATER threeshot. I can see this beginning going to many different sequels. Do reconsider bum, this was good stuff!
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 28, 2006
    wow....hahahaha..that was uh.... that was good. haha, I want more lol.oh man... I like it, i really do lol. please write more!
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  • From ANON - Redlightspin on November 28, 2006
    excellent don't stop
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  • From ANON - YamiBakura on November 28, 2006
    This was even better on the reread. I wasn't going to request a sequel, since I know that when I write oneshots, and people are like, 'Great start, can't wait for more!" i'm like, 'But that's IT.' But I'd really love to see more from you about this. Maybe Draco seeks Harry out? or maybe he catches him in the manor.
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  • From ANON - YamiBakura on November 28, 2006
    Slytherin-Harry. ^_____^ I really liked this, oddly enough. I wasn't sure that I would.
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  • From ANON - zoe on November 28, 2006
    That was absoultly bloody fantastic, I do belive that it is good enough for a sequel, I want to see how Draco recats to how Harry gets into his manor ^_^
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