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Reviews for Pretty Prey

By : kristashadow
  • From ANON - dark_samira on December 11, 2006
    Hi, I've just started reading your fic today, and I find it so good!
    I'm pleased with the twist (?is the word making any sense?) you made happen in Draco's behaviour: I can't stand fluffy-dracos but cannot even bear an overly evil dracos too, I mean how am I supposed to want a bastard-draco to get with poor-little-harry?
    Ok maybe some chapters are a bit too short, and sometimes there are some silly mistakes, but who am I to judge?
    All I know is that I just had a sort of little cli..x just reading the last chapter, and now I feel all flustered, and I'm at work dammit!
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 11, 2006
    who would flame you, you're awesome!

    I loved this chapter they got their sexin on :)

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  • From ANON - thuyhy on December 11, 2006
    Mmmmm don't misunderstand me , I said I love you because you write this story LOL
    They love each other LOL I like this
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  • From ANON - momoko on December 11, 2006
    I like it
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  • From ANON - Anyanka on December 11, 2006
    that chapter was great, really!!! can't wait to see Harry's reaction
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  • From ANON - vibora on December 11, 2006
    *drools* awesome chap! i. love. this. fic. it makes me all happy inside! ^_^ update soon!
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  • From ANON - Yana on December 11, 2006
    cool chapter
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  • From ANON - Malin on December 11, 2006
    Love u for updating so often! A few grammar mistakes, but nothing too big. Longer chapters would be nice, of course, but i'd rather have the quick updates. Seems to me like harry's gonna hate draco forever for what he did. Hope not...
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  • From ANON - Varjo on December 11, 2006
    Good going with the story. It's really good, one that I like immensely. I like these kind of stories, where Herm, Ron Dumbie are somekind of badies. But, keep up the good work. I want an update soon. ;)
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  • From ANON - demon0 on December 11, 2006
    hey i would give you words of advice if i saw any thing but usually i don't notice it so i love just reading yep my mind atomaticaly corrects any thing so i can't go and tell someone hey in paraghaph 2 line 3 i did'nt know if you mean me ,he ,she ,they or ,it sigh that would annoy me if i went on and on about stuff like that when i can't write that well myself so iam in no way someone to judge by the way i like your story i rarely review and yours is the only one i have been constant with go you that means i really like this story or you put a spell on your story so people must reviewit like mind less zombies happy but still mindless zombies but hey that's ok with me i like being a zombie... WTF how the hell did i start talking about that stuff wow iam werid please write more soon was all i relly was going to say but my mind just didn't stop for that so you got the thing about zombies and lots of other things as well so iam going to stop now ^_^ or am i *evil laughter* coughs and dies I am OKAY REALLY
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  • From ANON - madlodger on December 11, 2006
    CHAPTER 12
    'Harry could barely make out anything except the feeling of bliss and liquid silk wrapping itself around his naked body.'
    That was a poetry in prose, very nice, indeed.
    I enjoy this story a lot, top Draco rules. He did screw up with the spell somehow, I am sure of that:)

    Good job, krista_shadow.

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  • From ANON - Moyima on December 11, 2006
    Wow. That was intense. *shivers* Okay-- now you've set a bar for yourself! One thing that I really like about this fic is that I can see you improving your writing in leaps and bounds. Great work. Keep moving up!
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  • From dropedonmyhead on December 11, 2006
    *flames* with passion; Haha! Really though I'm liking the story so far, truly. It's very different from most out there, very original and I'm loving every word!
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  • From ANON - Kireania on December 10, 2006
    WHO HAS FLAMED THEE. I SHALL AVENGE YOU AND YOUR HONOR... how dare people flame such a wonderful story. I love this chapter cause its so sweaty and sweet. Betcha a buck that they wake up and scream at each other like bloody murder and try to act like nothing happened. I wonder is this going to be like they are soulmates and that's what happened to the bond magick? But once again I hope you really won't let the flaming idiots get you down you obviously have a lot of support from others including myself. Never give up!!! I mean seriouly if you give then what about THE GREAT EIGHT...how would he feel...most likely lonely...and don't forget about the boys cause i swear they're getting the best that they have had in a while. Well i hope there are no more flames and that your writing goes smoothly.



    Ja ne
    Kireania
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  • From ANON - rabidsqurl on December 10, 2006
    I'm very much enjoying the story...but I'm wondering what happens to you between your author's notes and your story. Your writing style changes so much that it almost doesn't seem as though it's you writing it. >
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