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Reviews for Pretty Prey

By : kristashadow
  • From ANON - Anon on December 13, 2006
    omg! that was way exciting. I can't wait to read the next chapter.
    and I did not review twice :)


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  • From dropedonmyhead on December 13, 2006
    That was mean! *sobs* I think I love Eight.
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  • From ANON - Anyanka on December 13, 2006
    How could u?!?! mean doesn't quite describe what u did
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  • From ANON - Elric Maxwell on December 13, 2006
    *falls out of chair* Damn!!!! You HAD to hang us!!!! Hurry, I can't wait to see what happens!!! EM
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  • From ANON - alix on December 13, 2006
    You are a genius and I'll wait by my computer to read more and more and more. Dont listen to any flames and just write, I love it and I'm telling everyone to read this!!
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  • From ANON - kristal on December 12, 2006
    that chapter was sooooooooo hot i would love to read more i can't get enough of this story can't wait to read the next chapters.please don't let that be the end.
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  • From ANON - reader on December 12, 2006
    i really enjoy reading this story. I like the reluctance in their attraction, but by this point I feel like Draco trying to kidnap or kill harry with the Black library is no longer feasible. The major conflict now should be Draco and Harry trying to find a counterspell, but not wanting to lose the pleasure their connection brings.
    Others may disagree and prefer the violent storyline, but given the sensitivity and love present in the sex scenes, I feel that their relationship has evolved too much to maintain the violent hatred of their pre-relationship life.

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  • From ANON - thrnbrooke on December 12, 2006
    So need chapter 13! Has the bond married them? Just what kind of bond did Draco actually do? Must have more!
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 12, 2006
    delete away!~

    Flames should be stompped out!

    besides i think the story is pretty cool!
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  • From ANON - KitKat on December 11, 2006
    Let me guess someone didn't like the slash and said something about it even though there where warnings? *sigh* I hate it when people do that. Anway just ignore that person I think your doing just lovely so far. Keep up the good work. If someone flames again just remember this even if someone writes something good or does something good or helps there will always be a critic. But please don't stop the story there are still people like me waiting for another chapter :D bye!
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  • From ANON - ochibi-chwan on December 11, 2006
    I LOVE IT! This is !possessive draco at its best! and also submissive harry at his best also! heh, and the smut is better than good! Don't worry about the flames! They're just jealous that they can't write the yummy smexiness fics that you write! (see the unashamed flattering? wink wink!! but then again, it's not flattery if its true!) lol, i love the story a lot, can't wait to read more!
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  • From ANON - Amina on December 11, 2006
    Please keep writing ^^
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  • From ANON - theTigersFire on December 11, 2006
    i love this story...you are forbidde3n to stop writing it until it is completed...or if you do stop...at least send it to me...*insert big puppy-dog eyes here*....please....honestly i wasn't to fond of how it started...but i like where it's going...keep up the good work ;)
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  • From SlashySnitch on December 11, 2006
    GREAT! AHHHH! Finally, some smut...Though, I'm not one to talk...it took me what? 17, 18 LONG chapters to get to the smut between Harry and Draco in 'Picking Wildflowers'. I look forward to your next update!

    Slashy Snitch
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  • From ANON - Lissa on December 11, 2006
    What flames... it's like mommy always said... "they're just jealous"
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